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okay. Now I see it.. sigh shall come back after reading it in a bit. edited:
Okay now first.. *clearing my throat* *wiping the brow*
That was verrrrrrryyyyy nice!
I see someone green in the face eyes everything.. aahh.. jealous now are we? And even possessive!? Hmm.. baba, now it cat and mouse game!
You know the expression on my face aditee is like the cat who gets to lick up all the cream.. Such a lovely tempting dessert who can no.
Serious notes : The way you have portrayed the understanding of khanak in Shaan's heart is mind blowing. Simple, no frivolous words, nothing out of the world flowery words.. just simply using a metaphor here and there and viola...
As for Khanak, I sometimes feel bad.. gosh so much pain she must have borne and can feel it even if you have not yet expressed it. So when you do get there, I am wondering what will it be... awesome for sure!!
But I know in my heart that Shaan will be there for her.
my heart still races with that last line.. and can imagine how her heart must have raced too...
"Khanak.. I will call you from now !!!!"
Wow.... 👏👏👏👏👏
Udne Ki Aasha
