FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd - Page 16

Originally posted by: sharan99

Yeah I am really proud of them and also of the fact that we have all supported each other in this forum....makes me feel really happy that i found this place😃

Hello my lovely ladies. Here is my next update. It's short but I like it. 😆 Ok now you all need to tell me what u thought and u also need to tell me if I need to cut down the romance. I basically started this just to write YuRa scenes because of a lack of them on the show itself but let me know u actually want a plot? My other FF is the one that will actually have a plot however I'll tweak this one to have some drama in it and cut out some of the romance if u want. 😳 So lemme know! and once again sorry about the typos...

Part 12

Yudi moved closer to Rani who was still boldly meeting his gaze. He placed a hand on her waist slowly moving it across her lower back and tugged her forward causing her to stumble into him. He put his other arm around her to steady her. Rani's hands ended up on his chest causing a tremor to go through at him as he felt her gentle touch. He pulled her closer to him wanting to be as close to her as possible. Her head was now pressed up against his chest and he could smell the intoxicating scent of her hair. He nuzzled her hair breathing in the scent that was uniquely hers. He heard the music that had been playing change to a slower beat and he started gently swaying turning them around in a circle gently. Rani sensing this moved her hands up his chest and clasped them around his neck pulling back to look at him.

Yudi looked down at her and leaned forward gently towards her face as Rani bent backwards trying to create distance between their faces that were so close that she could feel his breath on her lips. She didn't notice that he had backed them into a corner leaving her with nowhere to go. His arms had her trapped against him. He chuckled at her panicked look knowing that she was trying to figure out how she would get away. He moved his hand up her back and tangled his fingers in her hair grasping her head gently and leaned down once again leaving only a breath's space between their lips. Rani's eyes fluttered shut waiting for him to move.

Yudi seeing this moved away from her lips and kissed her forehead and then her cheek and then he suddenly let go. Rani who had been so sure that he was going to kiss her had been leaning forward and was startled when he suddenly let go. She opened her eyes in surprise feeling a sense of loss when she saw him standing a little distance from her with a mischievous smile. The small distance made Rani realize that she didn't want him to let her go. She felt a sense of loss without his arms around her and without realizing what she was doing she moved forward and hugged him. Yudi startled by her sudden move lost his balance and stumbled backwards while holding on to her. The back of his knees hit the couch causing him to fall on to it taking her with him. Rani landed on top of Yudi and they stared at each other with looks of shock on their face. After a moment of silence, Rani felt his chest moving as he chuckled at their situation causing her to laugh as well. The sound of their laughter filled the room for more than a few moments.

Yudi looked at Rani and his laughter trailed off when he saw the glow in her face that mesmerized him. She looked free as she laughter and the look of joy on her face made him glow with pride knowing that he was the cause of her happiness. Rani noticing his silence turned towards him only to once again find him staring at her and her laughter stopped as well. Feeling self conscious at his intense gaze, that made her feel like he could look into her soul, she felt the urge to move away but she remembered the sense of loss she had felt before and she decided to just look away and place her head on his chest. Yudi smiled and moved his hand to her hair gently stroking her head. Rani let out a sigh of contentment feeling his gentle caresses. She felt like she could lie there forever. She mindlessly started to hum a tune and Yudi hearing it smiled widely feeling the urge to hear her sing again.

"Rani?"

"Hmm," was the only response he got and he chuckled hearing it, glad that she was comfortable.

"Aap humare liye kuch kariengi?"

Hearing this Rani lifted her head up and looked at him. Her look was one of askance.

"Aap humare liye aik gana gaien gi? Aap ko pata hai humne aapko pehli bar tab suna that jab hum aapke gaon aye thay aur kambal baanth rahe the. Jab humne aapki awaaz suni. Aap mandir mein ga rahi thi. Aur hum aapki awaz mein itne kho gai the kay humne sari kamblien aik hi aadmi ko dete gai."

Rani had no idea that he had heard her sing before the incident at the talent show in the village and was stunned to hear his story. She stared at him in wonder and the thought that he had fallen for her even more he had met her shook her. She knew that Yudi was waiting for a response and she opened her mouth to respond to him.

