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sabyasachi

@sabydeep

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: gurmeetrocks

WOW SABY BHAIYA U R JUST THE PERFECT VALMIKI FOR OUR GURMEEET

AWESOME WORK KEEP POSTING MORE

👏

thanx dear

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sabyasachi

@sabydeep

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: jingjing
awww....its sooo emotional.....its just out of the world....i m being fan of u n ur poetry....u have discribed Gurmeet's life so well....aapka hindi knowledge Sarahniya hai....i wish me bhi poems likh pati....hats offf to u....i salute ur true talent...i was about to cry while reading Gurmeet Kavya....u have a true talent so precious n rare...kudos to u Bhaiya.....keep it up

thanx dear ,its all bcz of all of ur good wishes that i am able to write

Edited by sabydeep - 16 years ago

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sita

@sitakshii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sabydeep

BEGINNING OF RAMAYAN

Sagar ne jab RAMAYAN banana chahe

RAM ko khoje ,RAM KE khoj me dhaye

RAM kaise paye ye chinta unko hi sata rahe

bin RAMKE RAMAYAN kaise hum bana paye

prathambar jab GURMEET KO uo dekha

tabhi se RAMKA nata unse lekha

bas ek jhalak hi,bas ek jhalak hi

dekhe to kahe RAM hamare aa gaye

lage treta ka bhagwan,jag kalyan karan

jaise aaye ek manuj ka deha dhare

ye punya katha he ,ye punya katha he

jo sune unka RAMJI kalyan kare

hum katha sunaye

tab se suru huyi uo amar kahani

jiska nayak GURMEET,nayika DEBINA maharani

us punya katha ko ,us punya katha ko

aao sab eksang mile shraban kare

jise shraban kare to lage jaise

bhagwan shish par ashish dhare

hum katha sunaye

RAM ue charit jise,RAM ue charit jise nibha ke

GURMEET man mandir me sthan dhare

bhakti ke asan pe bithake unko

bhaktibhab se bandan kare

ye punya katha he, ye punya katah he

jo sune unka RAMJI kalyan kare

hum katha sunaye

saby u hv written everything abt GURMEET in an excellent way 👏

but the above lines r just soultouching lines

when sagars first saw gurmeet they were really mesmerized by his charm & the humblenss

GURMEET is down to earth & humble guy tht it reflects from his face 👏

the above lines just suit him to the perfect

very very soultouching & perfect lines !!!👏👏

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sita

@sitakshii

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: sabydeep

AN OVERALL DESCRIPTION

SiyaRam ke dulhare,GURMEET sabke nayan ke tare

ban gaye prano se bhi pyare

unke JAI BOLO

Sabke MAN-AMBAR ke tare

unki JAI BOLO

HIRE se bhi aanmol

kisi se na jaye unhe tol

bhakti ka darwaja di khol

unki JAI BOLO

Jo bhi rup dhare aaye

uo rup hriday me aake samaye

koi hriday se na mita paye

unki JAI BOLO

har premi ke preet

ban gaye sabke MAN KE MEET

gaye unka bandan geet

unki JAI BOLO

Amar katha he jan

jiska nayak GURMEET SHRIMAN

Karte he sabka kalyan

unki JAI BOLO

hriday ka uo he spandan

sebak ka uo he SHREE NARAYAN

bhakti bhab une kare arpan

unki JAI BOLO

great 👏

really gurmeet is like a precious diamond as u said saby & really gurmeet cannot b compared to anything in this world !!!

& he is very very close to our hearts as u described in the lines bann gaye prano se bhi pyaare

& gurmeets image as LORD RAM will always b in our hearts & mind as said in the lines -jo roop hriday me aake samaya ,ban gaye mann ke meet !!!!!

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sabyasachi

@sabydeep

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: sita11

saby u hv written everything abt GURMEET in an excellent way 👏

but the above lines r just soultouching lines

when sagars first saw gurmeet they were really mesmerized by his charm & the humblenss

GURMEET is down to earth & humble guy tht it reflects from his face 👏

the above lines just suit him to the perfect

very very soultouching & perfect lines !!!👏👏

thanx sitadi for ur loving comments.its so nice of u.

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sabyasachi

@sabydeep

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: chandnii
Saby after reading ur full Gurmeet kavya
i ddnt understand hw i praise

m really speechless

agar kuchh bhi kaha woh tuchh hi hoga aapke samaksh

"Ek mahan kavi ho tum

Gurmi ke valmiki ho tum

Tumsa shreshth kavi na koi

Tumsa bhakt duja na hoi "

thnx a lot for putting ur full dedication n ur soul for making dis kavya

really amazing 👏

👏

I am getting so much emotional with such lovely comments

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bestfan

@bestfan

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#27

Wooooooooooooo bhaiya speechless job! What shall i say,If My Gurmeet bhaiya reads it,U will become one of his favorite.You are sooooooooooo talanted.Oh god!Its ryming, simple, meaningful and too many n much.It's breathtaking.I am speechless.U have written everything absolutely correct and sweetly.Outstanding!!!!!!!!!!

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bestfan

@bestfan

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: sita11

great 👏

really gurmeet is like a precious diamond as u said saby & really gurmeet cannot b compared to anything in this world !!!

& he is very very close to our hearts as u described in the lines bann gaye prano se bhi pyaare

& gurmeets image as LORD RAM will always b in our hearts & mind as said in the lines -jo roop hriday me aake samaya ,ban gaye mann ke meet !!!!!

HIRE se bhi aanmol

kisi se na jaye unhe tol

bhakti ka darwaja di khol

This line is totally correct.I am loving this kavya.How much time did it take to write everythnig?

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sabyasachi

@sabydeep

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#29

[QUOTE=bestfan]
HIRE se bhi aanmol

kisi se na jaye unhe tol

bhakti ka darwaja di khol

This line is totally correct.I am loving this kavya.How much time did it take to write everythnig?
[/QUOTE]thanx mishti for ur sweet comments.

well ,i took one whole evening to compose and write the poem

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sabyasachi

@sabydeep

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#30

CONCLUSION

Der(1.5) sal pehele jo nata humne unse jode

bane janam janam ka nata uo koi kaise unko tode

Jane hum hoga RAMAYAN ka samapan

ye satya kathin he par karna hoga isko barnan

par GURMEET se nata hamara sada aise hi rahenga

RAMAYAN ke bad bhi hriday pe sreshtha asan uo dharega

jo bhi abhinay kare sada safalta ue paye

binti ishwar se bhakta bane hum kar jaye

jiban me jo chahe ue sukh ue sare hi paye

koi kashtha na ho kabhi unko anandit sada rehe jaye

hriday ke asan par hum une bithaye

koi kisise na unki mahanta tol paye

barnan kare unki gatha ashrudhara behe jaye

ek bhakta hum samanya bhagwan ka jibani likhke sunaye

koi bhul ho humse to kshama karo he swami

hum das tumhare,tum ho prabhubar jagat ke antarwami

kaise katenga din RAMAYAN bina ei na soch paye

GURMEET ka darshan nahi honga ye sochkar hi aansu aaye

mat bhulna humko ham hain aapke das

manaspat he aapka hain prabhu nirantar bas

iske baad kisi bhi charit aap jabbhi nibhaye

safalta aapke shish ko chume ,khyati aap paye

aap sab charit kar sakte

par koi duja na RAM kar paye

chale na lekhani aur kaise achanak hi tham jaye

man ka jo bhab he uo kavya kare hum sunaye

hum samanya ek manb he,kaise gun aapka gaye

aap amar rahe sada ,katha aapka amar rahe jaye

JAYATU GURMEET bol katha hum samapt karaye

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