FF: Pancham Raga; Part 2 - pg 6

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@old_charm

Stunner

Posted: 6 years ago

#21

beautiful...

thanx for pm !

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catsu

@CashmereCat

Dazzler

Posted: 6 years ago

#22

Pro! I didn't know you wrote FFs. Let me read and get back with my letter of appreciation. And thanks for the PM ):

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 6 years ago

#23

Beautiful part

Continue soon 😊

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sahira kabir

@eufara_naghm

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 6 years ago

#24

Loved the update di

Thnx for the pm😳

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MsChanadlerBong

@MsChanadlerBong

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 6 years ago

#25

This is such a beautiful story Pro! You are brilliant writer and its a well understood fact. ;)

I really felt sad reading the prologue. I could feel the pain and despair helpless Radha was facing. You have great choice and I love how you portray complicated matters in such a sweet simple way which makes your writing really unique.

Enjoyed reading the first chapter. The pain of Radha and Krishna getting separated is too much. God knows how will me manage when the show will air those moments. I will become a crying mess, I know that for sure.

Wait so Radha was meeting with Krishna even after her marriage? I have like literally zero knowledge about Radha Krishna's stories beside the some stories I have heard or the stories Indian television has fed me with. I thought Radha was married after Kanha left.

Well I hope to know more stories from your one.

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904129

Hibernated

Posted: 6 years ago

#26

This is so so beautiful, Choti. ⭐️

Radha's sister in law leaving no stone unturned to make her life difficult and there is Krishna testing her love. 😳

Though that last bit was so cute. ❤️

Thanks For Pm.

Update Soon.

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Madhuri

@Viswasruti

Moderator

+ 29

Posted: 6 years ago

#27

What a gem of a piece of writing Radhi! You simply put those lovely scenes of the quivers of Radha's tender heart in front of my eyes , her yearnings to meet Him and that highly romantic meeting of the eternal lovers , a feast to any reader's imagination! A young girl's in-depth fervor for her lover, how beautifully you described, it's a pure literary bliss Radhi whenever I read your words. ❤️