FF 'Faramosh' by Yumna and Zen (Part-3 on pg 16) - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
will b waiting take yr time:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Yumna and Zen fantastic dear...read both the parts and the intro and already love Ronit in it..I hope I can imagine him as Ronit Roy...love that guy...sigh...
Lovely start intriguing indeed...
Can't wait to read more from you both...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Dish-thanks! And yes ShaNak meet in the next part! As in they've already met but you get to read them meet😃

@Rida-Thank you! :) And aur kitnay surprises chahiye woman?Aren't two enough?😛

@Purvi-thanks! Haha yes another.But ab none in the next part😊
Oh and Happy Birthday!!!

@Ammu-thanks! And what is this usual stuff.Speaking from experience, are we?😛😆

@Christmas-Thank you for liking it so far! Umm btw-what is your name?😊

@Milli-Errrm?Did you like our words that much??😆

@Kari-Haha thanks! TUm tou bas marti raho all over the place😛

@Shriya-Thanks! And thats dears-plural mein😃

@Krishna Di-Thank you so much! *hugs*

@All those who pressed like-Thank you! Please keep reading!

@All those who mentioned Ronit Roy-Who the heck is he now??😕
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART-3


'Khanak! uth jao yaar! Woh log half an hour mein aanay walay hein!' Anvesha shook Khanak, trying to wake her up.

Khanak simply turned the other way, still asleep.

'Please yaar! Aaj tou normal logon ki tarah behave karo please. bus utho ab! Mein already late ho rahi hoon. Meray paas tumhe uthanay ke liye fazul time nahi hai!'

Khanak mumbled in her sleep and dug deeper into the sheets.

'Khanak! Mummy mujhe maarein gi aur tumhe bhi! UTH JAO NA!'

'Uth gayi hoon yaar! Tum chalo. i am coming.' Khanak mumbled as she stirred.

Anvesha gave a last shake to Khanak and left the room.

Half an hour later the maid entered, only to find a sleeping form on the bed.

'Khanak didi! Woh mehman aa gaye hein! bua ji keh rahi hain ke aap jaldi se neeche aa jaein!'
There was no response.

'Khanak didi uth jaiye!' the maid repeated at a louder pitch, timidly shaking Khanak.

Khanak heard someone call her name. Her head hurt and all she wanted to do was sleep sleep. She muttered a 'I'm coming!', put the pillow over her head and went back to sleep.

The maid shrugged helplessly, then decided to call someone better qualified for the job.

Kavi entered the room in time to see Khanak shutting off the alarm on her cell phone without even waking up. Khanak di could shut off alarms and hold semi conversations while still asleep. Waking her up was like waking the proverbial dead, he thought with a grin. He went to the bathroom, filled a can with water and came back and poured it over her face after removing the pillow in the way. Khanak woke up, coughing and sputtering.

'W..whatt th..the heckkk was that?!'
She wiped her face with her hands, saw Kavi standing there, doubled over with laughter and shot off of the bed, with murder in her eyes.

'Kavi...idiot, ullu ke... tumhe tu mein...'

Kavi hastily cut her off with a 'Mujhe tou baad mein dekhiye ga! Abhi tou bari mummy, Mom aur Bua aap ko dekhein gi! Anvesha Di ki in-laws ko aye huay kaafi deyr ho gai hai aur aap abhi tak so rahi ho! shaan jeej bhi pooch chuke hein.'

The cell phone on her alarm rang again before she could say anything. She picked it up, looked at the time and softly cursed everyone to hell and back again.

'Aati hoon! Tum jao and tell mummy ke mein aa rahi hoon! 10 minutes mein!'

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As Khanak slowly descended the stairs, she saw the living room was filled with women. Her mom and chachi were serving cold drinks to the guests. Anvesha was seated between Shantam's youngest aunt and her two daughters, listening with a blank face to their chatter.

'Yeh to sach mein poore khandaan ko hi bulaa liya hai. Ab sab se individually milun kya.'

She suddenly started feeling awkward. Guilty and ashamed of arriving like a guest at the dinner.

'Jaldi uth jana chahiye tha yaar.' She said to herself.

'Hello aunty.' She went forward and greeted Shaan's mom, who in turn kissed her cheek lightly and inquired about her exam, then added jokingly, 'Humein laga ke aaj tumse mulaqat nahi hogi.'

Khanak knew that she meant it in good humor but couldn't help feeling a bit embarrassed. Before she could come up with an answer, her mother spoke up;

'Woh iska paper tha na aaj. Tou thak gayi thi. Aate hee so gayi. Poori raat tou padhti hai isliye.' Though not before giving her daughter a small glare.

Khanak quickly said a collective namaste to all the rest of the ladies seated there and turned to Shaan's mom again.

'Aunty, Shantam aaye hein?' kahan hein? aur uncle?

'Haan beta woh drawing room mein betha hai.'

'Oh acha.Mein unn se mil ker aati hoon!'


She entered the room filled with gents. Her father, chacoo, Shaan's dad and his uncles sat on one side of the room while the younger generation sat on the sofas opposite the door, Shantam and Kavi amongst them, busy chatting with each other. He was surrounded by a lot of his male cousins. Khanak hesitantly made her way towards him. As she neared him, Shaan looked up and saw her. His face broke into a warm smile and he got up to greet her.

'Hello!' Kanyaka smiled at Shaan.

'Hello! Kya haal hai janab?'

'Bilkul theek! Aap kaise hain? Please baithye na!'

'ek dum theek thak!...haan...aao tum bhi baitho.'

