FF Dostana || NOTE pg 64|| - Page 22

WOW!!

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

@Pooja - No sweeite it was fine....I liked Rohan and Zia's interaction too....But the ending made me forget to mention that😆.....Hope Shaan doesn't pester Khanak too much....Looking forward to the next part😊.....

Originally posted by: ShanakMeet4lyfe

WOW!!

That was HOT!!☺️☺️

Thats all i can say rite now😳😳

Originally posted by: yasharan.love

Thanks May.... and well Shaan finaaly has come out of the lost lovesick puppy land and has a plan up his sleeve... and it'll be fun to watch dnt worry.... and I am glad u liked Zia- Rohan interactions....

Originally posted by: The_May_Rose

Actually I'd go as far as saying I think Rohan and Zia might be a couple? 😉😊.....

loved the update! that was sizzling hot!😃

Hi pooja

hi pooja

hei pooja,
that was simply superb..but u hav a bad habit of giving us wonderful updates n abscond for a long time making us wanting more of it..even though it is a lengthy update it seemed short..Zia gave wonderful advice to both shaan n khanak to take risk..that was superb..thanks for giving their passionate kiss..really it was nice..so now khanak has to realise..how courage our shaan is to leave khanak at that moment..n khank still asking 'what'..i felt like saying oh poor baby..come on shaan is just in the opposite hall way..run to him..do continue soon..

and i missed mentioning abt rohan-zia's interaction..zia is very mature..loved her character..interaction was nice..

Thanks for the pm Pooja....

Beautifully written, as always !!

What I loved most -- Rohan Zia interaction was too crisp; Khanak Zia interaction too was well written....
Overall, wonderfully written !!