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Pooja

@yasharan.love

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

IMPORTANT

guys the kiss is nt at the cliffhanger.... if the last line u read is - he pulled her to him again-

Then refresh/ go back to the page... cause I have added abot TWO PARAGRAPHS after that line.....

Love Pooja

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

Originally posted by: shamasallfav

On d way................................😉

poojjaaaaa do it sooonn..........................!!

Added😉😳

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!
OUCH!!!!!

That was something .... boss meri tho saans hi atak gayi thi yaar ...

HAAAAYE!!!!

idiot shaan!!!! aisa kaisa chodke ja sakta hain?????

Now I know why all these FFs are so good, you leave us hanging in there at the end of each part!!!!!

~Cheers,
Dish

PS: Thanks for the last update, ache sapney aayenge .. bye ... GN

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

hello..... sab abhi bhi update padh rahe hai.... ya sab kiss ki wajah se maar gayye? 😆 hello no comments on how it was😒😕 itna buraa tha kya?😕 ya saab thande thande paani se nahane gayye ho?😆😉☺️

Comment karo YAAR! I am very anxious+embarrassed+scared+ and now a little worried too here!

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nk.mail

@nk.mail

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Oh my freakin God!!! the last part was totally hawt!!!!! 😳

my heart is still racin!! 😛

that was a a mind blowin update Pooja, worth the wait! 😃

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#196

thanks dishban and neha! 🤗

baaki ke kuch seekho! comment karo nikamo!😆

Edited by yasharan.love - 14 years ago

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-Ray-

@-Ray-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Good that u added the last part, otherwise it wud have a episode without shanak scene!!

kiss scene was HOT!! but its a cliff hanger...😕 , yes I read till the end.

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Pooja

@yasharan.love

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: cadbery
Good that u added the last part, otherwise it wud have a episode without shanak scene!!

kiss scene was HOT!! but its a cliff hanger...😕 , yes I read till the end.

clifghanger? rupa if it ends at "he pulled her to him" go back and read it, coz I have added two pargaraphs after that!

and thanks.... but u get to knw wat happens..... go read it