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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

yea sorry...it was the point of how they got where they are...I can write an epilogue but it will be a while before that happens...

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@sampar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

awesome ......😊....i loved how u narrated the story....awesome writing style ......but i wish u write a concluding part to this SS......overall it was awesome...superb .....👏

cheers

shai

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Rooj some of these incidents in Khanak's memories seem familiar. Anyway I doubt any guy I met during my college years would bump into me like Shantanu bumped into Khanak

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saaaz

@saaaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#24

this was a very different style...the narrative was like a POV...very nice...

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

hi Rooj

loved the update.........😃

very well written ............👍🏼

i want more of it but as u say its last part then its ok.........❤️

i loved khanak n shaan friendship description n how she tell everything to shaan ............loved it

n thanks 4 PM............😃

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Nice-Liked how you ended it where you did. Seems like another story. The readers can make up their own ending to the story=D

As for the story-I can somehow relate to it. I've always been upset by the selfishness of people.Someday I shall tell you my theory about levels of friendship=)

Btw-the last sentence is incomplete!

Oh and thanks for calling me an idiot=p

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 14 years ago

#27

@ Shai: Thanks hun! I didn't intend to write an epilogue but I might write one...but a bit later..

@advent: these incidents are actually true. I don't know how similar they are to you but they are true...thanks tho...

@Saaz: they are written from Khanak's POV...thanks...

@ angel: thanks hun...Im glad you liked it...i sort of left the ending for people to venture on their own...I might write a concluding part...

@ Yumna: Thanks yaar...the incidents are not really detailed and they are given from Khanak's POV because it is her story not Shaan's. lol

I left for people to make up their own story...

as for the sentence...thanks for letting me know I'll go back and change it. lol

Edited by rooj-i - 14 years ago

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Yes but they reminded me of some similar events in my college years, just I am missing a guy like Shantanu in my life," sighs"

I really liked how you wrote this, amazing job!

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Urooj

@rooj-i

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Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
Yes but they reminded me of some similar events in my college years, just I am missing a guy like Shantanu in my life," sighs"

I really liked how you wrote this, amazing job!

awwww....🤗

thanks hun...I didn't mean to make you nostalgic....