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destinylove

@destinylove

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#211

Hey pooja dear.,

👏awe some....honestly "hugs"👏.And the romantic encounter between shaan/khanak is put in such a beatutiful manner so much so that I was able to visualise the whole scene before my eyes.Very well done u are too good in that scene.

and u left us puzzled with shaan going to tashu and khanak is seen with abhi.Can't wait ot know what this is upto and how shaan/khanak are going to come toegether.

so please continue as and when u can.

This chapeter 14 episode is just rocking..pooja. u are a great romantic writer...heartfelt appreciaition to u .luv shriya

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Krishna

@kubare

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#212

Pooja darling very well written dear...just the right touch...you did very well dear ..so Natasha having feelings for Abhi...Shan jealous on seeing Abhi touch Khanak's back as well as the dialogue in the kitchen...Meri Khanak.....😆😆😆

Can't wait for more from you dear 😃

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May

@The_May_Rose

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#213

Nice update Pooja, Natasha's changing feelings and ShaNak intense moments....Very well writen as usaul😊....

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Rasha

@RACHA90

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#214

liked it very much ....thnx for the pm

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Dhrashtee

@dhrashtee

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#215

pooja...

very nice update... loved shaan without shirt... the only thing i could think of at that time was the new promo i had seen....the sawariyaa style.... shaan in towel, dancing....... awsome update... plz cont soon....

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#216

Jealous Shaan.. waiting for more of that..

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-Unknown-22

@-Unknown-22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#217

That was indeed very beautiful..the scene was described perfectly...hope you continue soon can't wait to read more

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noorya

@...Noorya...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#218

AMAZIN PART DEAR!

Shaan was feelin jalous...Khanak was feelin desapointed and Tashu was feelin jalous😆😆...only Abhi was feelin normal🤣...

but seriously it was a mindwlong part specialy the sizzelin ShaNak part😍....and Tashu feelin somethin for Abhi..good sign😉

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Zeba

@FebruaryFlower

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#219

Great update Pooja!!

Lots of passion and romance. It was beautifully written, with no awkwardness. In fact it flowed really nicely. It was quite different to the previous chapters, but still a great read. I like the gradual progress between Shantanu and Khanak's relationship.

The bond between Abhi and Natasha is really sweet. Hopefully this will develop into something beautiful too!!!

Looking forward to the next chapter as always!!!!!