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karishma

@shanakyasharan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#201

😳maarne ka iraada hai😍

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Wow mani I'm speechless I shall give my two cents in this part and the rest later, I don't know how you do it buy everytime I read an update I have butterflies and I feel like I'm experiencing the rollercoaster of emotions the two are experiencing

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#203

hei mani,

i didnt expect an update this soon..so i didnt see to it before i slept..but early in the morning i see an update..

haila...loved it mani..

superb..

so u made shanak stay back together for that night..

thanks for that..

n shanak in rain...😍😍😍😍

n she kissed him..☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

maar dala mani...

this post is to drool over shanak..

i'll leave comments later mani..

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christmas

@christmas

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#204

this was even better than hoping that she confesses before they reach mumbai...😍

i hope they just keep getting lost like this😍

his care and pain for her is unreal. just what she needs in her life. makes you want to just give her a hug.

love love lovedd it!

thank you!

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Oye Hoye !!!!

kya baat hain ,,,, lagatar updates aa rahe hain ,... good going !!

but not one for trespro ... Hpmh!!!
pata nathi kyu ...that's my first FF love of Shanak shayad ... waiting ... aaj hoga na update... I read ur post saying u will have time then u will update.

About this last update ...
Hot is a word that I never use ... pata nahi meri decency mujhe allow nahi karti ... but cannot think of any other word ... the way they are attracted is out of the world ... but I am not a strong believer of physical attraction, but then there is a hint of something more emotional as Shaan is changing his ways for her, is telling her stuff he never would tell others ... she is falling for him, really zapped by him, but I think still its more physical ... pata nahi, I may be wrong ...

Lets see how you take it forward ... waiting for next update, but first trespro dena yaar... bahot din ho gaye ...

~Cheers,
Dish

Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago

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khushi

@khush1432

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

WOW Mani di... Awesome update...

Baarish and Shanak 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Maar dala...

Thanks a million for ur lovely update...

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preiti

@preiti

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Wow Manita.An update and so quickly.Thanks,It was awesome and now my heart's beating faster ❤️too while i read the story.Too good..Keep Updating.Hope it would be a never ending story of Love and Romance.❤️

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Shanaksansar

@Shanaksansar

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#208

hi Manita,

This is the first time am writing here...I love your Tres...that's what got me hooked on to your style of writing. With MRM you have a completely different Shaan and Khanak, am so falling in love with them.

Especially since monsoons are my favorite, I don't know why but sohte huwon ko bhi jaga deta hain. That is where Khanak finally opens herself completely and that probably explains the kiss. It was spontaneous and the walls that she had built around her due to her tumultuous childhood finally collapsed. We all have our own demons and it needs a strong push from the outside to let yourself go.

It is changing Shaan too. From being a completely carefree and someone who has always been shy of commitments he is now metamorphised to a loving and caring individual. That is what love does to you. You look beyond the physical aspects and are on a totally different level which often is hard to explain.

Look forward to see the next step in their blooming relationship.