FF : Ajeeb Dastaan Part 39(Last part):Pg54 Mar 2nd - Page 35

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Posted: 15 years ago
Sadia, Usma dear
Yeh lo! Your request!
Updated after a long time! So I need comments to improve myself!
Zyada ummeed mat rakhna!
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 31

RS couldn't sleep that night!😊 He was ecstatic since his son and bahurani…and most importantly his grandchild was coming home!😃 He was counting every second ticking by for the arrival!😃😳 The arrangements were also done; the only thing now left was their presence!😳

CR on the other hand had asked zillion times about the arrangements but she could get nothing out of his mouth except "Aapko kal subah pata chal jaayega, tab tak intezaar kijiye!, Yakeen maniye yeh aapke liye bada surprise hoga!"😛😎

CR had been wondering what could the news be which could give RS immense pleasure…She knew very little that her life would change forever from then!👏

The Next morning brings lots of promises to YuRa, it was like a dream come true for both of them!😃 YuRa bid good-bye to maasi , then go to the school….Yudi promises to revamp the school and bring in as many improvements as possible as this would be his next project!👍🏼 Masterji blesses both of them. Finally, they leave the village….their home till now and the memories filled in it!😔 Rani gets tearful but is happy at the same time!😊

RS keeps looking out of the door every few seconds to see if they have arrived. CR again tries to ask but RS once more avoids her question!😆 CR this time gets alarmed at his enthusiasm😲…she wonders if YuRa are coming home but quickly lets go off the thought thinking that to be absurd.

The Car arrives; RS almost runs towards the door😲😃….YuRa get inside the palace with all music! CR's nightmare has come true! She almost has her mouth open!😲😆 She fails to recover from the shock.😆😆 She comes out of the shock only after RS breaks his silence and asks her to take the aarti! She grudgingly goes forward to welcome them.🥳

RS: Aapko apne ghar mei swagath hai! Bete, ab aap aa gaye, hume lagta hai jaise hume naya takat hai! Abse hum saare zimmedaariyan aapke haath saumpthe hai!

Yudi: Pitaji, aap fikar mat kijiye, hum sab kuch sambhalte hai, aap bas aaram kijiye!😃👏

RS: haan bete! Pehle aap aaram kijiye! Phir hum baat karte hai.😊

YuRa go their room…Before that Yudi speedily walks away from the room remembering something…He walks towards BR's room to take her blessings as well. Rani looks at him helplessly!

Rani: Aap kahaan jaa rahe hai?🤔

Yudi: Rani, aap bhool gaye kya?😕 Hum itne din baad mehal wapas aaye hai, aur pooch rahe hai ki hum kahaan jaa rahe hai? Maa se milne aur kahaan? Hume toh yeh pehle hi karna chahiye tha…Pata nahi maa kya sochegi! Unse milke maafi maang lete hai!

Rani: Lekin –

Yudi: Hum baad mei baat karte hai, pehle maa se mil lenge!

Rani tries to stop him but he is too fast for her. He opens the room and then slowly the realization hits him😭😭……Hi mother is no more with him!😭 He sees the bed which was once BR's…Tears starts flowing but he manages to control😭..He avoids Rani's gaze and slowly walks back to the room! Rani feels sorry for him and tries to console him but he walks away from her! Luckily Rani didn't have to struggle much as Niharika comes to them!😃 Niharika hugs her brother and Bhabhi and is surprised to see that Rani is pregnant!😳😃

Niharika: Bhaiyya, yeh kya? Aapne hum se kuch chupaya hai!

Yudi: Humne?😲 Humne kya kiya?😲

Niharika: Sirf aap hi nahi bhaiyaa lekin Bhabhi bhi! Hume aap dono se yeh ummeed nahi thi! Kyun kiya aapne aisa?

