FF: An Innocent Vixen-Part 5A pg 24

isomers

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Posted: 14 years ago

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didn't even realize you updated! =O

haha, I love Sunil! He seems like a totally chilled out dad. and I like that he and Madhavi have a nice relationship in your FF! it's sweet. (:
AHH..I love the Khushboo in your FF, so unlike the one from the show😆 She's actually sweet! Does Khanak live with them?

Khanak and Shaan's current relationship is epic! so.much.ego. Just give up and be friends already!😆 actually, I like them this way..keep 'em like this for a while!

The story is shaping up perfectly Rooj! can't wait to read more!
-Nitya

p.s. what exactly did Akshay tell her?

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-YasharanArshi-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Shanak ko dekhe hue 2 weeks hogaye hain ...

And with the below end :

Without thinking, she leaned closer and he did the same till…………….

you are tadpaoooing more ... but great .... waiting for the next part .... update soon deaar...

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rafia rashid

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

As always brilliant ⭐️ 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️ I liked the scene btw shaan and the folks, Sunil knowing theirs some kind of a connection btw shaan and khanak but mads being confused as to is this the perfect girl for my son as noooo mum really does like girls you insult their partners 😆 but do want someone who could be their equal.

Thats a new twist Khushboo is khanaks sister and akshay the B.I.L they have a cute relationship.

Man talk about leaving us hanging on and left out to dry

what an ending dont know if im more upset that it ended or excited to read the next part lol

cant wait xx

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Krishna

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Rooojjjjjjjjjjjjjjj darling.......again you ended on till...!!!! Bad bad girl😆😆😆....now better update soon!!!!😃

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Bravehearts

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

wow vwey well writeen sweey loved it ...............................how seet yaar thy both r dam cute😉

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.Dilwale.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

awesome blossom rooj! i really wish they make another show with your FF and with kt and ym as the leads! 😳😃

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destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

yaar rooj so good yaar

really like zen I also wish to see this being made into a show with our ShaNak (same actors yashu and kt)socute story..

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dtu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Loved it.....loved it .....omg i m loving khandelwal family moments yaar.....sunil is a cool dad....kapoor bhi kissi se kam nain hain.....perfect......i m loving shanak' s relationship.....oh cant wait to see what happen next......

continue soon

cheers

shai

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