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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#251

LOL...."One Woman Man" Indeed !! Burthal kahi ka...!

Loved it...Post the Part-2 soon !!

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-YasharanArshi-

@-YasharanArshi-

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#252

Beeni ... Muaaah ... Second part kidhar hain ???? Jaldi update karo !!!!

Shaan all possesive and jealous .. HOTT HOTT HOTTTTTTTTTTTTTT ...
I can imagine his Angry looks ... WOW he looks so yummmy... Drooool .. Droooooooooll !!

Loved the comment .... Kaash Kaaash main Natasha ke baare main soch raha hota !!!! ... All confused Shaaan ...

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Amritha

@OlicityFan

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#253

hahhahahaha....one woman man....woh bhi SHAAN!...at tht tym!!...

awesome OS beeni!...luvd it! ;)

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-SYS-

@-SYS-

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#254

ARGH.

SO CUTE!

I want to go back in time and have the CVs incorporate this in the track too!

Dude-Update fast!

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Yasharanrocks

@Yasharanrocks

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#255

awsmeeeeeeeee.plz update 2nd part soon.....

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angel_9

@angel_9

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#256

i have read all the OS u wrote its awesome..................loved it n

One Woman Man is fantastic loved it too................

shaan telling khanak that all the guys studying in her class is her bhaa..........loved it😃

update next part soon......

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#257

Could just picture Khanak at college and Shaan jealous....Perfect senario....Well done Beeni👏, can't wait to read more😃.....

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#258

loved this one keep it up!

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iluvmanar

@iluvmanar

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#259

o god Beeni..it's awesum yaar ..luvved it...

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Sairaaaa

@Sairaaaa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#260

Beeniiii....Another OS!!! I love you!🤗 Why don't you pm?

This is cuteness filled without any besharami,how comes your writing too many OS with less besharami these days😳😆 have you lost your inspiration on those?

Nevertheless...I still love it,especially Shaan how cute is he? I mean how cutely he is yearning for Khanak to call him a 'hottie' instead of burthal,it's typical him and his 'BHA' ranting was the best and "Iam a ONE WOMAN man" LMAO!🤣 What the hell! I wish khanak understood this and gave back to him in her charismatic style that his 'do aurat insaan' not ONE!😊 BUT he realised at the end if he was one woman man...very cute.😳 Got to say this...Did you realise that this OS of yours was so totally based on characteristic traits of Shantanu,it had everything beeni of his persona.Believe me!👏 ⭐️

Anyways; LOVED the jealous Shaan, very beautifully written and kept up to the flawed shaan which I loved.😃 Waiting for next one...update soon na!🤗