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Posted: 16 years ago
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BEGINNING OF RAMAYAN


Sagar ne jab RAMAYAN banana chahe

RAM ko khoje ,RAM KE khoj me dhaye

RAM kaise paye ye chinta unko hi sata rahe

bin RAMKE RAMAYAN kaise hum bana paye

prathambar jab GURMEET KO uo dekha

tabhi se RAMKA nata unse lekha

bas ek jhalak hi,bas ek jhalak hi

dekhe to kahe RAM hamare aa gaye

lage treta ka bhagwan,jag kalyan karan

jaise aaye ek manuj ka deha dhare

ye punya katha he ,ye punya katha he

jo sune unka RAMJI kalyan kare

hum katha sunaye

tab se suru huyi uo amar kahani

jiska nayak GURMEET,nayika DEBINA maharani

us punya katha ko ,us punya katha ko

aao sab eksang mile shraban kare

jise shraban kare to lage jaise

bhagwan shish par ashish dhare

hum katha sunaye

RAM ue charit jise,RAM ue charit jise nibha ke

GURMEET man mandir me sthan dhare

bhakti ke asan pe bithake unko

bhaktibhab se bandan kare

ye punya katha he, ye punya katah he

jo sune unka RAMJI kalyan kare

hum katha sunaye

Edited by sabydeep - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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GURMEET IN RAMAYAN