'Nahi aap baithein. I have to go help with dinner. Already entry late di hai. Abhi double hisaab chukana hai mummy aur Bua ko...aur Anvi ko bhi. Aap ke welcome mein itni late jo ho gayi mein!'

Shaan laughed.
'Waise itni late kyun ho gai?Hum tou kab se aye huey hain!'

'Jee woh aaj exam de ker ayi thi na. Phir ghoday, gadhay, sab bech ker so gayi.Upar se uthnay per no tea, no coffee. Mooh per paani splash ker ke finally thoda hosh mein ayi.'

'Gosh! Aap ko bhi uthnay mein itni mushkil hoti hai?' Shaan's cousin Summet cut in with a smile.
Khanak turned to him and made a face.

'Are you kidding me? Mein ek dafa so jaoon tou mujhe uthana kisi miracle se kum nahi hai! Woh tou apni favourite cousin ke 'special someone' ke liye hum ye bhi kernay ko tayyar hain!'

Khanak turned toward Shaan and said dramatically.

Shaan rolled his eyes reflexively, remembered where he was and who he was talking to, and re-arranged his expression into a polite smile.

Khanak laughed at his attempt to be 'politically correct' then mumbled a 'See ya!' to Shaan and Sumeet as she heard Bua call her name and hurried towards the kitchen.

Shaan watched her go with an amused expression whereas Sumeet watched her departure with interest.

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'Okay. Seriously. You need to tell your MIL NOW to stop introducing me to random aunties from your sasural!'

'What-'

'And Bua is encouraging her, which is no surprise of course considering ke woh mujhse kitna 'pyaar' karti hein!'

'Can you please calm down for a second? Khanak, ladkiyon ka sab poochte hein. What's the big deal?'

'Big deal? Big deal yeh hai ke Shaan ki mausi apne baite ko bula kar meri taraf ishaara karke kuch keh rahi theen! Sumeet, Puneet, whatever his name is...anyways the point is...how dare she?!'

'Khanak aaram say bolo! Sun lein gi woh. Aur please mere sar mein dard hai, so stop being so hyper!'

'What is wrong with you? Sar mein dard hai. Aaj tu tumhare sar ka dard theek ho jana chahiye...Suno mulaqaat arrange karoon?!' Khanak asked mischievously.

'Koi zaroorat nahi hai!'

'aye haye! Dil mein tu laddoo phoot rahe hein liken...'

'I am serious Khanak! Please. Kaha na koi zaroorat nahi hai. It's a family dinner aur...'

'Kya hua hai yaar? Why are you so-'

'Khanak! Bache please guests ko poocho zara. Dekho sab ko cold drinks milli hein k nahi. Jao Shantam ko serve karo, poocho kuch chahiye...'

'Jee acha Chachi!' Khanak turned back to Anvesha. 'Tumhein tou mein baad mein dekhti hoon. Nakhre khatam hee nahi ho rahay madam ke!'

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'Shaan Jeej. Do you need anything?'

'No thanks. I'm fine.' Shaan smiled. 'Arey Khanak! I forgot to ask, exams kaise ho rahe hein?'

'Don't ask! Bus ho rahe hein...'

'Sorry yaar! Hamari wajah se tumhein...'

'Hamaaariii?! Kya baat hai! Abhi se hamari! so sweet. Waise the other half of your hamari is close by...'

'Jee pata hai mujhe. Thank you! Waise bahut hee bekaar saali ho. Ek meeting bhi arrange nahi kerwa sakti?'

'Mein tou karwa rahi thi lekin...Patience jeej! Shaadi hai na within a week. Abhi meeting ho gayi tu saara charm khatam ho jaye ga!'

'Yeah. Whatever. Tum kisi kaam ki nahi! Dekh lena, tunhara time bhi aaye ga. Phir mujhse koi help expect mat kerna!'

Kanyaka suddenly stopped smiling. Mera time? She thought. And despite all her best efforts, Ronit Sir's shadow joined her in that crowded room. Suddenly it became hard for her to breathe.

Shaan was surprised to see her face turn pale. Suddenly it looked like she was miles away.

'Hello? Kya hua? I was just messing around with you! Itna dil pe mat lo. Relax, khoob meeting karwaon ga aap ki aur aap ke unn ki!'

Khanak faked a smile and reached for a glass of water. Her gaze fell on Shaan's shoes. Something about them struck her. Did he own a similar pair? She was quite sure he had worn them to class once.

'Umm Khanak? Are you okay?Sorry. I have a bad sense of humor!'

Khanak shook herself out of her reverie and smiled again. A soft smile. A sad smile.

'Kuch nahi Jeej! I just remembered something. Uh...I need to go get something from the kitchen. Abhi aati hoon!'

Shaan looked on puzzled as he remembered her smile. It had been so different. For some reason, it made him sad too.


Edited by zennnn - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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kya haal hai janab☺️


loved it...mast hai as yr previous patrt...do keep uploading soon re i love to read it:)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

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kya haal hai janab☺️


loved it...mast hai as yr previous patrt...do keep uploading soon re i love to read it:)



kari! don't be a creep! khanak ka bro-in-law hai woh! 😲 LOL!
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Posted: 14 years ago
lmao i loved d dialogue im nt a creep(((((((((( u take mye so wrong katti:((((((

btw i loved it its so cute:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
yummy and zenny what is this i had not seen this one soory gals i should definately read it and give my two cents later xxx
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Originally posted by: rafia 24

yummy and zenny what is this i had not seen this one soory gals i should definately read it and give my two cents later xxx




hey rafia! thanks bud! the index is on page 1. would love to read your take on the first three parts! :D
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cool i will make this my bedtime reading for tonight and will respond tomz x

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