New Poem on Paan... - Page 2

Originally posted by: maneet.n.shanak

Yeh par ke mujhe ab chaye paan
Paan se zindagi ho asaan
khake paan mit jaye ghum
double maza ho jab saath rahe humesha hum

dude now thats bad lines by me... what you wrote was kick ass

awesome jaani abhi hum jhake peete pani
haila koi roko mujhe hojaye na shuru koi ghatiya kahani

kya poem hai wahh baye wahh ithani achi poem maine apani zindagi main nahi padi paan ke upar simply superbbbbb

Originally posted by: jyothi1989

kya poem hai wahh baye wahh ithani achi poem maine apani zindagi main nahi padi paan ke upar simply superbbbbb

Thanks Jyothi..then we shud have a Paan Party!!!😆😆😆

Originally posted by: drswati

simi.....................darling............ u r a rock star of our forum wt i cn say........simply superb👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

*shaan.......simi kahan se laati ho ye saare shabd....mahan ho....kaun se school gai thi

#khanak........shaantanu aapko bhi simi ji se kavita paath seekhna chahiye

*shaan.....kavita ka paa......😕😕😕

*shaan...oh u mean poetry lesson........okay

#khanak.poe.......poe...less??????

*shaan...khanak its po.....poet .......poetry....lesson....less...........on

Hey Swati!! Kya yaar, meri poetry to bilkul kichdi hai, english aur hindi ka upma hai!!

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tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good.................
simi i think ur totally obsessed wid the paan😆


once again a unique odea by u n its damn funny sweety
loved it

wat a poem, my paan!😆

Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

🤣🤣🤣🤣
tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo good.................
simi i think ur totally obsessed wid the paan😆


once again a unique odea by u n its damn funny sweety
loved it

exactly karishma!...the idea is gud....to write on PAAN!