17/4:VanvasD5;dasarath perceives yamdut

part2

Evening time, outside the hut there is a fire; ram is sitting watching the fire intently. Sita seating at some distance preparing what it seems atta ki goli. Laxman standing and watching over them-[ankit in his unique statue mode which I hate]

Suddenly the forest creatures make sounds, all sorts of animals make sounds, sita looks a little frightened. Laxman promptly takes out his bow, salutes it and is sounding with it. All these seem not to affect ram, he is unperturbed.

S: Raghunandan, what thoughts are you lost in?

R: today is the fifth day of vanvas, and father's memories are coming to me again and again, how dearly he has loved me and all us brothers.

L: yes and his third queen has also loved us a lot

R: Laxman! You haven't got past your anger

L: how can I brother, after what chhotimaa did to us?

R: (rising up to Laxman)

No one can do anything to you, its destiny, you will have to accept, its our destiny that we will be living in forest dear brother. Think of the word life- JIVAN : van is hidden in it, we all have to face the hardships in our life, that is van my dear brother.

L: I am thinking of the day we were returning from mithila, you gave Bharat his life back[ jivandan] and he gave you van in return

R: please, never again suspect him, when a man is in trouble, his mind play tricks with him, Bharat can never be a part of this, I know my Bharat : he worships justice and faith. Rid yourself of all the jealousy, bitterness and misconception, its the root of all evil. My Bharat , he is so good!i am happy here, only thing i am sad about is i will see all the mothers, father, urmilla,bharat, satrughna, mandavi, shrutakirti only after 14 years.

laxman is unmoved at the mention of urmilla, uff ankit

Bharat has called in a conference with Satrughna, Shrutakirti and Mandavi.

B: I have decided not to elongate my stay here, I am going back to Ayodhya, I keep on thinking something is wrong, I miss ram Bhaiyya.

Satrughna: then lets call ram and sita and meet them here

B: but why,? Ram promised to call me back, to hear from me, but there has been no message of him lately. No sound from him, I keep on seeing nightmares, something is wrong, there is some deep trouble in Ayodhya.

Dasarath is sitting and wailing to Kaushalya and Sumitra about his life and failure, he keeps on telling what a mistake he has made what a fool he has been. Sumitra and Kaushalya try to console him.

Enters Urmilla, Dasarath is all more pained in his distraught to see her. She is simply dressed, taken off all her ornaments except a few necessary for a married woman to keep. Dasarath keeps wailing and wailing.

Urmilla really looks good, the pain is coming out trully in her plain jane look. , her acting has improved.

Continued………..

part3

Dasarath screams, he is not feeling well, his hert is scratching, it seems to him his end is cometh. Kaushalya and Sumitra are really worried.

A wailing Dasarath suddenly perceives a black dressed man coming towards him, that is yamdut . Dasarath shouts and orders Kaushalya to bring his bow and arrow, he will not give up to him so soon, not before his ram returns.

K: please maharaj, what are you talking about, these are all illusions

S: maharaj, have courage, you are the raghukulsurya.

D: it seems, the time has come for the sun to set. look yonder , stands there yamdut but I will fight. The war I raged against sambarasur and won with Kaikeyi was not a win, I did not win, I lost when I promised her those two boons. But I will not lose now, I will not die until I see my ram

Kaushlaya and Sumitra are shocked, they cannot say a word

Suddenly the place is filled with divine light and a royally dressed ram enters.

Narayan comes to set his father free.

Dasarath is pleased with this, but again others could not see it.

D: now I recount my sins, the sins that made me cursed

U: father, please do not say so, you r our holder

D: but my holder has left me for 14 years, my curse daughter.

S: you cannot have such curse my king

D: yes I had, I was young then, but I did something for which I was cursed that I will die of the pains of separation from my dearest son

All three ladies are unspeakable.

it seesm, laxman does all the work

thansk tan for the update.the story is moving too fast.
i thought dasrath will narrate the shravan stroy to his queens and we will see a flashback of that..

GREAT update tan!!!

hats off!! to the actor who is playing the role of dashrath ,he is a genius actor !!!!

i just loved the cute hut of RAM-SITA !!!

laxman was doing all the work !!! as a true devotee to RAMJI!!

Originally posted by: priyav

thansk tan for the update.the story is moving too fast.
i thought dasrath will narrate the shravan stroy to his queens and we will see a flashback of that..

lets see,there isnext monday to watch i am sure they will show the details of it, if not in flash back then atleast in dasarath's narration.

Originally posted by: sita11

GREAT update tan!!!

hats off!! to the actor who is playing the role of dashrath ,he is a genius actor !!!!

i just loved the cute hut of RAM-SITA !!!

laxman was doing all the work !!! as a true devotee to RAMJI!!

hut is beautiful

but how come he is so expressionless when urmillas name is mentioned?

yes lakshman's character in the show has no other expression on his face other than anger...they should try to show his emotional side too urmila cries all the time but lakshman is least bothered...even i felt something missing in gurmeet debina chemistry these days...they should make more improvements in the show and show things in bit more detail

YEAH!!! laxman shud have shown some expressions at urmila's name !!