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Posted: 14 years ago

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Nilam - thanks dear....I loved the star you gave me....So happy that I got a star from you :)

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: togepe30
Awesome-Blossom part !!
Kya baat hai madam....U are fit to turn a CV now.....U will be having a superhit show on your hands !!

I was expecting an Os from you after seeing yesterday's episode....And you proved my hunch right !!! *Muahh*

Keep bringing on these lovely OS's !!

Love,

Vandu

Ahhhh babes 🤗

Vandu, only you think like that, but the Indian Censor Board and the associations would kill me with such stuffs....Gosh, I would never risk that 😆😆😆

Did you really expect for one from me?😲 But you didn't tell me :(

Thanks alot babes....

Love,

Amzy (only for you 😉)

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: kubare
Amrita darling.....wow wow wow....loved it dear...loved it....👏👏👏😛😳😳😃

Too late to comment on your darling, sorry

thanks for the comment, and loved it😛

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#364

Pagli aka Karishma....Vandu....If I get a warning or anything like that, I will never listen to you besharams.....here is it for you......AGL

Statutory warning issued

In to the night

"Shaadi ke baat woh pehli raat" Khanak murmured the name of the book she was reading and placed it under the pillow, blushing from what she had read. It was not what she thought of Suhaag Raat, as she knew that marriage means a male and a female living together sharing and caring everything but not as what she has read from the book. She smiled shyly and decided that she would do it as Shaan too wanted it. But how she would tell him that she too is ready for it, she kept on wondering as the flashbacks of Shaan's words and actions grumbled into her mind. "Idea" she murmured and ran downstairs in a very fast speed that the viewers would find the craziness and eagerness in her.

"Badam wala milk" Khanak placed the milk pot on the stove and wondered about why it was mentioned as badam wala milk and what the specialty of it is for the first night. She took the tray of nuts and lifted it to put them into the boiling milk, but she was stopped by a hand placed on her waist. She let go off the tray and hit her finger accidentally on the hot pot, which made her to yell out "ouch" she cried in pain. But it took few seconds to stop her totally as Shaan took her finger in to his mouth and sucked the pain out of her. She felt her inside squeeze when he sucked her finger with his experienced tongue, her breathing become ragged to beat his rhythm and she surrendered completely to him with a moan. She wanted to take back her finger in his mouth and suck it to taste him; she shuffled her feet with a stir. Shaan took a complete turn to look at her to see if there was a change in Khanak and she quickly ran out of the kitchen into the bedroom.

Shaan followed her into the bedroom unhurriedly and he was happy to see how Khanak was trying to keep it up to the level with him. She was leaning against the wardrobe door, with her eyes closed and the rise and fall of her breasts were of enough evidences to express her inner most feelings. He rummaged his fingers through his hair trying to control his feelings reminding himself to be patient and gentle with her. But his senses were being awakened by her since so long; he sneaked out his hand and took her hand gently. She became alleviated as he pulled her into his arms, placing her in the spot she deserved to be. She put her hands on his chest, but he took her in a tighter embrace, crushing her against him as if he could take her into him. She was being pulled further into him with his hands that were locked behind her back and she tiptoed to breathe fully.

"Don't you feel the way I feel, Khanak? I want to know how you feel..." Shaan whispered huskily into her ears, and turned to look into her eyes as she remained quiet. Khanak lifted her face and looked deep into his ravenous eyes and saw the desire in them that were already spilling in front of her. "I...Shantanu...." Khanak tried to talk, only her lips moved but no words came out. Shaan plummeted his face and took over her mouth in a kiss that was as light as a touch of a feather, accepting what he read in her eyes. She parted her lips helping him to explore every inch of her lips, tongue and even her teeth. She felt herself supple as the desire took over her mind and soul, upon hearing him murmuring his desire, with his eyes closed in concentration.

Her hands found their way around his neck and then his hair, pulling his head towards her as he lifted her in his arms to place her on the bed. He nestled around her like a bird, and showered a dozens of kisses that only had one meaning, consummation. Khanak smiled with pleasure and she twined her hands behind him as his hard chest crushed against her breasts. He lifted his head and pulled her closer into him, making her to feel his bulge against her belly and bit his lip seeing her cheeks becoming bright red in color.

Shaan knew that he could not control his emotions any longer and he dimmed the lights to make Khanak feel comfortable, but which would never let him down in exploring her body that he could see so clearly under the dim light. Together with the gentleness that matched the desires, they travelled up into the heavens, which was a place just for them, only for them. Like an incomplete puzzle that was completed after so many years, they danced together to the song that was not hearable to the rest of the souls enjoying the night's sleep.

Edited by amrita2010 - 14 years ago

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destinylove

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Posted: 14 years ago

#365

dear amrita., i read it twice already....suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb!!!it is too good...u are really an awesome writer....thanx for this wonderful week end treat.

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Simi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#366

Amrita!!!!!!!!!!!!!.👍🏼👏...

My heart skipped a beat and started to raise...haiii I do hope they show the passionate side of Shaan!!! Kya likhti ho....want to hug and kiss you!!!❤️🤗!

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-Amrita2010

@-Amrita2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#367

Originally posted by: sshriyaa84
dear amrita., i read it twice already....suuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuperb!!!it is too good...u are really an awesome writer....thanx for this wonderful week end treat.

Shriyaaa....AGL, dear :)

Thanks for the comment!

I hope that I'm not exposing so much, but glad it was upto your expectations

Edited by amrita2010 - 14 years ago

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#368

Originally posted by: simiv
Amrita!!!!!!!!!!!!!.👍🏼👏...

My heart skipped a beat and started to raise...haiii I do hope they show the passionate side of Shaan!!! Kya likhti ho....want to hug and kiss you!!!❤️🤗!

Babes, AGL....I hope you are still breathing ...lol....

They cannot show all these on TV, but feel it and imagine it if you want....lol

Aajaa meri bachi, jhappis aur pappis from me too!!!

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karishma

@shanakyasharan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#369

😍
🤪
👏
❤️
☺️☺️☺️
☺️

amritaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa🤗

world class OS ever..........toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo gooooooooooooooddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddd

ur wrds the feelings the emotions every single thing was like oustanding

i read it 3 times in a row n still will continue in the night

thnk u soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much sweety

a master piece by u

superb just tooo good

trust me go b a writer n c how the world follows yr writing👍🏼

❤️
👏
🤪

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-Amrita2010

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Posted: 14 years ago

#370

Karishma, I thought you have fainted, after reading it....anyways, I'm done....I might not come to IF tonight again....
Thanks, meri TRP partner...lol

I cannot become a writer, uff, I don't want, because I love my profession....lol...
Now enjoy the weekend with this ....love you too, pagli

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