FF~~Ehsaas pyaar ka~~Part-3-pg 3(Updated) - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey shama i donno how i missed this earlier........ its really a nice story with totally different storyline 😊... loved it.... continue soon and do PM me next time wen u update.....😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow my sweetheart luvly ff yaar.. diff concept n meri sweetheart jo kare vo to accha hona hi hai na... do cont yaar n mjhe btana bhoolna mat..okay..n it was really awesome ...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnxx guyzz..4 all ur support...
sharmida,shriya,simiv.. sana.. krishna..manju..n vanshu..
n thnxx vanshu 4 specially reading this n commenting...
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(And suddenly..a letter was thrown into her room..she gets down..n reads it..!!)

Continues..

PART-3

(She was confused by seeing the letter..she clearly red the front page of the letter and the letter was sent by some 'Shantanu'?and it was sent by her name..she was shocked to see the letter,as she doesn't knw any guy in this name who loves her so much..)

Khanak:ye kaun ho sakta hai??main tho is naam ke kisi ko bhi jaanthi hoon..tho phir ye letter??

(She moves inside and takes her phone and makes a call to her very close friend,whose name was gopika, whom she used to call gopi..

Gopi soon comes to khanak's home..and khanak tells her all wat happened..!!)

Gopi:Kaun ho sakta hai,jo tujhse itna pyaar karta hai..?

K:pata nahi gopi..meri samajh mein tho kuch bhi nahi aa rahi hai..aur tho aur..main tho is naam ke koi bhi ladke ko nahi jaanthi hoon..!!tum tho jaanthi ho na,..ki meri haalat kya hai..aur aisi haalat mein,main kisi se dil se kaise pyaar kar sakti hoon..

G:hm..main samajhti hoon..(taking her hand into her hand)par,tum mujhe bhi chodkar jaane waali thi na..tumne ek baar bhi mere baare mein nhi socha..bus,chal padi?suicide karne..

Voh,jo koi bhi ho..usne tujhe bachaake ek nayi zindgi chaahe vo ek letter se ho..par,in sab ke beech kuch tho hai..aur mujhe nhi lagtha ki ye kisine yuhi bejha hai..

I think,this is someone special..some true love??

K:really??

G:hmm?shaayad..

K:tu bhi na..

(and she picks up that letter n moves to the balcony,by feeling some fresh air..she blushes herself..

And day by day she starts getting letters..and she starts getting some kind of different feeling by reading the letters each day..!!)

(On the other side..shaan snatching his head..in between all this mess totally unknown..

And sometimes after,Mr.aggarwal enters his room..and talks abt the matter to him further..)

Mr.Ag:shaan,jaise matter aur bhi aagey bad rahi hai,main natasha ki shaadi ke baare mein soch rahi thi..

(shaan gets shocked and feels really bad..tht tears wer near in his eyes..)

Mr.Ag:lekin,jab tak tum yaha,is sheher mein rahogi..tab tak natasha kabhi kisi aur shaadi ke liye nahi maanegi..

S:sir,aap kehna kya chahte hai??

Mr.Ag:yahi ki..ab tumhe is sheher se door rehna hoga..

S:lekin sir?

Mr.Ag:lekin tum..pareshaan mat ho..maine iske baare mein soch liya hai..aur reason bhi..tum yaha se,uske saath jaa rahi ho..jisse tum pyaar karte ho..haan..tum natasha ko yahi bataoge..aur maine 2 tickets bhi le liya hai..ek tumhaare liye..aur ek tumhaari khanak ke liye..(laughs)

Koi baat nahi..bus stand pohonchne ke baad ise phad dena..maine tumhaare liye mumbai ke liye 2 tickets le chuki hoon..!!

S:shaan gets shocked hearing this..that he was unable to say anything..

(the sad backround instumental plays on..)

And on the other side..the letter reaches to khanak,written abt the tickets and their move to mumbai..khanak shows the letter to gopi..and they both decides to go..)

