11th Jan 2011
Yaar....
Shanak Scene: Emotions perfectly acted...however the dialogue 'maine bahut kuch khoya hai" is totally faltu dialogue...they could have gone with a better ...dialogue of 'loss' if they were trying to indicate something about the future in the track....patch up dialogue and friends ....nice...for once loose ends are getting tied...thank god for that...Khanak shivering was a little OTT..in the sense she started even before Shaan completes his dialogue and he notices her shiver 5 minutes after she has begun...itna time thodi lagta hai..again dialogues tied in well...
Rahul: DUDE...kya sazaaa....seriously yaar...yeh dialogues and the BG>>>LOOSE IT!!! yaar...so this rahul as a friend has suggeted...is actually suffering from BIPOLAR....cafe mein human being....company mein shaitaan being....Yaar...bipolar resident from hell....get a grip!!! Characterisation cannot oscillate so badly....bring it down a notch in the boardroom...loose the BG and get finer dialogues....this scene that too placed right in the middle of shanak scene also indicates CVs know people change channels when these guys come....OUT!!!!..don't push this character down our throats...refine and polish these scenes....frankly 'mujhe set ke recording ke tapes chahiye???!!!!"..SERIOUSLY!!!!???? yaar logic thoda tho leke aao...yaar!!
Sunny: Chalo!!! the CVs did a good job here...this was another scene placed right in between shanak..again to make people watch...but notice here...dialogue delivery much better..limited and the BG....just right...shall be looking forward to this character....
Shaan almost hit by sunstroke" Shaan suspecting something wrong...again thank you!!!! of course this is only adding to the fear of where this track si going...of course the three times takraana...so dramatic...hey ram!! but thank god BG was clean..."suraj ko bachaane ke liye....suraj ke baare mein socha bhi kaise'???? frankly these dialogues while really good .... however the indication they give of the track gives a certain discomfort....
Khanak hit by Sunstroke part 2: "suraj ko bachaane ke liye....suraj ke baare mein socha bh kaise'???? frankly these dialogues while really good .... however the indication they give of the track gives a certain discomfort...good entry by sunstroke....fabulous BG, GOLDEN Music...clean. BUT what went totally wrong in this miniscule of a second in this scene....reaction from Khanak and SS ka entry ka camera angle...very badly done. the wide camera angle did not work for this scene... as long as camera panned on Khanak or Sunstroke, it was very good......dialogues by SS, his delivery little off...especially at MAA BAAP...i guess they wanted to use the opportunity to show sooraj's maa-baap, and Khanak's expressions...very good...very dramatic...but not jaaring...thoda the alaaps can be reduced in the background.. instrumentation or Shankar Mahadevan's alaap is
much better....Khanak's shocked and scared expression through it all ..very believable.....
Sam & Sunstroke; very nice dialogues....OKAY honestly...NO jokes about this....Sam shares better chemistry with mr. Sunstroke here...I think it has lot to do with the dialogues......and that at this point the characterisation is very clear....and Sam as long as she does not move her hands too much and her body ...both sunstroke and sam move their bodies too much while delivering...
WHY is khanak afraid that Shaan will get naraaz??? honestly....thats the problem...shaan naraaz ho jayenge....she could have said...shaan inhe dekhlenge tho pataa nahi kya hoga or something...I lliked the dialogue yehi farak hai actor aur non actor mein...but I think it could have done with an extra line...the punch was not there especially becos Sam comes across as someone who does not get the punch lines....
precap: yaaron...jo cheez dekhne mein mazaa aaye..uske baare mein likhna...NAINSAAFI!!!
Edited by saaaz - 14 years ago