Originally posted by: sakuraa

Hello my lovely ladies. Here is my next update. It's short but I like it. 😆 Ok now you all need to tell me what u thought and u also need to tell me if I need to cut down the romance. I basically started this just to write YuRa scenes because of a lack of them on the show itself but let me know u actually want a plot? My other FF is the one that will actually have a plot however I'll tweak this one to have some drama in it and cut out some of the romance if u want. 😳 So lemme know! and once again sorry about the typos...

Woohoo, an update.....Wait, you actually feel the need to ask us if this is too much romance?? What's wrong with you?!! Don't you change a thing! Leave the drama to your other FF and let this one be full of the romance we should have seen on the YuRa honeymoon...least that's my opinion....😳😃😃

As always...loving it...perfect way to ease into the weekend. And what typos? Let me read it a few times and I'll see if I can find any....😃

You've done it too me yet again, I'm walking around in a complete utter daze (people are starting to get quite worried about me). Should be used to it by now lekin what to do, you insist on bring a fresh wave over me. No, forget the wave, a bloody tsunami!

And don't you dare go around cutting down the romance, not even toning it down. Me is offensed that you'll even think about it! You just keep on updating every part with a brand new 5 mins of the same night...I'll dreamily keep reading on.

Now, if you don't mind, I have much important business to attend do. Are, re-reading this of course!

Simra,

Originally posted by: Nisha_07

Woohoo, an update.....Wait, you actually feel the need to ask us if this is too much romance?? What's wrong with you?!! Don't you change a thing! Leave the drama to your other FF and let this one be full of the romance we should have seen on the YuRa honeymoon...least that's my opinion....😳😃😃 Sorry Sorry!! I wont ask again. I dunno as I was writing this I was like gee this seems like it's becoming repetitive and just fluffy. I wont ask again. *pleads for forgiveness on hands and knees*

As always...loving it...perfect way to ease into the weekend. And what typos? Let me read it a few times and I'll see if I can find any....😃 Glad u liked it hun! and typos...well I have this bad habit of never rereading my stories...😳😳 but by all means read it again to see if u can find any typos...😉😉

Originally posted by: bobbiedhillon

Simra,

Very good. Loved this part.......so is she going to sing? If yes, which song are you going to pick. I am very eager to find out...... Please post soon.....😊 She may she may not...haven't decided yet...😆😆😆 I always write whatever comes to me...there is never a set plan...and as for the song...no idea...u guys have any ideas?

Originally posted by: jyk88

You've done it too me yet again, I'm walking around in a complete utter daze (people are starting to get quite worried about me). Should be used to it by now lekin what to do, you insist on bring a fresh wave over me. No, forget the wave, a bloody tsunami! Aww 😆😆😆 I hope ppl dont get too worried!! and I am succeeding brilliantly in my goal to keep u in a daze aren't I?! I love it! 😆😆😆 <===yeah that laughter is supposed to be evil...

And don't you dare go around cutting down the romance, not even toning it down. (😳😳😳🤣🤣🤣🤣) Me is offensed that you'll even think about it! Sorry!!! I wont ever mention it again!! I swear! I was just afraid u were all getting bored of the same stuff!!! You just keep on updating every part with a new 5 mins of the same night...I'll dreamily keep reading on. I wish I could. I do but unfortunately I need to spend soem time away from RKAB despite not wanting to on my studies...

Now, if you don't mind, I have important business to attend do.Ok fine. Sorry to interrupt 😭😭 Are, re-reading this of course! Ooohhhh in that case go ahead!!!! 😳

Originally posted by: sharan99

Simra,

Beautiful as ever....Loved it completely.... Thank you!!! you think we will get tired of the romance??? No way...I love the way you describe their inner thoughts...it's so beautifully done so please continue with the romance....I really look forward to it.....leave the plot to the other FF. I am sensing the theme that I was very wrong to ask in all of ur responses! and I shall do as asked!! Sorryyyyyyyyy!! 😳

Once again you have me mesmerized......YAY!!! after NB4, I really forward to the FFs on the weekends now..so please keep them coming. I'll do my best! The other FF should be updated tmr or sunday...

⭐️ (😃 THANKS!)