FF:After the lake NEW/UPDATED PART 25 PG78 May 3rd

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Nisha_07

@Nisha_07

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Posted: 16 years ago

#171

aaaaaa Simra!! This is where you chose to stop? Nooooo!!! Not fair!! I want to know what he asked her! Now don't tell me you don't know yourself cause I won't believe you........

Perfect choice of song. I love the way you've weaved in a memory with each line, it feels so real - the emotions and memories going through her mind as she sang, his memories being made fresh...

As always babe, brilliant. I'm glad Rakhie's threats worked! 😛😃

Edited by Nisha_07 - 16 years ago

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Simra

@sakuraa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#172

Originally posted by: Nisha_07
aaaaaa Simra!! This is where you chose to stop? Nooooo!!! Not fair!! I want to know what he asked her! Now don't tell me you don't know yourself cause I won't believe you........ 🤣 Sorry!!! I know I shouldn't have left it there but I had to...because I had to cook so blame my brother for whining and asking for food...and yes actually this time I do know what is going to happen! Shocking I know! But if it makes u feel better I'll update this one and the other one on saturday so you wont have to wait too long...

Perfect choice of song. Thanks!! I was a little worried about that part...but it wasn't about the song it was about the memories to me anyways... I love the way you've weaved in a memory with each line, it feels so real - the emotions and memories going through her mind as she sang, his memories being made fresh... 😃 😳 Thank u! I really think that's what the show needs too because to me the show right now seems completely seperate from when they werent married if that makes sense. They need to be reminded of these things...
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As always babe, brilliant. I'm glad Rakhie's threats worked! 😛😃 Thanks and I know eh? She scared me a bit...😆😆😆

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Bobbie

@bobbiedhillon

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#173

Simra,

Thank you.....Thank you....... I was so bored and this is just what I needed. I have been working on a project where we had some downtime and I did not know what to do. Your update came just in time.

Great song selection and it fits perfectly with our Yura......But you are not fair by stopping where you did....But very enjoyable.....

Now I am wondering what Yudi was going to ask......please put us out of our misery and post soon.......

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TSharan

@TSharan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#174

Not Fair Simra!!!!! Leaving us in the lurch like that...building up such a romantic environment and just when I was lost in this beautiful romance....i get a rude shock...don't do this to us....Have mercy on us poor souls Simra!!😭😔

ok on a serious note....I loved your choice of songs.. the beautiful environment ...rani singing n remembering those moments with Yudi....yudi re living time he had spent with rani.....loved it completely ...the whole of it....😍😍 how romantic was that!!!!! beautiful, lovely and amazing as ever....

Please update soon...looks like the suspense in the show has had an effect on you Simra....you are building up the same suspense here....

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Jenifer

@Jenifer.

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#175

Ok, I now have reasons to believe that some members of this forum are stalking me! You all are mentioning songs that I have been happily humming away and this is one of them.

As for your brilliant piece of writing - no no no no no! How could you stop there? What is he so impatiently waiting for that he can't help himself but ask her? Tell me or I'll start collecting those chocolate wrappers...tonnes of it!

Can't wait for Saturday!

Edited by jyk88 - 16 years ago

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#176

What? No!

You can't stop there! What are you doing to me???

Get your ass on that chair right now missy and start updating the next part asap! Or I'm a have to pull out my .25 on you!

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Simra

@sakuraa

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#177

I only have a couple of minutes so I cant respond to everyones posts yet but I will!!!

I just wanted to say sorry for stopping there but I kinda had to but tell u what...i my classes end early today so I'll update today 😳😃

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TSharan

@TSharan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#178

Originally posted by: sakuraa
I only have a couple of minutes so I cant respond to everyones posts yet but I will!!!

I just wanted to say sorry for stopping there but I kinda had to but tell u what...i my classes end early today so I'll update today 😳😃

Thx Simra!!! You are a darling...u know that. waiting😍

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Anvi2009

@Anvi2009

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#179

Simra, I just hope that this night of YuRa honeymoon does not end. So far, it is going just perfectly and how romantic & beautiful it is. They are so lost in each other, physically as well as mentally, as if tonight only they and their love exist in this world, and nothing else. Just like it should be.

But but but, I just hope your professors leave you early today, after all you have to update your this ff for us, forum people. It is equally important right. 😊😉

I just loveddd your this part and the song is perfect for YuRa. Each and every word in this song fits with what Rani feels for Yudi. And they reliving the past through their present moment, hmm 😍.

Now waiting to know what Yudi wanted to ask Rani.

Edited by parikhanvi - 16 years ago

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beena

@bsingapury

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#180

ye kyaa simra.kaha laake chhod diyaa hume yaar..........ab hum hava main julte rahenge.........yaar it was fantastic yaar the way you have waved their flashback and their emotions with songs lovely dear

ab dharti pe hume laavo aur nayaa part update karo

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