Hey guys…here's the next part…its half of it actually…with try posting the other half most probably on Monday…and yes…I would not be able to reply to your comments…I haven't replied to some for the earlier part as well…my lappie's crashed…and its going to take some more time…but I have and will be reading all the comments all over my phone…
I don't know how long I can carry on with this…the show was my inspiration…and since the news of it ending is out…I am just not able to write…anyways will try my best…
p.s. Just wanted to wish all you girls before the final telecast of the show…have a blast watching…
Will miss Rang Badalti Odhani…
FF meri padosi 17 A
She was standing there in the middle of nowhere…alone…it was dark around…other than the sky lit up by the moon…she heard footsteps approaching her…running…they reached her close…and then there was no noise other than the panting…of his heavy breaths…
The silence was broken loud with his voice…
Shaan: What the hell is wrong with you Khanak? Tum yaha kya kar rahi ho? Do you have any idea how much tensed we were…didn't you even think about your Mother.?
She did not respond…she had her back faced to him…he turned her around with force…
Shaan: Khanak…tum sun bhi rahi ho..? main tumse kuch puch raha hoon…(shaking her by her shoulders) Khanak?
She did not respond…simply stared at him…and that's when he realized…it wasn't the right thing to ask her…she did not seem to be alright…her eyes were sore…her face pale…
Shaan: Khanak…tum thik toh ho na? say something Khanak…are you alright?
There was no response again…but this time there was a movement…she raised her hand to place it on his forehead…and that's when …tears began to flow down her eyes…that's when she broke down…that's when her mind flew back in time…
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A night before…
Shaan: (over the phone) Khanak! Keh bhi dona…itna bhi kya itara rahi hon…
Khanak: Acha ..agar aisi hi baat hain….toh tum kyu nahi kehte?
Shaan: Main isliye nahi kehta …because I am a gentleman…and I believe in the ladies first policy…
Khanak: (chuckling) Well…the lady is in no mood to say anything right now…so stop irritating me…
Shaan: I will stop irritating you….if you just say what I want to hear…
Khanak: And I will say what you want to hear…if you stop irritating me…so for now…bye…
Before he could say anything else…she disconnects the phone…
But it rings again…
Khanak: Shaan!..main sach main thak gayi hoon..I need to get some rest…
Shaan: Exactly…I need some rest as well…par tum jaanti ho…aaj kal meri raaton ki neend udd gayi hain…main har waqt yahi sochta rehta hoon ki aisa kya karu…jissse tum mujhse apne pyaar ka izhaar karo…
Khanak: Acha…toh isme meri kya galti hain?
Shaan: Tumhari koi galti nahi hain…par tumhare paas iska solution jaroor hain…tum izhaar kar do…aur meri raaton ki neend wapas aa jayegi…
Khanak: Ratoon ki neend meri wajah se nahi…sone ki koshish karne se ayegi…toh Shantanu ji…kripa karke phone rahiye…khud bhi so jayiye..aur mujhe bhi sone dijiye…
Shaan: Toh tum nahi kahogi?
Khanak: Filhaal toh nahi…
Shaan: Fine..Good night! (disappointed)
Khanak: (chuckling) Good night!
She turned around to hit the bed…just when her phone rang again…
Khanak: Ab kya hain?
Shaan: Acha suno..pyaar ka izhaar toh nahi kar sakti…par uh…meri neend ke liye tum mujhe ek goodnight kiss toh de sakti ho na?(expectedly)
Khanak: Haan…de sakti do na…par good night kiss nahi…good night thappad…
Shaan: Ok…Ok..Ok…thappad main kissi aur se kha loonga…rehne do…main aise hi so jaata hoon…bye…
And this time…he put the phone down…She thought that was it…but he wasn't done yet…and it rang again…
Shaan: (before even listening to her)Khanak…c'mon yaar…phone par hi toh kiss deni hain…please…
Khanak: Shaan…no...
Shaan: Fine…(he was silent for a moment) please…
Khanak: Shaan…
Shaan: Fine…fine..fine…you don't have to say no…I just tried my luck for the last time…ab..pakka wala bye…
Smiling she put her phone down…shut the lamps off…and hit the bed…seconds later…it rang again…
Khanak: Shaan…ok fine…tumhe good night kiss chahiye na..then…(but she was interrupted by some other voice)
Rishab: Khanak…
Khanak: Tum?
Rishab: Haan main…baas tumhe kuch yaad dilaana chahta tha…
Khanak; Mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hain…
She was about to disconnect but was stopped on hearing Shaan's name…
Rishab: Shaan…I hope you love him enough to keep him alive…and you know your love is dangerous for him Khanak…stop acting foolish…
Khanak: You are right…I need to stop acting foolish…and for that I need to stop listening to your crap at first...stay away from my life…do you get that…and don't you dare call me again…
Rishab: You are doing a big mistake…
Khanak: No..I am trying to correct the mistake..I had done earlier…
She was in no mood to listen anything further…and simply disconnected…
Khanak: (to herself) Iss baar nahi…iss baar main tumhe apni life ka mazaak banane nahi doongi…not at all…Rishab…not this time…(confident)
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She came out with her bag…putting the bottle into it…
Mrs.Kapoor: "Event turning day"
Khanak: What?