Yudi: Aap batayenge to sahi ki aakhir humne kiya kya hai?😕

Niharika (faking anger): Woh bhi hume hi batana pedega?😡😆 Aap logon ko hume bolna chahiye tha ki hum Bua ban ne wale hai!😆😳

Rani turns deep red hearing that!😳😳 She looks down!😳 Niharika hugs her and expresses her happiness!😳😃 Niharika then tells them what all happened in the palace in their absence and how RS was angry at them..She tells them that he once saw them going in Bike and was too angry at them and how the situation was salvaged!😃 She speaks for a long time avoiding her personal life totally! She did not want to trouble them as soon as they have come!😳 But, she has no intention of letting them know either!😒 Just then Saksham enters the room and welcomes them! He expresses his happiness too😃….Niharika is rooted to the ground and does not speak anything until he leaves. Rani can feel Niharika hiding something😲, for what she had known her…She could feel some nervousness in her voice, but lets go of the thought! She thinks she is hallucinating but mentally makes a note to ask her later!👍🏼

Meanwhile CR in her room is thinking what went wrong! How RS all of a sudden had accepted them! CR thinks she cannot change RS's mind anymore regarding YuRa but can certainly manipulate Rani! A wild smile spreads across her face and she thinks she has to create a rift between YuRa and separate them forever!😭 CR looks at Rani walking in the corridor and thinks to herself that no one can save her from me now as she will get more accident prone!😲😭

Next day,

Before Rani could even wake up, Yudi goes to office and gets busy with all his projects there!😲 Rani is sitting all alone in her room thinking what to do!😕 She has no one to speak to! She tries to speak to the servants but none of them respond to her and treat her as the queen! CR watches this and feels happy that slowly her plan is taking its shape!😲 She had actually given instructions to everyone in the palace not talk to Rani at all and in case anyone dared to do it they would be fired!🤢 Rani goes to Niharikas' room but she was not there either! Rani goes back to her room and waits for Yudi's call! She misses him terribly!😭 She wants to call him but is scared thinking he would be in a meeting, But waits for his call looking at the phone!😭 She spends the whole day doing nothing and talking to no one!😔 She feels very lonely!😔

CR looks at her condition and smiles…She remembers how she had sent Niharika to library,😲 Bhavyata to a movie and made herself busy whenever Rani had come to talk to her!😔

Rani waits for Yudi return as it's almost 10.00!😲 Yet, there is no sign of him!😲😲 She walks towards the door and waits there for a while but he does not return😭…She then waits for him in the dining table and falls asleep waiting for him! He arrives an hour later and speedily walks to the room to meet Rani, but stops his tracks when he sees Rani sleeping on the dining table!😃 It had never happened that they have not spoken to each other for a day!😔 He sits beside her slowly massages her head!😃😳😳 She wakes up with a jerk! She looks at him angrily but is relieved!😳 She forgets her anger for quite some time and hugs him tightly!😳😳

Rani(crying):Aap hume chod ke chale gaye the? Humse baat bhi nahi ki! Aap iss tarah hume chodke mat jayiye!😭 Hume yahaan bahut akelapan mehsoos ho raha hai!😭

Yudi: Kya hua aapko?😕 Sambhaliye apne aap aapko. Ab chodiye in sab baaton –

Rani: Chod de?😲 Chod de?😲 Aapko ek phone karne ke liye bhi waqt nahi tha? Aapko humari yaad ek baar bhi nahi aayi? Aur hum yahaan aapke liye ek ek pal intezaar kar rahe the!😔

Yudi: Ab isska jawaab hum baad mei denge😲..Pehle hume khana toh khilayiye..Bahut tez se bhook lagi hai! Humne subah se kuch nahi khaya!😲

Rani: Subah se?😲 Hum abhi khana lagate hai!😃

Rani forgets all her anger and serves the food!😃 But they do not forget their routine as well😊…eats in the same fashion of feeding each other!👏😳😃

CR sees this exchange and thinks to change this routine forever!🤢 She needs to destroy their closeness forever!😲

As soon as they enter their room, Rani starts her question!😆

Yudi: Haan Haan hume yaad hai ki hume aapko jawaab dena hai!😳😆😆

He takes his mobile out and shows him how many times he had called her and blames her for not picking the phone!😲

Rani: Yeh kaise ho sakta hai!😲 Hum toh iss kamre se hile tak nahi😲..Phone ke paas hi toh baite the! Yudi feels strange too and checks the phone connection and sees that a wire has been cut!😲 Yudi fixes that and says to her that now she needn't worry at all!😃👍🏼

As per their habit, Yudi tells how he got busy with the project and how RS had to do everything all alone!😊 Rani too tells her how lonely she spent the whole day! Yudi feels sad for her and promises her that she would never ever feel lonely again!😃