So..next day..morning,they both gets ready..khanak and gopi..and they starts waiting in the bus stand without knowing anything abt him..

They both waits for him a lot of time..and then the bus by which they have to go to Mumbai, announces that it going to leave..then gopi and khanak goes to the bus conductor and says that..they are waiting for someone to come and pleases to wait for somemore time..and the conductor was funny types..who was very emotional thinking that bcoz of him the two lovers should not get away..

And they starts waiting..but again,one passenger in the bus gets up..who was very smart..gud luking ,handsome and cool person..and goes to the conductor and asks that wat is the problem..as frm so long we are waiting..and the time is already gone wen we have to leave frm here..then the conductor says that,there is one poor and gud girl..shez waiting for her love..plss some more time..he tells no..we have seen many peoples like this..for this one thing the whole bus cant wait..and he goes near to khanak..and tells her that we are going and cant wait more..then gopi calls him and tells the problem..then they again decides to wait..)

G:thank u soo much....

Hm?rahul?I am rahul..(he says by taking his hand around his head..)

After too long tym..still nobody comes and they tells khanak that they cant wait more and asks sry..and when the bus was about to leave..,a voice raises frm behind says 'STOP..ek aur aana baaki hai..'..

And khanak's makes sure that he is the one?and she smiles..

And when he was running to the bus carrying his suitcase..it hitted to a tower where khanak was standing and he falls to khanak..and ovr thr a small eye to eye starring..and then shaan gets up and rubs his head and asks khanak sorry and gets into the bus..khanak also tells bye to gopi and gets inside the bus..

Then shaan takes his ticket from his bag and the other ticket also comes on his hand..

S:ye meri ticket hai aur ye...

Conductor:(cuts him in b/w..and tells)haan..haan..main samajh gayii..

S:(He thinks a while..)samajh gayi..wahh..bade samajhdar ho yaar..(by putting his hand towards his shoulder..)

And then conductor pulls shaan to the seat where khanak was sitting?and shaan again falls to khanak..and again a eye lock between them..

Then rahul whistles frm behind..and shaan again tells sry to khanak..

And when shaan was sleeping lyk a budtal..was again n again falling to khanak's shoulder as she is sitting near to him..and the romantic backround music plays on..

some children in the bus comes near to him and checks out his bag..ovr thr..they finds one book in the bag..and when children felt lyk shaan is going to wake up..they tried to run frm thr..and in a rush..they threw the book..and it fall on khanak's lap..

And khanak who was sitting near to shaan wakes him up..and gives him book..and he tells her that..this is a book in which he has written a story abt his life..and he tells that it is a true story..and he also tells that..the intresting part is in a imaginary girl in the story..whose name is khanak..

And khanak reads the book..and gets totally shocked..and the moment was something really heart breaking for her..

And others too who wer hearing his story..was shocked wen he was explaining his story..khanak moves to another seat and cries a lot..!!

And atlast they reaches to mumbai..shaan gets down frm the bus..but khanak..who doesn't knw anything abt the city..was alone sitting in the bus..

Rahul,who was the one who heard everything abt them..feels really bad for her..

R:aap..ab kaha jaayenge?

She doesn't answers..and tears cms frm her eyes..

R:aap royiye mat..agar aap chahe tho..aapki is nayi sheher mein kuch din rehne ka main intzaam kar sakti hoon..

And no other way was left near her..she agrees and goes with him..and out rahul's driver was waiting for him out..he was his best frnd too..when they wer abt to leave..shaan..calls him..runs towards him as they had their introduction in the bus..

And he also sits inside the car..

R:hello?tum ye kaha jaa rahi ho?aur meri car mein kyu beithe ho?

S:main vahi aarahi jaha tumlog jaa rahe ho..

R:matlab??anyways..meri car se jaldi utro..c'mon..

S:mere bhai..plss..mujhe yaha aapke alaawa aur koi nhi hai..i mean..main tho yaha nayi hoon..aur aapke alaawa main tho yaha kisi ko jaanta bhi nhi hoon..

