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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#211

awesome update Aditee! loved it!

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#212

Aditee darling....I go missing for a week or more and I come back and see that you from part 3 or was it 4-5...are om part 10 D.....😆😆😆Wow....Will read all the parts and then comment.....😃😆

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#213

Aditee ummm did I say I don't care about the show?? Nope, let me rectify I said more than the show I came 1st here to check whether u updated or not, that says a lot. 😃 Ofcourse I care about the show, then went checked everything about it. 😃

Ok now to ur story! So the green eyed monster paid a visit & infact is doing 'tandaav nritya' on K's head! And I have to give u credit, unique & so innovative.........measuring side burns! I literally fell off my couch. 😆 What inane things girls say or does nowadays just to get their hands on a hunk like Shaan! Ahem! 😆 And the equally asinine squabble of theirs! 😆 👍🏼

Ok main teri sad kha rahi hoon mujhe maaloom hai par next update kab aayega?

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#214

loved it so much short but very very effective n i loved khansk like this
shes superb here

pls upload soon

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#215

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan
loved it so much short but very very effective n i loved khansk like this
shes superb here

pls upload soon

Karishma..congratulation for IF rockerz

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#216

awesum dear..but itna chhota...not fare...

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roadsidejunky

@roadsidejunkey

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#217

bahut chota tha....plz continue soon..

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#218

hey aditee................

wow..........wonderful update...............but it was short..............

girls r measuring shan's sideburns...........lol........

shan & khanak r again having...........verbal.......fight.............loved it.............

continue soon.............

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#219

'as if on cue, suddenly his head turns and their eyes meet before the wall of steel slides shut between them!'

Loving the way you have written this! On the surface, the elevator doors shutting just as their eyes meet locking them in, trapping them shut in a confined place.Deeper down, its so final and a testament to their relationship.Love how the few words convey so much.Excellent writing here!

(Also was imagining myself banging on elevator doors had they closed just when I saw their eyes meet!)

Liking the cat and mouse, liking the fact that they are not completely lost in each other but still lost in each other.Does that make sense?

The two teen girls-make me angry.Seriously. Insult to female intelligence😡

Love how they are helpless in the face of fate-just like the original ShaNak! People should just give in to destiny and what is meant to be. Ahem.