They talk for a long time and then go to sleep!😊 Yudi feels very uncomfortable and tells her the same!😳😳

Yudi: Rani, aapko nahi lag raha hai ki bistar bahut bada hai?😲😆😆

Rani just raises her eyebrows and glares at him!😆😆😆

Yudi: Humara kehne ka matlab hai ki aap humse bahut door hai..- Hum- woh – keh rahe the ki -😳

He stops his sentence in mid way looking at Rani's stare!🤣

Suddenly the lights go off😲😲…and the last thing Yudi hears is Rani's scream!😭

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Posted: 15 years ago
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Didi aap aisa nahi karsakti idhar kyun rukh gayin aage likho hume jaana hain ke kya hua hum aapse bohot naraaz ho jaaenge jaldi batao nah 😡
Edited by sadia sheikh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh,
Thank you!! we needed that. I was so depressed since Friday after seeing my Yudi fall off the building that I did not feel like doing anything this whole weekend. This update comes just in time to cheer me on 😛😛😛
Love you Twinny. 🤗
YuRa back in the Mahel. I am going to kill this CR 😡😡😡 . She needs to leave Rani and Yudi alone.
I hope they find out soon what she is up to. RS need to give the message to the staff about who is the boss now. Loved this part but don't agree with the place to stop. Jaldi se next update kar de. 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice one,Rosh! U gave us a double treat today,with ur VM & an update!

Aww...Rani missed Yudi-I liked the way she openly told him that he should have come earlier-her brain & heart are in the right place.

Now,now, whats CR doing to my YuRa?? That evil hag-mein usse nahin chodungi!

Keep it up,hun!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Rosh is back with the bang !!!

Lovely Update .

I really enjoyed when they returned at palaca and RS was so desparate to see them ....so cute.....I loved CR 's khilli flying but she is so cunning . How dare she ignores Rani ? 😡

Aww..........my YuRa were missing each other and how dare CR ? Phone ka wire nikaal dia ?

lekin i loved when they were feeding each other .

Nikki was also very cute .....👏.....Lovely Update yaar .

Last scene? Wahan pay kyun roka ....mujhay aagay bhi parhna hai ...jaldi update karo ......power cut kay baad kya hua ? 😍
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Posted: 15 years ago

Rosh!

I just read the past 10 parts or so n wat a shock!!!

BR dead?????????????😲

and Bhavyata? oh hw I hate her!!!😡

I knew it the moment she asked Niharikla to promise that she wnted Saksham... the evil...🤬

but I trust Saksham, he'll sort things out!!😍

Yay, YuRa finally back in palace!!

aur ye andhera tumhe bhi bhaane laga? accha hai....😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 😭 didi plzzzzzzz update karo na agar chota update hain phir bi chal jaye ga plzzzzzzzzzzzz mere liye
Edited by sadia sheikh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sadia,
Thanks dear.😳
I stopped at that place to create suspense you see!😉
Bobbie,🤗
Thanks a lot! Cheer up girl..Yudi will be back! Please be optimistic😔 Humara Kapil aajeyega!
Thanks for you lovely comments!
Purva,🤗
Thank you so much dear! Not much happening here..CR is her own world of destroying!😳
Faiza🤗
Meine bang nahi kiya!😔
😳
Thank you so so so much for sweet comments! This your encouragement that makes me write. Please keep commenting like this!😳 Love you dear!
Tia,🤗
Thanks a lot!😳 I appreciate your efforts for reading so many parts! I'm impressed, hun!😃
Andhere ke baad hi toh Roshni aa sakti hai?- What say? Ok Ok Bad joke!😉😉
Usma, Juna di and Anshu di..Thanks for liking it! Pata nahi kya kami thi jo aapne comment nahi kiya! But, no complaints..I'm really glad that you liked it!
PS: Usma, Dont worry girl, for your sake I'll make my posts bigger.
PPS: I know all of you are not in a mood to read it...But Just a small try to cheer you all up. I hope I can post it! I hope I dont disappoint you girls. With your approval...Next part on the way!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Rosh dear,

'I always forget to tell u this: I just luv it wen Rani addresses Yudi as Arjun...

so keep that up and wen can we expect an update?

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