Asya FF: A Slice of you and A Slice of Me - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for the PM
And very nice concept sambag 😊
Asya working together
Eagerly waiting for the next chapter😛
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Posted: 7 years ago
#22
Beautiful parts
Loved the way both trying to solve the problem
asad managed to convince zoya to stay in his home
what is bothering zoya?
asad is there for her
Nice part
Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice story dear
Loved it
Update soon please
Do pm me if you can
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks to all who took the effort to click or comment to show your motivation. I genuinely appreciate and am overwhelmed the feedback.
I am not sure but every time I tried to edit and put in a paragraph it somehow disappeared. will try to check the formatting before I post.
Regarding shorter updates, I have almost written the story so not sure I can change the length now but will post two chapters to keep up the length and sync it with my update in blog.

My little one and me were not keeping well so could not update earlier.
Thanks once again.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 5 Eyes of the Beholder

Asad found the door to Zoya's room slightly ajar and after a little debate with his inner voice he pushed the door open to find an empty room and a white silhouette of a lady in the garden. On an impulse he moved to the small garden adjacent to their rooms to find Zoya gently swinging on the small swing which used to be his favorite place when he was upset. He never liked anybody sitting on the swing apart from his Ammi and Najma but they hardly sat on it, but somehow, he found Zoya sitting on his swing very endearing and it warmed his insides. He watched her from the sidelines enchanted by the sight of her silky hair which was now open and fell like a cascade around her encompassing her beautiful face. The bright moonlight on them emitted silver embers and made her look like a little mermaid in white. The rustling of leaves in the light wind that blew brought Asad back to his senses and he realized that he needs to hand over the coffee to Zoya. He walked to the swing and held the cup infront of her. Zoya was taken aback a little but was floored by the gesture. Zoya moved a little making space for Asad to sit and both started sipping their coffee as silence encompassed them. Finally Asad asked " I hope Ms Farooqui you are not feeling uncomfortable. Sometimes my family can really suffocate people with their sweetness. Zoya turned to look at Asad and started laughing and she looked captivating with her dimples being visible and her cheek bones framing out her face and the face had a glow and Asad was mesmerized. She said " No Mr. Khan they are lovely people and you are lucky to have such people around you. It's just that it has been a long time since I have been with a family who showered so much love in such a short span of time so I just don't know how to react. Asad perfectly understood where Zoya's thoughts were coming from but he was happy that Zoya was atleast happy to be with his family and he could give back moments to her which she seems to clearly cherish with families.

Next morning the Khan family was in for a surprise as they saw Zoya working with tandem with Dilshad in the kitchen as Najma & Dilshad ran behind her to stop her but she refused to do so as she flipped hot aloo parathas from the pan. She enjoyed the surprise on their faces and she told them she had learnt it from her friends and youtube and that she loved to cook up little surprises during her free time. Soon all the three were bonding like a house on fire and they were laughing their heart out on some jokes that Zoya was saying. Zoya on the other hand felt giddy with excitement as she felt the child in her playing today a peek-a-boo with her after many years with non-stop chatter, jokes and cups of hot steaming tea. By breakfast time Zoya had known that before Dilshad got married they were neighbors of the Siddiqui's but once Dilshad Abbu's business had run into trouble and he was unable to sustain, he had sold off the business and moved to Mumbai with the family and they had lost touch with the Siddiqui's. Zoya's eyes had misted at the mention of her father and Dilshad had hugged and held her close to her heart and that's when she had asked Dilshad's permission to call her Phuppi like Nikhat calls her. Dilshad was more than happy to hear her call Phuppi and she held both Zoya and Najma in her embrace and that's how Asad found them when he came for breakfast and he smiled looking at the trio. Seeing Asad, Najma started arranging the table as Zoya lent her a helping hand. Looking at them Dilshad reminisced "She is such a beautiful soul and like an excited child. She has been through lot and I just hope that God gives her strength to move on. Asad smiled looking at the childlike woman who was now jumping up and down and something she had beaten Najma on as they together flipped the parathas.
Edited by sambag - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chap 6- The first tiff

It has been a week since Zoya had moved to the Khan's place and a week since Zoya and Asad had been making trips together in Asad's car and he would not have it otherwise. Zoya had one day booked a cab to work and then had walked down to breakfast. She was fresh out of shower with her hair still having some droplets clinging to them she smelt and looked heavenly to Asad who could not turn her eyes from her. She looked completely out of place in his house as she walked to take a seat in a black traditional business suit with powder blue blouse, all set to take on the corporate world. While having her cereals she told Asad that she had booked a cab and he could come along with her and that was it to get Asad's temper roaring. He was a man of few words but his actions spoke a lot. The moment Zoya had said that she noticed Asad's fingers curve into a fist and he left the breakfast table in a hurry saying he was done much to the surprise of his mother and sister. By now Zoya had become familiar with quite a few traits of Mr. Khan and she knew the moment she had spoken about booking a cab he had got offended but she was not going to sit and see him sulk. Her inner voice popped up asking "Why are u so observant about him and why do u care if he sulks.
Zoya: So what ..I stay in his place and they all have been taking care of me and I should be doing this much at least.
Voice: Do you know every detail about Najma or Dilshad the way you observe your Mr. Khan
Zoya: hmmm...thinking..that's because I work with Mr. Khan and not with them
Voice : Seriously !!!
Zoya : Don't disturb me now I am already nervous I have a presentation to an important client

