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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡 And is this how I get to know of your OS thread!! Humph...

okay okay... I whine too much... now let me read again.. and again.. annd... aaa...gggaaaiiinnn...😍

Siggghhh... this is perfect.

Okay now more like my usual self...

Mani, take a bow!!! The lines.. I could quote your whole OS.. and go on and on.. but I am sure that it will still not be able to express what I feel... Such blissful peace I felt when she asks them all not to mention about the truth of the MMS to Shantanu. Atta girl.. so true, Shantanu and Khanak's love is not and will never be at the mercy of any one or anything. Period... It realises itself and will do the needful.. Loved that statement. Describes their love in a nut shell if that is possible.. you said it!!!

Perfect Trust shown here.. as Shantanu sits at the shore of the deep seas... and thinks this from the depth of his heart... yes Khanak is yours.. she will noever let anyone else inside in between this circle... so Shantanu mvoe those lazy feet and stop this niggling worry.. throw it out of your ehad.. Ask that devil in you to shut up!!

Sigh such a beautiful OS...

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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Jessica

@jparker

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: -Manita-
Ammu...yours is the 6th vote for continuing 'mere rang mein'...

I had decided that if the votes cross 10...i'll continue that...

Lol...i should have at least 10 readers who read nah !!!!

Mere Rang mein - 1

Mere rang Mein - 2

Mere Rang mein - 3

Mere rang mein - 4

Lo, cross ho gayaa 10!! Now write!!!!! 😃 Mere 4 votes are on behalf of Jessica, Jess, Jessi, Jessdi!! they count!!!😃

Sigh lady not good to tadpao so much. When we say it is good.. it is goooddd...

FF... FF... FF... FF... FF... FF... FF... FF... FF...

on Mere Rang Mein...😳😳😃

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deepali

@-Deepali-

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

OMG Manita super and beautiful written
Loved all the Update

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dishbhan

@dishbhan

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Pls continue mere rang mein ...

7th I guess... ab tho karo...

~Dish

Edited by dishbhan - 14 years ago

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Manita

@-Manita-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: dishbhan
Pls continue mere rang mein ...

7th I guess... ab tho karo...

~Dish

No Dish you are 12th...excluding Jess...who says she should be counted 4😆😆

I will write this OS further...may be as an SS...or FF...

After updating TresPro tomorrow !!

Thanks

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Aussiegal

@Aussiegal

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Hi Manita, do you have 10 now? Pplease continue...😊

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Manita loved them both thanks for sharing!

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Ramani

@RB81

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: -Manita-
Ammu...yours is the 6th vote for continuing 'mere rang mein'...

I had decided that if the votes cross 10...i'll continue that...

Lol...i should have at least 10 readers who read nah !!!!

hei mani,

if u r waiting for a count of 10 count me in..u know we will definitely read..wat sort of silly thing is counting votes..continue it..

Edited by RB81 - 14 years ago

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

pls..mani..cont "mere rang mein"

both were superbly awesum...thanks 4 this OS...

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-Simple-

@-Simple-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Wow ! I was beginning to regret that I suggested that OS as I thought you guys would think I like such a guy but you guys totally get my view !! Phew !! 😆 Manita I will send a long PM or write a long comment later on the OS as I'm busy revising for my exams now - its on Monday !! But I loved it 😊 and my opinion on the pursuing of this OS would be that it would be amazing if you could start this off as a FF !! 😃 Yeh tho trailer tha tho picture bakhi hain 😆. What say ? It would be good to see a gradual relationship develop between the two. The slow realisation 😛 the slow changes in their characters 😛. No pressure !! Just an opinion 😃 I know you are busy but this is just a suggestion if you have time 😊

Edited by -Simple- - 14 years ago