R:(rahul was totally irritated..but was helpless)isiliye kehte hai ..ki kisi ko help karte hai tho uska side effects bhi sehna padta hai..jaise ab ek aake beitha hai..

S:tumne kuch kaha??

R:nhi..nhi..main tho bus yahi keh rahi thi..ki..aapka aane se main tho dhany hogayi...

And they leaves frm there..

Rahul was a choreographer..who was living in a filmcity colony..ovr thr..he introduces khanak and shaan to a aunty who used to take care of their home..and at whose home,they wer for rent..

So..morning rahul and his frnd gets ready to go to filmcity..and khanak runs and comes to him telling that she also want to cm wid him that she is scared to stay thr alone..he says ok and she sits in the car..and frm brhind again shaan runs and cms telling that he also want to cm..

R:kyun??tumhe bhi dar lagtha hai kya??

S:mujhe dar..nhi..nhi..bilkul nhi..

Tumlog filmcity jaa rahi ho na..shooting set par..maine director sir ko meri kahaani sunana chahta hoon..phir dekhna..vo pakka iska film banaayenge..

R:(rahul thinks)ye main kaha phas gaya hoon??godd helpp..!!

S:(sits in the car)tho chale??

R:haan haan..kyun nhi..isse pehle peeche se koi aur aajaye..nikalte hai..

And they moves frm thr to filmcity ..

And when they reaches to filmcity..,there was director sitting..who was Mr.khandelwal..very famous movie director..who was funny and serious at times..

Thn rahul introduces shaan and khanak..to the director..and shaan started telling his story to the director..and khanak was standing nearby..

S:aur vo ek ladki ke liye khat likhna shuroo karta hai aur vo ladki padna bhi..(and he continues his story)

Aur aise vo acchi ladki kuch jaane bina uske saath aane ke liye tayyar hota hai..)

Thn the director cuts him off and tells..

Khandelwal:stop..stop..ek acchi..,pyari,jiski dil bht saaf hai..vo..ek anjaan ladka jab bulaate hai..tab chali jaathi hai..hm??

S:haan sir(he tells wid his deep teethy smile)

Khandelwal:is kahaani ke liye jaake kisi aur ko dhoondo..main nhi kar sakta..

S:lekin sir..aap beithiye..main aapko explain karta hoon..

Khandelwal:ab koi explain karna hai..sabsey badi baat ye hai..ki ek acchi,aur saaf dil ki ladki kabhi kisi ke saath aise nahi jaa sakthi..

Khanak..who was standing a side and hearing all this..goes near to them..and tells tht..

K:nahi..vo ladki..yuhi agar koi bulaaye tho jaane wali nhi hai..vo aisa kabhi nhi kar sakti thi..iske peeche bhi ek kahaani hai..sabsey badi kahaani..

Khandelwal:lekin aap kaise jaante hai..??

K:vo..shaan..shaan..ne hi mujhe bataya tha..hai na shaan..aapko shaayad yaad nhi hai..lekin mujhe yaad hai..

Shaan unknowingly looks into her face as he doesn't knw anything..

And khanak..started telling her story wat happened in her life..

Flashbak.................

To be continued...

So..guy hr's the parthope u all will lyk it

But plss..need more comments

And yeahh..will b bak wid the starting of first love and romance of shanak..and khanak ki kahaani..

Your comments and suggestions are always welcm

Thnk you..

Regards?

Edited by shamasallfav - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow man....good one.....pls continue.....
i think u should get more into the depth of the characters..... my suggestion... hope u don mind
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnxx priya 4 commenting...
ohk....will try better on the next part...actually khanak's character should nt be revealed much as it ll b shown in the flashbak...
i ll try my best in the cmng parts...thnxx priya..once again...!!:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice new approach to story..good job keep it up.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thnxx shriya.....
guyzz....plss need more comment n support....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oye shama... u better continue this..... its a diff track......pls continue this
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was cute yaar plz continou yaar u should right pyar ka ehsaas ff cuz i thought it was topic i never opend it plz............do that and it was lovely

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