New FF Hum Tum & Love? (PART 13 page 68) - Page 6

noorya... lovely dear.... very nice writing... loved ur characters esp karan oberoi......... he is confident yet vulnerable...... omg i m loving this guy...... i like the relationship he and khanak share in ur story....... i am waiting for shan to meet karan s sunshine....... the entire update was very cute and dreamy..... never wnted it to end..... pls update soon.... thanks 4 the pm dear

oh noorya..it's awesome yaar...iss more pe aker tera update khatam ho geya...o god....eager 2 read the next...jaldi kar.....

awwwwwwww...KARAN is so sweet yaar, love the frndship btw them, waitting for the nxt part when our boy and the gal meet...................jaldi karo😊

noorya this is awsome yaar.......................u knw karan so well u picked each and evry line he ued to say ............that oh hello wala...................iloved khank and karans frndship yaar just like best budds and sweet moment thy share how sweet yaar...................he kisses her on forehead and gave her neckless call her violent wife so true yaar.............................u potraed each charcter especially khanak and karan charecter very well.......................i can already relate to them.............................the dress was best yaar....................the dialog was also awsome i cant tell u how much i loved it............very nice...................ur the best noorya👍🏼

wow yaaaarrr !!! soo niceee !! but now i m feeling bad for kw !! aww poor babyy !!!!

heyy noorya...

enjoyd readng it.plz cont soon.its rockng......

aweosmeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

@ noorya both part awesome and mindblowing😆 i am much awaiting for shaan and khanak meeting and shilpa entry.karan corrector so loveble.😆
nice written 👏

aww/..well first of all i am extremely sorry for replying late..had been really buzy these past few days n i think i will be super buzy during weekdays..so in future if i comment late plz forgive me