Lost Without You {AsYa FF} *on hold* - Page 12

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Posted: 3 years ago

Thank you!!!!! Glad you liked it.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: fatima30

Awwww I loved the updates! Gaffur scares me though!

I love Asya’s bond….they’re so connected

I hope they get together soon 😳

Hey! Great to see you again! So glad (and relieved) that you liked the chapters!

They'll get together soon enough 😉☺️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Sorryyyy I've barely written a paragraph! I'm going through a writer's block which is apparently for this specific story! I'm so sorry, although, as compensation, I'm writing an OS on our original AsYa which I'll be posting quite soon. I'll post the link on this thread if you guys want!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Heyya people! Sorry I haven't been able to update in a while, I'm having kind of a writer's block.

But...


But...


BUT!

I have written this OS as a compensation :)

Enjoy!


Link: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/159704743

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Posted: 3 years ago

Oh I loved this chapter!

I like how Asad is accepting his feelings and no running away (hopefully it remains that way) and Zoya aslo is kind of flirting with him.. Nice!


Can't wait for more

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey there!


Sorry again for the delay ...My week was terribly hectic:(

But this chapter was all worth the wait! ( wait because I read it late actually 🐒) Honestly I think this one was very crucial in taking their relation one step forward but I'm glad you made them open up to each other while preserving the original character.


I loved the mix of feelings here. There was hesitation, a crazy internal turmoil, a truckload of bottled up pain yet the self awareness. It's not like they just let their emotions explode, but were still honest enough to accept that the other person's presence was so comforting for them in that moment!

Totally adored the kiss talk! It was so simple and raw! Loved the open and easy acceptance from both of them 'I just had to tell you' this line felt like butterflies in the stomach...Beautifully written part!


I loved how they both made it a little evident about being aware of their feelings for each other. I just love their ability to be upfront with everything..it's probably the situation but still I just find that sense of maturity that both of them have, alluring. Zoya has always been that honest and upfront girl who voices what she feels, who doesn't pretend, but Asad had a tough time doing the same. Glad to see him openly accepting all that he's feeling ! I am really excited/on the edge now to see what happens next, as the next part would probably define Asad more than Zoya for me is what I'm presuming.


Girl this story is progressing so organically...I can actually picture everything in my head and I'm already getting so many ideas on what would happen in the next part! Lol get over your writer's block asap or I'll help if I may (PM) but I want to read the next soooon!


As always beautiful writing! Write the next one sooooon please!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Im so glad you liked it! Don't have much time to write back a longer reply, but I'll post the chapter soon, I've started writing it already. I'm soooo glad everyone is liking the kiss talk so much!

Love ya!💖

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Posted: 3 years ago

Update update update

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hi! This is Megara just posting from a second account, as you can see, the old account status is showing as 'inactive'. I got locked out of my account and now will be continuing my stories through this account! Also, I lost AAAALLLLL my drafts😭😭😭 So you guys will have to wait jusssst a little longer😔

love you guys!

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Posted: 3 years ago

Hey!


When do we get the next update?! I am really looking forward to read the next part!

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