Zoya knocked slightly and walked in to Mr. Khan's room and he was a little surprised to see her and immediately made a poker face. Zoya did not know how to breach the topic although she knew why he was upset so she straight went to the reason.
Zoya : Mr. Khan , We had a presentation to Citrix team today and you know they are an important client and I did not want you to stress yourself driving all the way so I booked a cab for both of us. If I knew you would be upset I would not have done that.
Asad: Ms Farooqui I am not upset because you booked a cab. I have greater things to do than being upset at trivial things.
Zoya : Oh is it Mr.Khan!! If its so trivial then why are you upset about it and do not deny because I saw you were. Is it because you feel I am not comfortable with your driving .
Asad: Ms Farooqui !! First I am not upset because of your cab booking and secondly I don't want your pity , if you are really not comfortable please go in your cab and I will drive to work.
Zoya : Mr. Khan pity!!! That's what do you think I do. Since the first day I have met you I have done nothing but admired your strength, your grit and your sheer sharpness at work and of all the things you felt I pity you. Mr. Khan did you ever think of the fact that I just wanted you to be my side today and not figure out roads to drive through to the destination.
Asad could see that her eyes glistened with tears which she desperately tried to hold back and her voice broke towards the end. Asad stepped forward to stop Zoya but she stepped away as Najma called saying the cab had come. She said a small bye and Asad saw her brushing her tears as she walked away to her room to collect her things to walk to the cab. Zoya took some time to compose herself as she was hurt by Mr. Khan's words and was feeling guilty of not thinking from Mr. Khan's perspective. It was more than 15mins now that the cab was waiting and Zoya walked out with unsure footsteps and unmindfully approached to open the door when a familiar hand stretched out to do the same. She looked up to see Mr. Khan with a small smile mumbling a "Very sorry. His smile did it for Zoya, though she was angry she still was feeling happy inside. Mr. Khan was back as usual engrossed in his work as he had taken Zoya's Mac Air and was now going through the presentation sometimes giving her tips. Zoya could not help but notice his features, chiseled jaws, muscular biceps, beautiful dark orbs with flecks of brown and the dimples were to die for. Asad suddenly looked up to see Zoya staring at him and he felt quite amused about it but feared maybe she was still very angry with him. The car jolted as it tried to avoid a pothole and Zoya pulled out of her thoughts as she felt awkward with her haywire thoughts. Zoya was back to thoughts of her presentation and Asad noticed that she was continuously tapping her feet and clasping and unclasping her fingers and he knew she was tensed. Without second thought he held her soft palms in his warm big ones and Zoya felt herself a little shocked but soon she could feel warmth spreading through her and she started slowly relaxing. Asad felt a little conscious and withdrew his hands and Zoya stared at him on feeling sudden loss of warmth. He looked at her and said "Ms Farooqui , being an MIT pass out you must have given so many presentations and met so many international clients , why are you so tensed and looking so in confident.
Zoya: Mr. Khan , when I used to do it for the company I would have people who would review what I do and they would have processes which will ensure things are flawless and then it was not my company or business. Here its mine and we are in a do or die situation.
Asad: Why do you think that way? We are there to support you and just think you are doing this like before and its not just your company, it's our company too. Even if we do not get this contract we will try somewhere else. We have full confidence in you so just put your best foot forward.
Zoya did not know if it made a difference that Mr. Khan said these words or they were truly inspiring but she felt more confident now as they walked to the conference room for their turn to present their case. The presentation did go better than expected and the customer was impressed. The only hitch was the firm being a pretty new entrant might not be able to satisfy the clauses of getting the whole contract but a small portion of it would come to them.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update 😊
Thanks for the pm 😊
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Nice updates dear
Loved it
Liked asya understanding
Update soon please
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Posted: 7 years ago
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sometimes all u need is a small hug a small smile to lift up ur mood
like how slowly the comfort level is building between asya
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thank you sooo much for the PM 😳
Wow!! Two updates on one day 🤗
You are the best 👍🏼

I loved them. And I am selfish enough to demand for the next update, make it really soooniish
Edited by Tenshi_r - 7 years ago

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