Tu hi Meri Zindagi last part pg 45 - Page 35

Originally posted by: jparker

OMG lovelly....

Sigh.. yippeeee I knew it was twins!!

Loved their names.. uff.. Sanskaar and Koel!! 😳 I feared people would not like the names, wanted one to start with S and one with K.

Awww.. I dont want it to end!!!!😭😭 This has ended but others and maybe myself will be back with more!

It is so cute. loved the end!! Yes it can get so overwhelming.. parenting!! That too 4 kids.. wow they can get a handful!!!

Such a sweet story Sonali..👏 Glad it was liked!

I don't think anyone can not like this story dear... Everyone has their opinions

Dislike!?? You kidding me!! I like everything about your FF. Its simplicity, continuity, consistently interesting.. sigh I could go on and on.. but words sometimes fail me dear.

the best thing about the FF is towards the end. Their relationship is so beautifully painted. The understanding.. sigh.. wish it had been so in the real RBO Still a chance CVs can redeem themselves

Keep writing dear. Loved your story. It is so sweet and tender.. brings out so many emotions at once.. that I don't want it to end!! All good things come to an end my dear, but that means there is room for new things!😃

Originally posted by: angel_9

Hey Sonali...................

wow,amazing & awesome ending................ glad you liked it

loved it...............

they have twins................ yep

wow lovely names sanskaar & koel...............loved them.............. was afraid you guys wouldn't like them

shanak r parenting ............4 kids...........very well described...........

khanak has her own art gallery...............wonderful............ Yep she needed something of her own

loved ur writing style...............👏

continue soon with next one............... Only time will tell when that will be!

Originally posted by: simiv

Sonali!!!!!🤗

Sorry girl for the late reply but I was out and about and didn't want ot read it in a hurry!

I wanted to savor it and enjoy it at leisure!!!!!😃 No problem thanks for your support

And wow girl you have outdone yourself with that ohhh soooo lovely ending!!!😊

It fits Shanak perfectly!!!! To have 2 great kids, and twins at that, what a wonderful surprise. To have a gallery of her own and a loving family!!!!👏

And showing them taking care of the kids together in the end was so beautiful!!!!!😍 I wish they could show it in RBO but ....................who knows?? Will keep hoping!!!😊 Just we can keep hoping!

And that lovely song/poem at the end took my breath away..⭐️

I would like to say plenty more but I simply adored it and would like to see more from you!!!!😃

Hopefully I will have another idea and time to write it out, depends on my job situation

God Bless for bringing a lot of sweetness in our lives!! Thanks!!!!!!😃😃😃 You are very welcome!

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl