FF- Katra Katra- Part 25-141, Pt 26-145, Pt 27-148

Yasharanrocks

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Posted: 14 years ago

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congrats 4 century.update gurinchi amani chappali.u rock.awesme update😍

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purvi08

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Posted: 14 years ago

#802

wow saaz di

loved it☺️👏

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destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

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saaz awesome faint...faint...faint.. after reading the last line (kiss)😊

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tvrasika

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Amazing scenes Saaaz. Amazing😊

Just wondering why they didn't talk abt what Shreela said, abt Khanak moving out of Shaan's room. They r postponing difficult issues, as much as they can, I suppose...

Btw, this Amit guy, what's the story abt him? He and Shaan hav some history?

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Sonali

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Posted: 14 years ago

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that was hot! keep up the great work Saaz!

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purvimeh

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: lghosh
Vandu, DJ hum sab ek thali ke chatte batte hai...we will think alike!!! 😆
Vandu that 'reh jao' had a special significance for me! That moment in Dr. Shreela's office kind of unnerved them both, they didn't talk about it, discussed or reacted to each other but its nevertheless at the back of their mind. I feel that earnest request from him meant more than her mere leaving him for lunch, he wants her in & around him all the time! That is why in that insecurity of the moment he took the dupatta in his bag...must be going in his mind 'what if she has to leave, I won't see her humming like this in my bathroom, won't see her stuff lying around in my room, won't see or feel her all around me, so atleast let me retain a keepsake of her's to capture this feeling & moment'!!

I am thinking this but will wait for Saazy's clarification!

May be she will say he didn't have such a long foresight, it was a moment of impulse! Dekhte hai 'medam jee' kya bolti hai! 😃

DJ thank u maam for the compliments. Nahi re baad mein maine jab tere comments pare toh yehi laga ki bekaar mein maine itna kuch likha, short cut mein 'ditto' likh deti toh mehnat kam ho jaata! 😃

Shals thanks for the compliments y'day!! Am honored!! 😳

Vandu tu abhi bhi jaagi hai?? Kyun phir se nightmare?? 😉😆

Lana.. Fantastically Put am not doing my POV since u have done it to the T.. But u missed out the whole dupatta scene in the bus.. 🤔That was a major significance that lead to the whole "Stay" I mean it all started there.. Ofcourse what happen un -nerved them but the whole the duppta on Shaan's leg and & him holding on to it was very much like He wants to hold on to her does not want to let her go... and she sees that silent jesture to understand his feelings & what he might be thinking...

Another Thing that strikes is also maybe she wanted to hear from him ... She knows Shaan may not tell her and hence she ask him.. do u want me stay.. 😳

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dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Oh My God ... kya tha ye!

Loved both the parts ... his friends find out something has happened and they both are blushing. 😳 The teasing part was very well written, so realistic...bichara shaan,.😳

2nd part was sad actually, Dr Shreela ki tho ...😡

I still did not quite get it ... why should they stay separate. 😲

I can understand she cannot stay with him as he is a student. But there is a family quarter available for married people na, why can't she not get a that one and move in with her husband there???

kuch karo ... aise juda mat karo in dono ko yaar ...😭 2:00 am ka good morning kkaise hoga .. both will not be able to sleep re... uska project tho ekdum thapp ho jayega ... due to lack of sleep ... he is the star na ... 😉

But advantage will be the college and GF/BF wala feeling 😳 ... are u by any chance taking inspiration from the serial ??? just kidding ... 😆

chalo abhi dusra update de do jaldi ... are they really separating??? pls say no ..

~Cheers,
Dish

Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago

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Lana Ghosh

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Lana.. Fantastically Put am not doing my POV since u have done it to the T.. But u missed out the whole dupatta scene in the bus.. 🤔That was a major significance that lead to the whole "Stay" I mean it all started there.. Ofcourse what happen un -nerved them but the whole the duppta on Shaan's leg and & him holding on to it was very much like He wants to hold on to her does not want to let her go... and she sees that silent jesture to understand his feelings & what he might be thinking...

Another Thing that strikes is also maybe she wanted to hear from him ... She knows Shaan may not tell her and hence she ask him.. do u want me stay.. 😳

Purvi hum dono shayad kumbh mele mein bichhre huye behena hai!! 😃 Except for the memory part!! 😒 U won't believe mera thesis itni lambi ho jaati hai ki I try to restrict it in some way & issi ke chakkar mein main bhool bhi jaati hoon.

And when I read the update I immediately noticed these minute details & u know these subtle instances takes me to the supreme most highs & I note it mentally as well but by the end when I reach the climax it comepletely takes over me & I forget to mention the earlier instances!! Me & my memory, have to start taking Brainolia!! 😔

Thanks Purvi for pointing these instances out, yep definitely a major part that led to it all! When I read the bus dupatta incident I was totally spellbound but by the end the kiss was so beautiful that I was completely smitten by it!! My bad!!

About Khanak's asking him I don't think she meant it in an overall sense, she asked about going out to lunch only. She came back seeing him disappointed but his 'reh jao Khanak' had a more long term appeal & request, he meant for her to stay with him forever!! This is what I feel but lets see what Saazy says.

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purvimeh

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Purvi hum dono shayad kumbh mele mein bichhre huye behena hai!! 😃 Except for the memory part!! 😒 U won't believe mera thesis itni lambi ho jaati hai ki I try to restrict it in some way & issi ke chakkar mein main bhool bhi jaati hoon.

And when I read the update I immediately noticed these minute details & u know these subtle instances takes me to the supreme most highs & I note it mentally as well but by the end when I reach the climax it comepletely takes over me & I forget to mention the earlier instances!! Me & my memory, have to start taking Brainolia!! 😔

Thanks Purvi for pointing these instances out, yep definitely a major part that led to it all! When I read the bus dupatta incident I was totally spellbound but by the end the kiss was so beautiful that I was completely smitten by it!! My bad!!

About Khanak's asking him I don't think she meant it in an overall sense, she asked about going out to lunch only. She came back seeing him disappointed but his 'reh jao Khanak' had a more long term appeal & request, he meant for her to stay with him forever!! This is what I feel but lets see what Saazy says.

Hi5* Lana...Moi too think the same Lana... 😃 Sometimes I wonder why didn't we meet earlier 😃! better late than never... and Silly Girl ur still sharper than me.. So no Brainolia... I figured that Jesture over took you so pointed it..! in Anycase... but u made the sense ! & Bingo Once again..ave to give to Saazy... for such sublte insistance that just takes us to another level.. 😉

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vidisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#810

Ok...so i just read all the parts...and i m just speechless...OMG this is so awsome...i just love every part of this ff well except suraj dying but still plz continue soon...and if u Pm please pm me for sure..cant wait till u update...

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