FF-meri padosi...updated part 17 A on page 51... - Page 36

😊Hi Rupali i m Sweta.

super cute rups...🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗.🤗

loved them and their talks.. and Khanak is thirsty thinking abt Shaan..

Awesome update👏

the way u've described her nervousness was so much fun to read at the same time so natural

the conv between all 3 of them was really cute

Khanak: All Is well…All is well…All is well….Ye..Aamir Khan ki toh…jhoota kahika…(blowing air out of her mouth) Relax…relax….relax…oh…this is working…... so cute

i luved the whole update... i luv this ff but there are two fav parts in this update the 1st one

Shaan: Remember? Wooing?

She almost tipped down on her feet…when she heard this…and he helped her maintain balance…

Shaan: Dhyan se Khanak…(whispering again) You are hell lot easier than I thought…

Khanak: (She sat down thinking to herself) Or maybe you are a hell lot charming than I thought…

super cute😉

Shaan: (approaching them) Mere paas ek idea hain…iski shaadi kisi aisi jagah kar dijiye…jisse ye aapse kabhi door hi na jaaye…

Mrs.Kapoor: Mere paas isse bhi acha idea hain…hum iske liye ghar jamayi layenge…

Shaan: Ghar jamaye.? Nahi aunty ye kaafi boring hoga…main keh raha hoon na aapse…

Mrs.Kapoor: tum kya keh rahe ho…main kehti hoon…

Khanak: Excuse me! (Interrupting in between) Will you not bother asking the bride in question…what she wants..?(eyebrows raised)

They both looked at her…then uttered a "nah" together…and got back to their arguing…

shoo shweet ... that nah was really cute😃

i luved there conv at the terrace... that is my fav part too... innocent romance😍

the whole terrace scene was penned beautifully... ekum... PERFECT👍🏼

contine soon... em luvin it.

Originally posted by: _sweetshona

Awesm

Originally posted by: iluvmanar

oh..luvved their creativity...

Originally posted by: k.krithika

Hi Rupali 😊
Wow such a sweet part 16B loved it very much ❤️
Enjoyed reading it Shanak are so cute love them 😊
Thanks for the awesome part 😃
Love u 🤗

Originally posted by: AzaraA

rupali ...loved it yar ...that was so cute...🤗
🤗👏

thx for ur pm

keep writing

luv Zara

Originally posted by: candy84

Hey Rupali...!!!!

thumbs Up👍🏼👍🏼 for your update yaar...enjoyed each n every bit of it 😊

Originally posted by: sweta16

😊Hi Rupali i m Sweta.

I read ur ff and its very very very good. Pls make Khanak to say ILU to Shaan soon.😳☺️

And continue soon.