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Hey mani a very lovely update

really after a long time

i really missed ur FF a lot i miss these shanak

when r u updating the next part

Hey mani Di

Thanks a ton for updating…….really waiting for it.🤗 🤗 I have read all the previous parts thrice in these last manth. Well today your long long update is like a treat to me. Thank u. well now to I am going to make a long camment as I am super duper excited after redaing the update ( So don't make face while reading it ………..aur shanty se jel lena warna katti ).😡

Well coming back to the update……loved the start. Isssh... I was so excieted when Shaan comes towards khanak. Love their exchange of words & I just love shaan & his line is super cute when he say "I hate it when you punish this poor lip for every silly act of yours ……..dare if you do it anymore." Yaar these two can fight on any thing & every thing but the best part is both immediately regrates their behaviour & their sweet innocent apologies always makes me happy & excited.😃

Hey even I was thinking abt what is their in the bag?????😕 I actually thought there is something which she is gonna used it for her Apology. Again they had fight in the car. But I seriously loved their convo it was like Ek Sawaal Do Do Jawaab.( He..he..he.) Awww……poor Shaan khanak says even monkey will look good if he will wear a White Shirt & Jeans. Shaan is actually regrating of being angry at her. Wanted to talk to her …….wanted to hug her ………as they both haven't spand quality time with each other since last 39 days. (poor shanak u know I feel like screaming ke akdu log khatam karo ye nautanki) But Khanak purposefully takes Rishabh's name …….ohhh I seriously jumped on my chair (my roommate actually scold me for behaving childish at midnight but I blackmail her saying that ab mein kuch hi din to hu yaha aur phir bhi tum log daatain ho mujhe……you know I got successful first she got sad & santy & than again showed me the fake anger & said …..Praj just stop reading these things you are getting Impossible day by day) well loved their fight. Khanak gave Shaan the dose of his own medicine by taking Rishabh's name. & there she is bang on in his irritation he confessed that he is actually fasting for khanak. Loved it when shaan says he is fasting for that chowkidaars wife who look afters khanaks chapplas.🤣 🤣 (fab answer) for me their car journey was full of fun. It's actually fun reading this update ( ooohhh……….i missed this FF badly).khanak is non stop chatter box & shaan completely love this about her & so are we.😳 😊

U know when khanak was about to ask him fthe secret behind Jay & Akshay asking them to be silent abt their relationship. But again phone rang ( yaar ab ye secret khol bhi do ya muhurt nikalwaye pandit se) Shaan is a shaitan baccha. Always throws tantrams at his family members Loved Khanak's thought process of camparing Jay & Shaan & she defines their friendship in that ( so sweet) ekksss……khanak gets emotional while thinking abt this. & shaan says she is bitten by "crying while smiling bug" 😊 he is damn cute yaar. Khanak gets excited abt hearing lock up ( khatarnaak hain ye bandi) haila mani di you are to full filmi baba……….Rishabh & Sonya meet coz of the car ki takkar ( hey that reminds me abt the John & priyanka's first meet in taxi no 9211) & here hammer do Samaaj sevak jud gaye unke Sukhi bhavishake sapne sanjone mein. Shaan actually says "that it is not difficult to make someone fall in love with you". I can so imagine khanak's reaction on this …………loved their convo & shaan's explanation..& there they fight again……( Oops I just don't know why I am getting exited abt their fights…..Di ur story is making me insane) 😆 😆

Haila Shaan & jay is Discussing abt someone iska matlab Jay is in Love & I am sure its Rags…….(So nayi entry …. *Taliya*). But why jay don't want khanak to know????? Or he himself wanted to tell her???? So Now Shaan maharaj is in Dharam Sankat whather to told her or not but loved his dicition of telling khanak ( atleast usi bahane hume bhi pata chalega warna ap to delay pe delay kiye ja rahe ho) Loved Shaan & Savita maa's convo……she actually loves him a lot & he truly respects her. Loved it when jay says that "he is not that 'seedha' that you think he is……" I can so imagine Shaan's expression when Maa inquired abt Khanak & her behaviour with him (chalo ek cheese confirmed after party update in next part shaan is at khansk's palce to have his fav Rajma Chawal)

Shaan is already on duty. I mean he already started praising Rishabh infrount of Soniya. (Matalab thaan li is bande ne dono ko milwaaneki) & yes Finally khanak comes. U described whole sence beautifully……….u are awesome. Khanak plays a trick & saari haldi aur kumkum shaan ki shirt par gira deti hain. Than she ask for the forgiveness in frount of everyone ( she is a champ yaar ) loved the way she demands for apology giving no space to escape shaan from her excellent trap. Shaan alos loves her technique & forgives her. ( hush …..finally) only Jay understands whole drama behinfd this Sorry. ab ayega party update padhane mein jyada mazaa, this means now shaan have to feed her dinner by his hands ( yiiipeee…..i am excited) 😉 😉

Oh,.,.ho ab khula Paper bag ka Raaz………..Khanak is a master planner. She reminds him that he has new shirt in his car by giving her excellent peace of presence of mind. Loved the last line. (it was super fandu yaar) ⭐️ Well sorry for the super long & Colourful comments ...actually i am damn exicted while posting it...thank u very much for the update.😳 😳

Thank u for the ling update………love u ……u are awesome.👏 👍🏼 👏 👍🏼 👏 👍🏼 👏 👍🏼

Waiting for the next one. 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️ 🤗 ❤️

Love U

Pranjal.

Lovely update Mani👏⭐️...Can't wait for the next part😊...

awesome update Manita Di loved it!

Hi Manita...lovely and looong update...thanx for restarting the FF...I'm a new member and this is my first post on ur thread...had started reading your FF, but mid way...before I could catchup with all the updates, found you had removed them...but got the gist of the story(would love to read the full thing though)...following thru the post read abt your loss...must've been very difficult time for you, been there so can understand your pain...may your MIL's soul rest in peace...time is the best healer as they say...pain subsides and comes forth in form of sweet memories...making one smile or cry.

Hey Mani Di... How r u ????

Gosh I m missing SHANAK terribly'. Thanks to ur FF I can still relate to them'

Thanks a million for update''.really waiting for it. Well ur update is always relief for me'. THANK YOU DI !!!!!!

Well coming back talking about ur update''.

It is simply awesome like ALWAYS'.. 👏👍🏼

Loved their Love- fights, cute nok-jhok'. ISHMART KHANAK and BURTHAL SHAAN' Deadly combination''.. (yeh dono toh ek din meri jaan nikal kar hi maanege)

And above all ur mind-blasting dialogues :

"I hate it when you punish this poor lip for every silly act of yours ''..dare if you do it anymore."

"Do you want me to prove ownership?"

she said, "I hope Rishabh comes'''"

"What????" he came out of his dreamland''...

(Awww''poor Shaan'. I just imagine his face expressions'. Lol)

"that it is not difficult to make someone fall in love with you".

I can so imagine khanak's face on this ''''loved shaan's explanation'.. man I think he is going to be dead' afterall Khanak se panage lekar kahan jaayega bechara''.

And lastly Khanak says sorry to him according to their Challenge'. SUPERB TARIKA YAAR!!!!! I m impressed'..

Now shaan will have to feed her' can't wait for next update!!!!!!

Thank u for the update '.

U are awesome...

Lots of lots of LOVE

Gunjan

Thanx for the update Mannu di!

you updated!...thank you!...really!
hope things are getting better your end.

love love lovedd the udpate!...these two are adorable...and funny...

ofcourse he fasted...and knew it! abt telling parents/abt jai..i am assuming its the doctor lady? lol...


thanks again!