GURMEET ji me RAM KE CHABI DIKHPAYI

GURMEET ji me RAM KE CHABI DIKHPAYI

DEKH chabi RAMJI ka man RAM une kehalayi

GURMEET JI ME RAM CHABI DEKH PAYI

EK MANGAL MURAT RAM CHABI DARSHAYI

guru vasishtha ke ashram me pratham GURMEET ko dekha

suryabandan ke uhe chabi dekh RAM ka nata unse lekha

har bhab ko usne aise jhalkye

baikunth jaise dharti pe aa jaye

ek manab ban kar bhi bhagwan rup unone darshayi

GURMEET JI ME RAM CHABI DEKH PAYI

EK MANGAL MURAT RAM CHABI DARSHAYI


janakpuri ke swayambar me shivdhanu RAM NE TORE

MATA SITA SE JANAM JANAM KA NATA PRABHUBAR JORE

us birta ki gungatha sare jag jo ja rahe gayi

jisa koi hila na payi,ue dhanush prabhu tor jayi

UN PARAMPURUSH KE,UN JAGATPURUSH KE

UN BEERPURUSH KE,UN SRESHTHAPURUSH KE

UN SABHI PURUSH KE CHABI AAYE EK PURUSH ME HI JO SAMAYI

GURMEETJI HE UE PURUSH,SWAYAM SREERAM BAN JAYI

siya ke premi ke bhab aise uo jhalkayi

siyapati RAM jaise dharti par aa jayi

lage NARAYAN dhare manuj deha jaise aayi

GURMEETJI ME RAM CHABI DEKH PAYI

GURMEETJI ME RAM CHABI DEKH PAYI

pita ke agga palan hetu raghubar jo ban jaye

sang lakhan siya liye RAMJI ban ke path ko dhaye

us aggakari putra ke rup aiseunone dikhayi

sab pita soche putra GURMEET sa hum kyun na payi

nahi sadharan uo,mangalkaran uo

karunakaran uo,SHREE NARAYAN uo

sare rup unme dekhke namna man une kar jayi

GURMEET JI ME RAM CHABI DEKH PAYI

EK MANGAL MURAT RAM CHABI DARSHAYI


sita ka haran jab dusht ravan ne kiya

RAM se ho gayi alag unki pranpriya rani SIYA

US KASHTHA BYATHA KO,us dukh ki gatha ko

us kashtha byatha ko , dukh ki gatha ko

aise uo jhalkayi

LAGE SATYA ME KAL KA CHAKRA ULTA GHUM TRETA chali jaye

jis yug ka nayak GURMEET RAM us yug me hume pahuchahe

RAVAN ka kar ant prabhu ne siya ko phir se paye

sang liye banar sena samul ravan ko mar bhagaya

us birta ke chitra dekh sraddha se shish jhukh jayi

AAMAL ANCHAN MAN TRONA SAMAN kahe bandan unka karayi

kaise dibya sudarshan RAMCHANDRA ban jaye

nar-rupi NARAYAN RAMCHANDRA ban jayi

DEKH chabi RAMJI ka man RAM une kehalayi

GURMEET JI ME RAM CHABI DEKH PAYI

EK MANGAL MURAT RAM CHABI DARSHAYI

har bhab ko usne aise jhalkye

baikunth jaise dharti pe aa jaye

ek manab ban kar bhi bhagwan rup unone darshayi

GURMEET JI ME RAM CHABI DEKH PAYI

EK MANGAL MURAT RAM CHABI DARSHAYI


Edited by sabydeep - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AN OVERALL DESCRIPTION


SiyaRam ke dulhare,GURMEET sabke nayan ke tare

ban gaye prano se bhi pyare

unke JAI BOLO

Sabke MAN-AMBAR ke tare

unki JAI BOLO

HIRE se bhi aanmol

kisi se na jaye unhe tol

bhakti ka darwaja di khol

unki JAI BOLO

Jo bhi rup dhare aaye

uo rup hriday me aake samaye

koi hriday se na mita paye

unki JAI BOLO


har premi ke preet

ban gaye sabke MAN KE MEET

gaye unka bandan geet

unki JAI BOLO

Amar katha he jan

jiska nayak GURMEET SHRIMAN

Karte he sabka kalyan

unki JAI BOLO

hriday ka uo he spandan

sebak ka uo he SHREE NARAYAN

bhakti bhab une kare arpan

unki JAI BOLO
Edited by sabydeep - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow, bravo, Saby!👏👏👏 You have done a fantabulous job of Gurmeet kavitha! I don't understand Hindi fully, but I understand your poems. You have put your heart and soul in to this task. I love it and your dedication! I am very proud of you bro! Keep up the good work. I hope that Gurmeet comes soon and reads all your poems. He will probably get super emotional in having a fan like you😊 Superb, I can't describe in words, but you definitely have!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mallika113

Wow, bravo, Saby!👏👏👏 You have done a fantabulous job of Gurmeet kavitha! I don't understand Hindi fully, but I understand your poems. You have put your heart and soul in to this task. I love it and your dedication! I am very proud of you bro! Keep up the good work. I hope that Gurmeet comes soon and reads all your poems. He will probably get super emotional in having a fan like you😊 Superb, I can't describe in words, but you definitely have!

I AM SO HAPPY DI,TO GET SUCH A WONDERFUL COMMENT FROM U.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Saby after reading ur full Gurmeet kavya
i ddnt understand hw i praise
m really speechless
agar kuchh bhi kaha woh tuchh hi hoga aapke samaksh
"Ek mahan kavi ho tum
Gurmi ke valmiki ho tum
Tumsa shreshth kavi na koi
Tumsa bhakt duja na hoi "
thnx a lot for putting ur full dedication n ur soul for making dis kavya
really amazing 👏
👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wooooooooooooooooow, soooo beautiful Saby!!!! You have outstanding poetry skills!!!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: _LalithaJanaki_

Wooooooooooooooooow, soooo beautiful Saby!!!! You have outstanding poetry skills!!!👏

thanx lalitha di for ur sweet comments
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww....its sooo emotional.....its just out of the world....i m being fan of u n ur poetry....u have discribed Gurmeet's life so well....aapka hindi knowledge Sarahniya hai....i wish me bhi poems likh pati....hats offf to u....i salute ur true talent...i was about to cry while reading Gurmeet Kavya....u have a true talent so precious n rare...kudos to u Bhaiya.....keep it up
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabydeep




PRABHU KI BANDANA


Naman karo sweekar bhakta ka he jagat ke swami

Naman karo sweekar bhakta ka he jagat ke swami

Barnan kare katha jo tumhari sunlo antarwami

katha ye punya prasanga he,katha ye punya prasanga he

tan man ko patit paban karti bhagwat guna ganga he

Bhul koi ho humse to karna kshama jagswami

Bhul koi ho humse to karna kshama jagswami

Barnan kare katha jo tumhari sunlo antarwami




WOW SABY BHAIYA U R JUST THE PERFECT VALMIKI FOR OUR GURMEEET

AWESOME WORK KEEP POSTING MORE


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