FF~~Ehsaas pyaar ka~~Part-3-pg 3(Updated)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Haii to my all odhnian's..

Hr 4 first tym..i m with a ff..of our dear shanak..

This story deals completely diff from the situation we r watching..i hope u all will lyk my work n the new style of our shanak.. n the title is.. "Ehsaas Pyaar ka"

About: this new style is entirely diff..as..hr shaan is nt in khandelwal family..n b/w our cute n sweet shanak thr is no any madhvi,khushboo,etc'

Hr..shaan..is working as the secretary of natasha's father MR.Aggarwal..n tht story goes b/w..as all..we knw..natasha..shaan..khanak..n a new character to enter rohan'(I hope u all cn guess..)

I hope u lykd the brief description of the theme'hope that u all will encourage me..to cont. it further'

Thank you'

Regards'shama..

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-Amrita2010 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Shama,

A different concept and it sounds great...do write and all the best😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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shama really excited 2 read futher pls do update soon n im sure ur gonna do a fab job wid the shanak scenes.all the best👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dear do continuee...waiting 4 it =)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey do continue why not! As it be nice the have an FF without any villains in the story!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome shama...do continue !!!
ehsaas pyaar ka ~~~~~~~
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey shama....love the title!!!
and a different concept......start it soon!!
love
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Posted: 14 years ago
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very nice concept Shama
and i really like the title...hope to read it soon😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Shama really a nice concept and do continue and write an interesting 1...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thank you..soo..much friends..4 ur support n encouragement 2 cont. it further..

(soo.. as the story begins frm shaan..as hez working as Mr.Aggarwal's secretary..

And about shaan..he is all alone in his life..he don't hv family..so..as his boss he respected n loved Mr. Aggarwal…

And his boss's daughter Natasha..loved shaan..as they wer grown up together..n shaan also lykd her..

But later wen Mr.A. came to knw abt their love 4 each other..he was totally against of their love..he knew tht shaan does nt deserve Natasha..

And then he goes to shaan..and asks abt this..n blames shaan 4 everything happened..n takes a decision of keeping away shaan frm Natasha..n starts planning to show Natasha that shaan loves some other girl not Natasha..n for this he chooses a way..of sending letters to some other girl by shaan name..n to shw these letter's to Natasha..

And when Mr.A. comes to shaan n asks him to write a letter to show her that he was cheating her..n to stay away from her..shaan..first disagrees for this..but Mr.A. keeps on forcing him..telling.. "I don't hv any other way..to keep her away from u..than this.."..

But unfortunately he don't have any other way..than this..bcoz 4 a moment..all the helps done by Mr.A for him..right from childhood flashes bak..in his mind..atlast..with a deep pain..he agrees to it..n starts writing the letter…

Mr.A. keeps dictating.. n after writing the letter..Mr.A. thinks 4 a name..2 write..thn..shaan..asks.. "wats the need of the name 4 a fake letter"..Mr. A replies.. "evn if it's a fake letter..natasha should believe that it's a true letter..n we ll also giv address..coz..this letter is gonna get posted by Natasha..shaan gets shocked..but was nt able to tell anything..

And after thinking 4 a while..he spells a name "khanak"..n they writes the name..with a address …

And in this morning when Natasha..gets ready to go to office..Mr.A. tells to shaan..to go near Natasha..n giv her the letter n tell her to post this..shaan again with pain..moves on..

And Natasha..who was abt to post the letter..thinks 4 a while..n tells to herself.. "shaan ka aisa bhi kya secret hain..jo main nhi jaanthi.." n she opens the letter..n reads it..!!

She totally gets shocked..n was nt able to control herself..but still she posts the letters n tells.. "agar shaan..mujhse pyaar nhi karthi..tho main??".. she cries alott sitting in a corner..

(Now the camera rolls..to a room..wer a girl is in the step of suicide.. )

And suddenly..a letter was thrown into her room..she gets down..n reads it..!!

~~~~~to be continued….!!!!!!!

Hope u all lykd the part..n hopefully form next part..i ll cont. with the dialogues 4 each..if u lykd the part plss..press LIKE button..and also to receive the PM's..your comments and suggestions are always welcm…

Thank you…

Regards…shama…

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