FF Dostana || NOTE pg 64|| - Page 24

it was really good please update cant wait to see what happens next cant wait 2 see her reaction as to what just happen

Pooja 🤗

fabulous update...and the end part was to die for...truly amazing...

Omg Pooja..excileint update yaar.very beautiful written..Dead all the way
Loved all the conv between shaan and roihan regarding zia
loved all the mail scene between rohan and zia
loved the shaan and khanak part
all of them sooo amazing and wonderful
all dilogue were excilient
can't wait for next update pl update soon😃

Too good pooja!! tis awesum!!😊

Awe I love zia she is so right about things like she can come up with these amazing advices which help make all 3 of them realise what they should do like with khanak to take the risk and accept the next stage from moving to friendship to a relationship and rohan who realised his depth of love fo tashu that he should make her realise what he means in her life and then shaan that he should push khanak to make her realise that she may live him too and ooh when they went all passionate but shaan stopped so khanak can realise that she wants shaan as much as he does but not sexually by emotionally and with love anyways great update loved it and can't wait to read more 😊

lolpd tha was gr8 oh god part was too muchhhhhhhhhh loe the fact that he want love nt sex ...................nice obe i loved it typical of them

Originally posted by: dishbhan

update soon cant wait

~Cheers,
Dish

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~Dish

hey knw all of you are waiting desperately for an update.... but I am super busy, plus hve a terrible back pain, so I will take some time in updating....