SS~~ Nothing Compares 2 U- Final pt pg22 updated:) - Page 4

Awesome is the word Simi.....
read whole of it at one go.....from part 1 till part 5.......detailed comments are well deserved.....please bear with me......

Part 1. Shaan's emotions - wow !! wanted to see all of it in the show......the pain, the angst, the love and missing of something that he never valued, missing her and togetherness.....the description was simply wow !!
Part 2. Shaan has Natasha and Duck with him.....awesome touch. it is the only natural thing that seems amiss in most TV shows, it's only natural to have friends around.....and Natasha's fiance is Anand...wow !!
Part 3. Awww.........it was so beautiful and soooo emotional !! he missing her like hell and she thinking whether Haribha is feeding him well or not !! *claps* for khanak standing up for herself, educating herself and doing social work in dhulwadi....much more meaningful and so much 'Khanak' !!
part 4. Lots of things took my heart away.......Khanak saying that she is happy he gained a footing but the fact remains that he accused her of infidelity.....shaan thinking that he failed to see the spark in her eyes while teaching her and didn't realise he had to educate her more....the conference and Shaan's pride.....no words for ur writing skills....way to go...!!
Part 5. Absolutely loved it !! ShaNak were awesome......Independent and confident Khanak, yet caring....asking him to be cautious of sticks that could be snakes....what a touch....r u married? this was a typical wifey touch....we do that often....!! and Shaan no matter how changed and confident yet burthal...forgot to pack his breakfast !!
Overall a Lovely concept .....and loved the way you built it.....

I am so glad I read it at one go.....couldn't have waited for updates !!

awesum yaar simi..just luvving it...

hi simi

Lovely part !!

Cant wait for the next part !!

madam....me read...me like...

Thanks Simi for awesome update 🤗 Very beautifule and excilient update dear
loved lot each and every part specialy..
One of his colleagues who attended the meeting, came into his office and started showering praises on Khanak. Yaar, what a jewel huh... She had me under her spell from the get go! Such a wonderful mix of beauty and brains. Do you know if she's single and available? Maybe, I could try to pataofy her..and bring her home. After a long, long time have I met a girl who I want to wed rather than bed!
Shaan laughed happy that Khanak had not pooh poohed his gift: I wish..Tashu, I really wish that I had a magic wand but no, this time I don't want to rush or force her. I don't want to win her by deceit. I want her to realise that I'm a changed man and that I really am sorry for what I did.

You have taught me so much

I will be ever grateful for

The world is very big

And I'm a very small piece of it

Life would be more meaningful

If we learn to be a little humble

For there is a lot more happiness

In giving rather than in receiving...

shaan and khanak cute nok jhok also very nice when he called kahanak as mastarni ji ..sooo cute
loved your ss simi and eagrly waiting for next update soon😆😆

Thanks to everybody who have been faithfully reading my ramblings😃

simi... beautiful....mindblowing....

Very very nice....you know Simi,, the way you narrate your stories is very 'open' and then you end it with your poetic touch and suddenly its so lyrical....very nice developments....keep updating...I am back from my travels...so shall be online at least 2-3 times a week and deffo on weekends so shall be catching up😃