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Aussiegal

@Aussiegal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

Manita - awesome writing honey. Can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon...

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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

yaar I did not know u hve updated I read the last two parts ..Awesome😊U ahve a fantastic imagination keep rocking😊

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saaaz

@saaaz

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Haila...you started a new one???

what does this mean???!!! you have abandoned the one you were to restart..before Tres???

WHAT THE??!!!!!!

Nahiii

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#54

Okay finally I am able to descend from cloud infinity and I sigh...

Her dilemma... true as it would be befitting any normal.. aam ladki. Yes she is right in what she does, in asking herself those questions... why should she trust her heart... why does it behave so stangely... why why why why whywhywhy... head spins to Khanak lol is one plaudable woman... for holding fort her strength...

Shaan.. SK... he is simply too much... He is not from this earth and if he is.. then God help us all.. of course Khanak more than us... as his following her, trying to make her see the point that he is making.. to her as well as to himself probably that this is love...

And as I read this update only one song comes to my heart... which is so so dear to me again...

Dilbar mere, Kab tak mujhe,

Aise hi tadpaaoge,

Main aag dil mein lagaa doonga woh,

Ke pal mein pighal jaaoge...

Ek din aayegaa.. pyaar ho jayegaa...

Main aag dil mein lagaa doongaa woh,

Ke pal mein pighal jaaoge...

sigh.. it is so intriguing their rapport with each other, there is a strain yet there is this camaraderie... a comfort that keeps them tied together.. that peace they feel within when they are with each oher as well as they feel the storm in between them which blow their orderly life to titters...

Sigh am loving this one so much...

Dil se mila jo dil to mehekne lagoge..

tum meri baahon mein aake behekne lagoge...

Ufff... Beautiful... their kiss in the end.. like they w=did not want to but were forced by an unknown force... and then her seeing the respect in the action where he withdrew.. only speaks millions...

Girl... just mind blowing.. take a bow lady...👏

Edited by jparker - 14 years ago

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

Hi Manita 😊
I love this FF Mere Rang Mein ❤️
I have read part 1 and 2 but could not post earlier just read part 3 now i loved it simply superb 👏
I don't know how to praise ur writing you are awesome 🤗
This FF is so special when i read it as OS i really wanted u to continue as FF thanks for doing so 😃
I am loving it 😃
Love ur writing love both the FF of yours its really special ❤️
Thanks for writing to us 😃
Keep writing whenever get time 😊

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-Simple-

@-Simple-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Aaah !!

You started it as an FF !!

Will PM soon !!

PAkka !!!

Edit: IF shortens my 'aaahs'

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Bravehearts

@Bravehearts

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

hiyaa mani di it was beautiful the kiss u defind it so very well her first evre kiss it was written so good i lost in it...he really loves her and care fr her she too but she nt letting hre feeling out nw thy kissed tooo lets see wahts nw kahnak will do😍update soon plz