FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ramas

Roshni what a great start. loved the first episode when did this happen. I guess when I was least active. let me read more episodes and post more comments 😊

Thanks Di! 😃
As I already told you...All you gr8 writers in this forum are my inspiration!! Thank you so much for the encouragement! I hope I live up to your expectations.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Sorry guys....I haven't been updating lately!
I have been very busy... I just wanted to share a piece of happy news with you all. I just got my degree's 2nd year results and I topped the university with 97.67% i.e 586/600!! And scored 100 in 4 subjects and 93 in other two!!!
Will surely try to update a part very soon! Sorry for the delay!
Edited by rosh.88 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
Whoa! Roshni! congrats!!!👍🏼
You are amazing!! 👏
now this good newz needs a celebration, wat abt a double update? huh?😉
waiting eagerly....😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
Hey rosh brilliant⭐️many congratulations.means its 🥳time.
n no regrets 4 delaying update
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
Thank you every one for waiting patiently. Finally I found time to update!!

PART 4

Rani follows Sukhiya who stops in front of a woman. She had a cross look on her face

and was also very strict.Sukhiya introduced Bhanumati to her. She hated all beautiful girls because she thought they would be arrogant and very lazy to work. This was probably called the hatred at first sight because Rani couldn't handle the stern glare. She quickly folded her hands and did a Pranam to her but Bhanumati just nodded and showed her the room. She instructed her to wake up quickly in the morning as she has to meet BR and help in the engagement preparations as the prince would arrive at any moment.

In the meanwhile RS receives a phone call. As soon as he sees the number, he is elated and speaks but the news he hears leaves him dejected. CR enquires what the matter was and RS tells that Yudi wouldn't be arriving that day and some other business deal had come up. CR asks when he would be returning. RS tells Yudi himself doesn't know when he would be returning. RS announces this to everyone n the palace but asks everyone to carry on the preparations. All the servants' murmur under their breath and go away wondering what really happened to the prince. Rani was also one among them because she wanted to see him because of what she had heard from other Servants about him.

Rani left to her room and started unpacking her things slowly making way for all her irrational thinking about how she betrayed their trust and her thoughts conquered her for the rest of the night. She fell asleep in the wee hours and woke up when the bright sunshine does not allow her to sleep anymore. She looks at the clock and it is half past six. She panics and gets ready for her first days work. She goes to Bhanumati's room but finds it locked and goes to kitchen. In the Kitchen Bhanumati is scolding is scolding one of the servants very badly for not cooking properly.

She looks at Rani and smiles and then yells at her "Maharaniji aapko jaldi utne keliya kaha tha aur aap ka but rahi hain?"

Rani feels embarrassed and tells very softly "Maaf kijeye zaraa aankh lag gayi thi."

Bhanumati replies " Aage se aise galati nahi honi chahiye" and leaves because she just spots Sukhiya looking at her. Sukhiya asks Rani to come along with him as CR is waiting for her in BR's room. Rani without further ado follows him to BR's room. She sees that CR is walking here and there waiting restlessly. CR notices them and smiles at Rani and immediately takes her to BR. CR's eyes turn moist and controlling all her emotions she starts telling Rani "Yeh humari badi behan hain. Aaj se inki dekhbal aap karengi. Inhe ab jald se jald teek kijeye taaki woh pehle ki tarah is mehal ki raunak ko badeyen. Ab sab aapke hathon mein hain. Appko inki dekhbal ke alava aur koi kaam nahi saumpa jeeyega taaki aapka dhyan sirf in par rahe."

Rani replies "Ji Rani sahiba. Hum inka poora khayal rakhenge.

Rani is about to leave and CR stops her and says "Aapne yahan Doctors aur nurses ko dekhe hi honge aur aap ke mann mein kai sawal utt rahe honge ki humne didi ka ilaaj inse kyun nahi karvaya. Abhi aapko iss sawal ka jawab milega. Thode din pehle jab didi ki tabeeyat bahut bigad thi tab doctor ne kaha ki jo dawwaiyan doctor de rahe hain woh ab kaam nahi karega kyungi inki sehan shakti kam hoti jaa rahi hain ab sirf aur sirf naturopathy hi inhe teek kar saktha hain. Issliye humne aapko yahan bulaya hain. Aur ek aur baath, aapko kisi bhi Jadibootiyon ki zaroorat padegi toh aap Dhinu kaka se maang sakte hain."

Rani nods her head in affirmation and thus her routine starts. She with full dedication starts looking after BR day and night. She slowly gets accustomed to her routines. The time has really flown away. It has already been three weeks since she had come to the palace.

Concurrently in the village Amma and Dadi starts worrying about Rani as they haven't got any news of her since she left the village. Chachi gets the hint of the situation and decides to lie.

" Didi abhi abhi Rani ka phone aaya tha. Bol rahi thi wahan sab teek aur use mahal bahut pasand aagaya, zyaada kaam pada hain issliye chitti nahi likh payi. Aap dno ko der saara pyaar aur pranaam bheja hain"

Sumitra gets alarmed and asks " Kaam? Kaisa kaam?-"

Chachi interrupts her and says " didi padayi ka kaam itna asaan hota hain kya? Bachi ko sambhalne dijeye wahan. Aap bewajeh pareshen ho rahi hain."

Sumitra gets convinced and lets go of the matter. Chandrakala gets angry on herself for letting herself slip the words she should not have. What would she have done if the whole situation was out of control and misunderstands Rani!

PS: Do ignore the typos!!😳
Edited by Roshni. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
awwwww that was lovely update.amma is so naive.
n bhanu is totally contrastive to the current track like she was in past.
BUT roshu yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar yudi ka ana delayed kyuun karwadiyaaa😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
lovely update di cant wait for next one
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
Rosh mera Yudi nahi aaya? Where is he? Jaldi se layo usse.....😆 Do continue...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
👏first of all my heartiest congrats Rosh. You are very very smart. bravo 😛👏 Rosh you are a ⭐️
Wish you all the best.
Now the plot thicknes magar hamara yudi kahan hai bhai.
Kab mila rahi ho dono ko? Is it going to be love at first sight?😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: tes_v1

Whoa! Roshni! congrats!!!👍🏼

You are amazing!! 👏
now this good newz needs a celebration, wat abt a double update? huh?😉
waiting eagerly....😉

Tia....Your wish is going to be granted....already updated one and will update another part now!!

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