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Nisha

@Nisha2

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Posted: 14 years ago

#261

Hey Beeni wow new OS, I loved it, how I wish you were one of the creatives?😊

Aww Shaan was adorable, i loved him, he was so jealous, and it was was great to see Khanak go to college, looking forward to the next part, once again great OS honey.😊

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saaaz

@saaaz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#262

Haila....this was oh so endearing...the concept of khanak going to college....loved loved it...good job Beeni...

BTW...are you the only one who I have not tormented about leaving a comment on my SS...are yu? are yu??? ...😡

btw how's married life treating you??? 😆😆😆

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dtu

@sampar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#263

loved it 👏👏....khanak going to college was awesome......hahah jealous shaan😆...shanak are perfect together yaaar.........awesome ....waiting for second part

cheers

shai

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Krishna

@kubare

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Posted: 14 years ago

#264

Beeeennnnniiiiiii Loved it lvoed it loved it...God....loved it!!!!!!!

Aww...Khanak going to cllege, Shaan all jealous, One Woman Man indeed....Khanak oblivious to Shaan's true feelings and Shaan confused himself...

What days those were nah....miss my old RBO...miss them...😭😭

God cant wait to read th next part from you soon.....so hurry up...😆

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ZARA ALI

@AzaraA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#265

wah tofeeeees kia kahani thi yar to gud ap ka nam?

by the way zara here

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-Simple-

@-Simple-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#266

LOVED IT! It was the first thing that I did in the morning😆. I mean read it and I was still in bed😆. Way to start a week😃. Everything was just too good! I just love your OS's. I seriously do not know how you do it. I cant even make up one in my mind😕. Just loved the whole concept. Her going college, Shaan going to pick her, getting jealous. Everything! Just hope theirs a kiss😳😆

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tofeeees

@tofeeees

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Posted: 14 years ago

#267

Woaahhh i got comments from so many people on such a mediocre OS!😲 seriously i didn't think it was great at all! when i was reading it again i was frowning :s

LOL but thank you SO much everyone! 🤗i can't reply to each one separately but thank you Rupa, Deepa, Priya, Vandu, Shalini, ammu, Yumna, Varsha, May, Naveen, Angel_9, saaz, Adventure_gurl, Saira, Nisha, Shai, Krishna, Zara and Anisha! *phew*

@angel_9: thank you so much for reading all the OSs and liking them! :) you should be more active on the forum too we'll all love it :) what's your name?

@Azara: I'm beeni :)

@Saira: yaar i get too lazy to PM! :s it's not easy lol chalo i will PM when i update the next part okay? and LOL i'm not losing that inspiration to be besharam i just didn't think i COULD be in this OS...ahem i mean this part *hint* *hint* 😆 what you thought my previous ones were less besharam too?😲 yea well i guess they were! i guess i'm running out of ideas for romantic scenes LOL it can't be holding the waist kissing the hair all the time can it? you'll get bored!😆

edit: Ooops i forgot Pooja and Heena! 😳 thank you guys! Ps: Pooja i'm like your ULTIMATE fan cuz of your FF Dostana 😳😍 you're an amzing writer! you really are!😃

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NinjaInPyjamas

@NinjaInPyjamas

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Posted: 14 years ago

#268

Beeni diiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!

this is soooooooo cute!!

the entire convo was adorable!!!

Muah!! muah!! muah!! *sorry heena di*🤣

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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#269

@Beeni; You and losing inspiration?😲 naa! ACTUALLY Karishma should be your biggest inspiration,think from her mind-set 😆

I love all your OS's whether they are cute or beshram,even a kiss on a forehead will do beeni...anything goes well with Shanak 😍

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destinylove

@destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#270

@ Beeni soooooooooooooooooo good yaar I cant say How much happy i am seeing Khanak entering college and shaan coming to pick her up..with that jealousness upon seeing Rishi...

WOW !! This is really so sweet...loved it please continue as early as posible

"One Woman" man...awesome title cant wait for the next part seriously @

Nisha and saira I loved both re comments on Beenis OS that was really very good.r