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Roshni

@Roshni_M

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#221

oh god... im missing so much... i was just absent for two days and there are two updates...

u wont believe... i read the 7th part half and i was like i missing sumthing coz last tym i read was dat scorpio in khanak's back and then in part 7 direct highway... so went back to check and i saw i missed such a big update... and finally read both parts... phew...

dat insect on khanak's back was scorpio... haila...😲😲😲😲😲

but good it was nt poisonous...

shanak alone in shaan's audi... aray i saw dat car today... when i saw dat it just reminded me of u... its a sexy car...

finally khanak tuk a step and kissed shaan... wow!!!!!!! she is a bold girl...😳

loved the update sooo much di...

waiting for the next part... cont sooonnn...

and i guess its gonna be hooottt...

i mean it shud be hooottt...😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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KrazEee

@KrazEee

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#222

Every part you write leaves me craving for more...

Sorry I can't comment on every part...But I do read it whenever I get time...

loved the slap 😆 bechara Shaan got slapped again...Its good Khanak heard everything...I was too smiling with khanak...

Small talk by the pillar was cute...This Shaan is so caring when it comes to her...it was nice of Shaan to help with the insect...which was a scorpion 😲

Both are in pain ...

glad to see everyone left and loved how he convinced her to travel with him...here I was hoping it'll be a long trip and in next part I see it is!...love you for this! 😃

They are adorable!...totally in love with this Shaan...He was scared she'll shout at him 😆 bechara is so misunderstood by the world na...

Last part! hayeee! 😳 Finally Khanak 😍 Don't let Shaan leave her now!!

I wonder if Khanak will finally confess...Waiting anxiously for the next update

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Krithika

@k.krithika

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#223

Wow Manita awesome part Rain,Shanak and Kiss very romantic loved it 😍 ❤️

Thank u for the lovely part 🤗

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#224

oho..mani awesum yaar..read all last 3 parts...so good...

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#225

hei mani,
i took enough time to write my comments..there u go..
the way khanak observed SK..u can make us crazy with just the words u know..i was waiting for khanak to put her hand around SK's neck..n there u gave the reason for her to do that..till that SK didnt notice her but her touch made him aware abt the closeness..the liked these "he still couldn't figure out that out of these what attracted him the most."
LOL!!!SK got confused with her look..(didnt u urself say her that she didnt know wat she want..i thought u said that meaningfully..is it not the case SK..r u still clueless abt her looking at u like that..)
khanak u r beyond the point of no return with SK.."She still had her hands around his neck and looked at his eyes hopelessly..."(wat r u trying to read in his eyes..haan..)
so u know wat she is going thru..pls SK help her out in this..i loved this mani.."it wasn't only the scorpion sting pain that was common to them..there was much more !!!!!"
his indecisiveness over to kiss her r not..n khanak readying for the kiss..ohho..mani..y did u make the SUVs to pass now..
both of them questioning n answering to themselves about hteir feelings..(i really want to lock them up in a room till they sort out things between them..)
" He held the end of the stole in his left hand and felt the fabric as if touching her through it and lifted it to smell it, before leaving it where it was." hay hay!!!.
that was so sweet of SK to let her know that he don't know where they are..n his cautiousness as he was not sure how will she respond to that..lovely mani..
(by the way when she said "It will take some time to get used to 'K'...I'm used to people calling me Khanak..." so she wishes to get used to "K" haan..)
khanak really took it cool.."You mean..you took a wrong route and did not realize?" she even convinced him for that.."Even smart people do it sometimes..it happens." i love her for giving this minimum comfort for SK now..as he was really nervous abt how will she respond to it..
s i do accept this "But, it is bad manners to sleep when someone is driving on the highway."
her concern for him spilling out unintentionally..really that was so sweet of him to let her know y he was upset.."I thought... that you might think...that I did it purposefully." her response to that was nice.."I don't think 'so' low of you.".their convo abt khanak thinking abt him was so cute..
SK's concern for K was well said "Don't worry K...I'll not let anything bad happen to you."
y did he press the tender nerve by talking like that abt her family..she could've felt bad na?his reasoning abt love n luck..but wat to do..khanak doesnt have anyone to fit in ur description..however mamaji n divya care for her..
yayyy!!!(jumping up n down as they r to spend the night at the rest house..)things happening in flashback mode in his head..(i too joined him there..dont think abt the missed kiss SK..u wont be able to control urself..)
shank in rain!!!!😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍haila...wonderful moment..both of them lost in each other..n this is the moment..khanak..way to go girl..
"Before she curled her hands around his neck...and kissed him... stunning him back in bargain !!!" (SK was trying a lot to control his feelings but u broke all that with this kiss..)
continue soon mani..🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#226

Where are you re??

Update kar naa !!

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#227

Originally posted by: togepe30
Where are you re??
Update kar naa !!

hahaha...ulta chor kotwal ko daante...tune apna ff update kiya kya?

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#228

Originally posted by: Deepali88
hahaha...ulta chor kotwal ko daante...tune apna ff update kiya kya?

What FF??

I havent written FF's !!

Wo OS tha...and OS's are one shots...I ended it there only !!!

I dont write FF's because I cannot write in continuity !!

Edited by togepe30 - 14 years ago

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: togepe30

What FF??

I havent written FF's !!

Wo OS tha...and OS's are one shots...I ended it there only !!!

I dont write FF's because I cannot write in continuity !!

Ok Than continuios your One Shot OS😉😉