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shiksha_03

@shiksha_03

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

it ws awesme i m happy dt atleast d gang members knw dt shaan & khanak share a stronger bond dan friendship & hpe dey realize wt dey feel abt each other also soon........................pls continue soon

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Imane just loved the update! keep up the great work!

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Imane

@accountband

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

@Ramani
Thank You dear for such an amazing comment...This is exactly the kind of feedback i look for as it reflects on what my readers are feeling...Okay so i know Adi could have continued his education on the side but with Khanak's university expense and all he just couldn't save up for himself. He also has concerns for Khanak's future in regards to marriage so he is also saving some for that...They lead a very simple/lower middle-classs type of life and i hope you can tell that through my diction...Sunil does bother me in my own fiction as well...LOL..Hopefully his character comes around in time...The story just kinda flowed with him and his stern nature, it was not intentional because even i love Sunil in RBO...Don't worry dear, Tara did take ShaNak's snaps...she is going to be a professional photographer and so she makes sure that she covers everything...LOL...umm what else...Yeah Shaantanu didn't reveal his last name to Adi, recall from part five when "He lied to the generous manager about his own past so that he wouldn't suspect of his background and what had happened with the relations that he held so dearly to his heart". Adi is totally unaware of Shaantanu's family and background and Shaantanu has no idea that Adi has gone to Mumbai to meet with "Khandelwal Group of Industries"... Also there will be some contact from Akshay's side soon...he won't let his brother go that easily...

@shiksha_03
Thank You so much for your feedback...Yup and the gang did figure that out after observing Khanak and Shaantanu's interaction with one another...I think it's cute that they are semi-oblivious to their own feelings but in due time they will establish their relationship...Thank You for taking the time out to read my story! I appreciate it a lot.

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Ramani

@RB81

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

hei imane,
thanks for clarifying things..
yes..i noticed that they r lower middle class family..but i had an idea that correspondence courses doesn't cost much..so i asked that..s he is such an responsible sweet bro..so his thoughts are always around his little sis khanak..
reg shaan's last name s now as u pointed it out i remembered..eagerly waiting for ur next update..
as far as this update i think most of them would not have noticed coz title was like prev one saying no pms..so ppl might hav thought it as the prev one if they dont remember the update no..so in that case include updated date..that might help..this is a suggestion..

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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

imane loved it dear..

but did u like the rock on track so much that u incorporated it WOW but u have done a fabulous job.

.and I just loved ramanis analysis land questions raised as well as ur satisfying answers ..lovely😊

I am feeling lazy to type ..so just one sentence 😆

u are superb..wanting to see khanak the lyricist in full swing😊

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Imane

@accountband

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Just PMed the usual readers...Can we please make a PM List...Just leave a comment with your user id so i cam compile a PM list...Press "like" on this post that way it's easier for me to quickly add you to the PM list...Thanks and sorry for the confusion if i caused any...😊
-Imane

Edited by imane568 - 14 years ago

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Another great update Imane👏⭐️.....

The stage is set for Aditya Bhaiya and Sunil Khandelwal's clash over ShaNak I guess....Glad both ShaNak's brothers are on good terms though....Loved the whole music pratice session and the sweet ShaNak moments😊....Very real and natural....The song was also a nice touch.....

Looking forward to the new part😃

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Priti

@Priti_Yasharan

Beginner

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

Hey Imane.....loved loved loved ur update.....❤️❤️❤️❤️.....Thanks for sendin PM.....plz add me to ur PM list...

ok...now for the comments...I love Sunil in RBO....but in KMK his attitude is completely ulta...think coz his character is sketched so....will wait for more updates on him....Felt bad for Adi bhaiya...but he is strong headed...not to worry bro.....

Shaan and Khanak ...our love birds...I could visualize the scene thru ur writing....wonderfully written...loved to see their bond getting stronger day by day....loved the concern and caring they show for each other..eagerly waiting for the D day
beautifully written scene on how Shaan sings , and the group joins...their interactions...playfulness..each n every thought put in so beautifully.......

LOVED THE SONG.....Thanks for adding the link...i hrd it a couple of times...good choice...

Once again....👏👏👏......plz update soooooooooooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnn...

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Simi

@simikr

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#89

Wow!!! Imane what a solid update!!! Kudos to another awesome job!! 👏⭐️⭐️

It difficult to comment on it because its absolutely wonderful!! Felt really awful the way Adi and Mr Raichand was treated by Sunil...as we all know education does not equal business acumen! And it's awful to treat anyone in that manner..hope Sunil learns that quickly!!

As for the song..just mindblowing!! Loved the way Shaan is getting drawn towards Khanak. Yr Khanak reminds me of RBO's Khanak..very sweet and addressing Shaan as ' Aap,' totally unlike mine! LOL Loved the friends trying out the song together..the details you've put in makes it very authentic..giving it atmosphere, and the song suits Shaan to a T!

Yes I guess I'm already on yr PM list!!😊

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angel_9

@angel_9

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Posted: 14 years ago

#90

Hey Imane................🤗

superb update loved it

awesome description...............Adi & Akshay both wanted that they join hands but Sunil didn't want that...............

the music practise amazing..............shan sang & khanak's lyrics...............lovely...............

loved the song...............never herd before...............but awesome....................its lovely its really suited the situation................

sorry 4 commenting late.............i am busy these days....................

thanks 4 the PM

continue soon...............

Edited by angel_9 - 14 years ago