Mrs.Kapoor: Oh your..horoscope…it says so…
Khanak: Yea..whatever…waise aap kabse iss sab main believe karne lagi?
Mrs.Kapoor: Believe kaun karta hain?
Khanak: Toh padh kyu rahi hain?
Mrs.Kapoor: Kyu padh bhi nahi sakti kya?..Aise hi padhti hoon...for entertainment…
Khanak: Entertainment?
Mrs.Kapoor: haan..
Khanak: Any ways…I will get late …main nikalti hoon..
Mrs.Kapoor: ho gaya..acha..sab thik se le liya na tumne?
Khanak: Haan le liya…
Mrs.Kapoor: Tiffin? Bottle.? Rumaal…
Khanak: Le liya …ab main itni bhi chotti nahi hain..ki apko mera itna dhyaan rakhna pade…
Mrs.Kapoor: Maa ke liye…apne bache kabhi bade nahi hote…
Khanak: I advise you to cut off with those daily soaps…you are behaving too melodramatic these days…
Mrs.Kapoor: Ye melodrama nahi…pyaar hain…
Khanak: Oh mamma…jaanti hoon…I was just kidding..
Mrs.Kapoor: Mere saath mazaak karne ke liye penalty lagegi….give me a hug…
Khanak: (smiling)Gladly..
She moved towards her Mother and hugged her tightly…as she hugged her back…
Khanak: ab jao main?
Mrs.Kapoor: Jao..
Khanak: Bye…
Mrs.Kapoor: Bye…and take care…
Khanak: Sure Mamma…
She opened the door…and he was right there in front of her…smiling…
Shaan: Good morning Khanak!
Khanak: Good morning…(quickly)
Without saying anything else…she rushed towards the elevator…as he followed…
Shaan: Tum thik toh ho na?
Khanak: Haan …kyu?
Shaan: I don't know…I am just getting this strange bad feeling since morning…
Khanak: Why? Did your horoscope read something fishy as well?
Shaan: (chuckling) No…just…uh…forget it…
She rushed out as soon as the elevator stopped…
Shaan: Aree Khanak…ruko toh sahi…itna daud ke kaha jaa rai hon?
Khanak: Shaan.. I am sorry..but I am getting late…aur ye taxi wagaira ka bhi natak rehta hain…toh see you later…
Shaan: Toh tumhe natak sehne ki kya jaroorat hain? I will drop you…
Khanak: Really?
Shaan: Isme itna hairaan hone ki kya jaroorat hain..?I can drop you right?
Khanak: Yea right…ekhad din toh tum mujhe drop kar hi sakte ho…after all I am your girlfrie….
She did not complete her sentence…as soon as she realized what she was about to say…
Khanak: Uh..lets go..der ho rahi hain…(trying to change the topic)
Shaan: Aree…wait…pehle apni baat toh poori karo…what were you saying?
Khanak: Let's go Shaan…(pretending to be in a hurry)
Shaan: (to himself) Itni mushkil se toh kuch kehti ho…par ye bhi adha adoora chod diya…
Khanak: Shaan chalo..
Shaan: Haan baba..aa raha hoon….
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Khanak: Waise ..kya baat hain…aaj kaafi…suited up lag rahe ho…anything special?
Shaan: Hmm…kind of?
Khanak: Matlab?
Shaan: Matlab…aaj ek publisher ke saath meri meeting hain…if things go well…maybe. I can officially become a writer…
Khanak: Really?…wow…that's great…good luck for that…
Shaan: That's it? Just a verbal good luck?
Khanak: Toh aur kya?
Shaan: Well…If I am not wrong…this is not how a 'girlfriend' wishes a 'boyfriend'…good luck…(smiling)
Khanak: Shut up ..Shaan..( a little blushy)
Shaan: Haaye…yaar tum sharmate hue bahut khubsoorat lagti ho…
Khanak: (blushing even more ) Whatever… take the first right…and that will be it…
Shaan: well here you go…(turning right)
She got down…and moved towards his end…
Khanak: Thanks…
Shaan: Anytime…ok then…See you in the evening…
Khanak: Ok…and uh…(she looked right and left…for a couple of times…after which she gently took his hand in hers…and placed a kiss there) good luck! I am sure you will succeed…
Shaan: After this…(showing her his hand) even I am sure…(wink) Bye…
He left…and right in front of her was the one person…she just did not want to be there…Neha…
She looked at her…who was standing there…with her hands folded…and eyebrows raised…
Khanak: (feeling caught)Uh..oh…
