SS~~ Nothing Compares 2 U- Final pt pg22 updated:) - Page 20

Okay this line like left me numb...

"Their lips met hungrily as they tried to quench their thirst just like the parched earth soaks up the rain after a long dry spell. Their bodies struggled to eliminate any remaining distance between them, trying to mould into one another, like a hand in a fitted glove."

Wow wow wow!
My love how do you do this? A M A Z I N G like always! I need you to send me your autograph please 😃

Awesome concluding part Simi......

just read it and was left craving for more.......the way you managed to churn their emotions and weave them into your story was commendable !

the way they keep in touch via sms and then increase the content and frequency of the same is so realistic.....

No OTT treatment, no extensive melodrama...........everything just right.
loved him cooking for her and she imagining herself to be cooking in his kitchen and taking care of his things......so adorable !!

Keep writing more girl !!!

The last l9s r so touching...but do write a new 1...it was awesome

ok simi better late then never but wowwwwwwwwwwwwwww is even an understatement lol, and comments i give doesnt give it justice but just wanted to share it with u regardless lol

actions speak louder: hahahaaa shaan knew he still had a chance as khanak didnt reject his gift out right its sooo true if a girl had no intrest she'll make it known lol
lmao @ colleague who said met a girl i want to red rather then bed😆😆😆😆😆😆😆 man shaan has seriously groen up old rash shaan would have punched the guy, actually maybe slapped lol
o yeah did i tell you i love natasha's involvement in this ss, in that convo i liked te fact he finaaly admits 5to not giving khanak not enough importance and time, and for tashu not to make the same mistake

the car journey to dhulwadi had glimpses of old shanak nok jok whiuch i loved it couldnt be the same as they have yet to share that same comfort level- so beautifully peened
khanak and her teasing on snakes and on nazzuk

as always the poem was brill its always the fav part of the update - the icing on the cake lol

ok part1 of final part: awwwwwwwwwww😊😊😊 teary shanntanuuuu how sweeeeeeeet lol and him agreeing to go to his inlaws acting as everything fine for khanak's sake and happiness and so she doesnt have to answer any q's or feel arkward😃
and omggggggg loved how you made shaan visit her family in those months invetween and build a relationship with them as it shows he wanted to and wasnt forced to and that he did he for her happiness as her family should be just as imp to him as his is to hers 👏👏👏👏👏👏

and khanaks paathshala was the awesome surprise now that was the cherry ontop of the icing lol
simi love the filmy scene of khanak hurting her ankle she belongs in shaans strong hands😉 very cute
lovely poem again- ok now i want someone to write me a series of poems like that lmao

last part 2: love the way the txts became longer and bolder representing how much more khanak was ready to accept shaan back into her life
and simi u and ur songs that line was perfect for the current situation

awww 1st date and finally shaan being proud and proving to khanak he can stand on his own 2 feet 'chota hai magar mera hai'👏👏👏
the gujrati dishes and he cooks ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ ok find me like that pls lol
and his speech at the end wow finally it proves his transition and the following lines for me were the most imp
Khanak, you did right by leaving me then..never ever blame yourself for that. Agar tum nahin jaati, then I would have never come to terms with your importance in my life. I would have gone on living my usual useless zindagi which would have been a terrible waste...
it shows his actually come to terms with what happened and his mistake and accepts it
man after that speech and the proposal what girl can resist lol
and yes finally another wedding one in which they both want to and are not compelled to thus will mean so much more


ok i just realised ive written a mini essay, oh simi lol if only i could write so much in my actuall disso lol
if i continue replying like this im going to have to go awol again lol

@ Simi:

Hey simi,

Hey just caught up with this story .thnx for the link...i loved it😃...actually i wished something like this had happened in RBO instead of the dhulwadi track cause those episodes for me were not interesting .i really wished that they wud have shown khanak to be more smart and do something else rather than go back to dhulwadi😒...anyway ur update satisfied me 👍🏼...it was awesome keep writing more stories😃

Simi!!!

Thank to all of you guys!!