FF~ShANak in a Medieval KicHdi-Pt10 on 18 upd 5/11 - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Simi!!! I knew you would rock at this! I totally love it! Its complete hutke concept! 👍🏼 Love IT!!!!!!👏 Some of the lines are just mindblowing!!! I could not stop laughing 🤣 I needed it!! I should have read this yesterday to feel better hehe🤣🤣

Love it!!!! Cant wait for more!!!! 🤣

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Posted: 15 years ago
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simi dear!!! super hilarious i love this one even more than the first!! rocking dear!!!i laughed a loud continuously.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ThankU guys all around!!! 👏for tolerating my mind!😕
May, Jyothi, sshriya, karishma--thanks for yr comments!!🤗
@ Ash...grt update today, dearie...get well soon!!❤️
Will update soon!!
Edited by simiv - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: simiv

ThankU guys all around!!! 👏for tolerating my mind!😕

May, Jyothi, sshriya, karishma--thanks for yr comments!!🤗
@ Ash...grt update today, dearie...get well soon!!❤️
Will update soon!!



I can hardly wait for your second one!!! woohhooo 😃
mwah🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It has been a long time since I updated...so here's a brief recap:
Shaan is our Robin and Khanak is Marion. She has been captured by the wicked sheriff and while rescuing her Shaan gets punched on his nose by her...😆
Part 3 - Ladka nahin Ladki!!

On the next day, SR was getting ready to go back to his DAD to stake his rightful claim and take credit for his bravery, when he saw Dharam running towards him with a worried look on his face.

DH..SR, looks like they have kidnapped that young lad again after he left us yesterday. They ambushed him in the forest..

SR..serve him right, he had the guts to hit me on the nose! me a man of noble birth and the son of The King's minister!

DH..but sirji, I heard that this young man is also of noble birth and has been kidnapped by the wicked Sheriff himself for a very bad purpose. You must rescue him otherwise, what will you say to yr DAD?( Dharam did not tell him that the lad was actually a lady.)

SR could see his reasoning, and agreed that if the young man had indeed been caught again he had nothing to show to his Dad, also he hated the Sheriff more than anything and wouldn't wish him on his worst enemy!

Shaan set off to the Sheriff's castle which he had heard was a veritable fortress.He also wondered what did the Sheriff need from a young lad after all? He reached the castle and and looked around. On the left he found a tall tower with a small window on top with a light in it. He felt that should be where the prisoner was and cautiously approached it casing the surroundings. Surprisingly he didn't find any guards..perhaps the Sheriff was too confident that nobody would dare to cross paths with him!. Well not SR, he would teach him a lesson! He found the tower encased in thick vine and quickly climbed up and reached the window. One thing SR was good at--climbing!

SR cautiously peeped inside and was surprised what appeared to be a lady with long dark luxurient hair sitting on the lone bed with her back towards him. He thought ..maybe the Sheriff had captured a lady as well! Thinking that rescuing a damsel in distress was more appealing, he climbed into the room.😉 KM,who was thinking abt a way to escape ( she certainly did not wish to wed the Sheriff's horrible son), was startled at the noise, turned to see an intruder and as usual her reflexes overpowered her reasoning and she jumped up and kicked SR in the groin!! OWWW..SR hollered and in exquisite agony and sank to the floor, tears rolling down his face.

KM recognised SR as her unsuccessful rescuer from the day before...(the one with the beautiful brown eyes),and shouted..YOU?!! She immediately bent down concerned and propped up SR's shoulder in her arm. SR through his tears, looked up and and saw the same lovely features which he had seen on the boy yesterday but now the face was framed with beautiful wavy hair, he was puzzled and asked..Do you and your brother have a habit of hitting first and talking later?..😕😆

KM was annoyed and replying that she didn't have a brother, released SR's shoulder, causing his head to fall back with a bang to the hard floor, and he let out another YELL! Despite his pain SR was pleasantly surprised, for even though he could mistake a face he could never mistake a breath!😆 And this was the same fresh breath from yesterday! She had probably hidden her hair in her cap. As KM stood up, SR had the luxury of admiring her slim lithe figure, now in a long simple dress.

Suddenly they heard the sound of footsteps on the stairs and KM dragged the still in pain SR up and hurried him inside a cupboard along the wall. The door opened with a bang and through a crack in the door of the cupboard, SR saw a large, heavyset man enter the room. He recognised him as the Sheriff's equally wicked son who he remembered sported a particularly Bad Breath!

NS ( sheriff's son), who had been very thrilled when he learned that he was going to marry a beauty such as KM, grabbed her arm roughly, and shouted..I heard a man in this room, kahaan chupaya hai use? Kya tumhara aashiq hai?.. 😆

KM screamed..Haan hai!!..and before SR could jump him, she had given NS a firm kick in the groin and as he doubled up in pain she kicked him on the side of his head which made him pass out. SR stood there admiring her..this little lady was GUTSY! But before he could react KL rushed to him and said: Kya tum mard ho ya Chooha? Can't you defend an abla nari?

SR: puzzled Abla what? 😕

KM: never mind..tell me how are we going to get out of here? There are guards at the bottom of the stairs.

SR: Its easy, the way that I came here, through that window!!

KM:But I'm afraid of heights, I could never climb trees!

SR:Don't worry, just close yr eyes, climb on to my back and hold on tight, I'll have you down in a jiffy!!

KM agrees to this plan as the best option and held on to SR's back. SR thought:Dude!! this is your lucky day!! A beautiful girl hugging him for dear life!!😳 He thanked his lucky stars that there was at least one thing he was really good at.... He asked KM to count slowly to 10 and he was down on the ground before she had finished. He didn't stop her but took the time to admire her innocent face in the moonlight. When KM opened her eyes, she found herself still on SR's back and him staring at her with a dreamy expression on his face.. She didn't mind, infact it actually felt good for a change. She also took the time to stare at his face, his eyes and slightly parted lips.... Ummm.. What would it feel like to kiss them??... OMGosh! What am I thinking?.KM and love?..impossible!😳

Guys I hope you like it and Please do comment freely....Thanks!!❤️
Edited by simiv - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely Part....ROFL.....Enjoying the bad breath fixation in every part of the story...LOL
Colgate/Pepsodent would have a fight to sponsor your story...LOL.....And say that Colgate/Pepsodent se brush karo and bad breath bhagao...LOL !!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Simi, babes kya Kichdi hai ye...
You have cracked me up with this update, lage raho babes
Breath fixation😆
Edited by amrita2010 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow cant help laughing at ur wild imagination....sism yar u are too much..thanx a lot.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: togepe30

Lovely Part....ROFL.....Enjoying the bad breath fixation in every part of the story...LOL

Colgate/Pepsodent would have a fight to sponsor your story...LOL.....And say that Colgate/Pepsodent se brush karo and bad breath bhagao...LOL !!

Vandu, us zamaane mein toothpaste and brush hote hi nahin the so its very unusual for someone to have good breath. I had to how obsessed with something right?? Perhaps I shud insert yr ad somewhere!!😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@ Amrita-- I knew so, Have Loads of FUN dear!!:))
@ Shriya -- Thanks dear, RBO gives me lot of fodder:))

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