*::.~FF Dostana~.::* OLD CHAP PUT UP AGAIN - Page 6

awesome update...
please cont soon
thanx 4 pm

i just LOVE the way u write.... the way u wrote it was just awesome!!

I absolutely loved the part !!

too good...i specially liked shaan nd khanak's convo..i mean they r straight fwd..very frank...no misunderstanding...love nd crush is a diff thing...they discussed it....tell each other hw they feel..its true fship...same happened wid me...i told him i have a crush on him..abhi colg start hue 10 days hi hue the...aur logo ne samjha ji m proposing him...nd started taking abt my character.....god....it was totally insane.....ab to i cant trust any1....but u showed gr8 fship....good yaar....really d convo touched my heart....do continue

hey it was so nice...waiting for next part..

Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn

hey pooja...gr8 continuation......shanak are playing 'the friends game' in the FF too...... :P

ps- i was the one who said tht ur FF had no obstacles!! 😉

i was writing the thing and i remeberd abt wat u had said... didnt hve time to go cheack who had said it........... anyway... thanks fr liking the update and thanks fr the critique!😃 keep them coming... so i can mke this FF bettr fr my dear fellow odhanians🤗

Originally posted by: sweetdoc

too good...i specially liked shaan nd khanak's convo..i mean they r straight fwd..very frank...no misunderstanding...love nd crush is a diff thing...they discussed it....tell each other hw they feel..its true fship...same happened wid me...i told him i have a crush on him..abhi colg start hue 10 days hi hue the...aur logo ne samjha ji m proposing him...nd started taking abt my character.....god....it was totally insane.....ab to i cant trust any1....but u showed gr8 fship....good yaar....really d convo touched my heart....do continue

thanks!! and abt the colg! i knw same happened with my frnd! some ppl seriously need to gt a life! any way thanks fr liking it!!!! 😃😃😃😃

Originally posted by: togepe30

I absolutely loved the part !!

And Shaan went down on his knee's to propose friendship??? hahaha !!

So they will be friends now....And then hope we get to see Guys hitting Khanak and Shaan getting annoyed and jealous !! lol !!

And now you have to promise to continue soon !!

U are not allowed to dissapear for a long time...like last time...So Update soon !!

Luv,

Vandu

sorry vandu bt i will hve to disappear... am working on the story fr the FF contest... thats why... bt dnt worry i will update as soon as i can....... bt after updating It's complicated.... im gonna update them alternatively😊😊

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84

Pooja dear

As usual superb!!! and excellent!!! luved the photos of khanak 's dress.and they have hit off as friends too!!! very good!!!

thanks again shriya........ an i was thinking abt posting pics fr khanak's clothes always, coz we hve only seen her in traditional and then i will hve to describe wat she is wearing fr evryone to hve an image of her........ wat do u guys say?

Hey Pooja, Good one, Tashu and Khanak Friends, good good..loved it yaar..keep it up..