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Bona

@bones88

Stunner

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

zennnn just loveeed it 🤗 it was soooo emotional made me cry😭 very well written... can't wait for the next part🤗

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.Rupali.

@.Rupali.

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

that was wonderful....loved it..how they jst talked about it rather than keeping it to themselves n creating problems....

he was guilty somewhere also for what his one negligent action had caused all three of them to go through and yet somewhere he also felt selfishly grateful as it had resulted in khanak coming into his life

this was so shaan....u r fantastic..👏

waiting for d cute part now..😊

Edited by loveshanak - 14 years ago

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Ah.Zen you leave me speechless!

I've always been unable to decide whether I like intense ShaNak more or cute ShaNak more but this scene totally has me leaning toward intense, serious ShaNak.

Shaan's selfish reaction-bang on!

Khanak's thinking of Shaan even while going through so much herself-typical.

Khanak finally making Shaan realize he was being selfish and how!

*blissful sigh*

I love how Shaan and Khanak always talk it out no matter how much it hurts them instead of keeping it to themselves, letting it fester and creating lots of misunderstandings in typical hindi serial style.

P.S: After this I highly doubt the real confrontation between Shaan and Khanak will satisfy me=(

Edited by -SYS- - 14 years ago

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Zen darling...wow.....hope we do get something similar...loved it..loved intense Shanak alot...now can't wait for the next part from you soon....👏👏👏

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: -SYS-
Ah.Zen you leave me speechless!
I've always been unable to decide whether I like intense ShaNak more or cute ShaNak more but this scene totally has me leaning toward intense, serious ShaNak.

Shaan's selfish reaction-bang on!

Khanak's thinking of Shaan even while going through so much herself-typical.

Khanak finally making Shaan realize he was being selfish and how!

*blissful sigh*

I love how Shaan and Khanak always talk it out no matter how much it hurts them instead of keeping it to themselves, letting it fester and creating lots of misunderstandings in typical hindi serial style.

P.S: After this I highly doubt the real confrontation between Shaan and Khanak will satisfy me=(

Ditto...to all what you said dear...

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

wow zenn/saaz you depicted the emotional turmoil they're both in beauitfully

I love how the reactions are true to their characters as Shan is still somewhat selfish and does only think about his emotions/hurt before others- and I love the guilt but more then that I loved that he wasn't that gulity for the act as it got him Khanak.

I loved Khanak's strong and emotional response.

can not wait for the next part 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

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.Dilwale.

@.Dilwale.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

@rafia

thanks so much! but why are you calling me saaz? my name is zen😆

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Urooj

@rooj-i

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

OMG Zennn Superb!

The following line had a beautiful transition of Shaan's emotion in words: "he was simply confused by this volcano of feelings erupting inside him and he was not sure which feeling to emote and how.

"tum yahan?" shaan asked khanak."

I love the whole thing here. I loved it how you have pinned their characters...I remember that one scene where Shaan actually did insult Khanak and her relationship with Suraj and then he realized what he did. (was it an actual scene or was it someone's FF i read? trying to think) anyways I wish the CVs would handle it well just as you have...

Edited by rooj-i - 14 years ago

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.Dilwale.

@.Dilwale.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

@rooj

thanks yaar! khanak ke emotional outburst kay baarey mein bhi tu kuch kaho. itna ziyada dialogues soch soch kay likhay hein meine!😳

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rafia rashid

@rafia 24

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: zennnn

@rafia

thanks so much! but why are you calling me saaz? my name is zen😆

lol thats what I thought then I thought I saw someone call u saaz and thought mayb thats your real name so wrote zenn/saaz sorry wont happen in the future 😆

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