Yeh Un Dino Ki Baat hai FF /PART 3 PAGE 4 (4/14/18)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yeh Un Dino Ki Baat Hai
Hello guys,
I am back with a new FF on Asya
Do leave a comment and a like...

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It was a cooly night when Zoya was sitting on the bed , she was thinking how to express her love from Asad. At last,she decided to express her. She goes and finds Asad sad and disturbed.

Z: Mr,Khan...
A: Mrs,Farooqui ,what happened do you want something.
Z: No...yes...no...I want...I wanted to tell...
A: Mrs,Farooqui , don't waste my time.
Z: Mr,Khan, I ...like you...

Asad keeps quite for a moment. He holds her hand and threw her out of the room. Zoya got heartless. She shouted
Z: Mr,Khan I love you...
A: Get out of my way Miss. Farooqui. Except Tanveer I have no one else in my life.
Z: I know but still ...you can throw me put of your house but not from your heart.
A: I don't love you at all.. (He closes the door)

(Kaisa sulukh zindagi Yeh kar rahi hai
Mujhe paraya tu mujhise kar rahi...
Yeh jo aakhiri si saans chal rahi hai)
They both sat down on the floor touching the door with their palms
(Yaadon se Teri lipatke fariyaad
Itni kare, yahan wahan...)

Z: Mr,Khan please don't go away from me that one day when you search for me I may not be there (yahan wahan hain tu mujhme rawan hai tu..)

She leave the place sadly ,wiping away her tears . He was also sad though he hates her. He just like her sometimes.

After 2 ,3 hours if goes and checks her . He finds no one present their. He catches her and his photo with tanveer in middle. He keeps down the photo quietly and leaves the place. Just when he was stepping back. Zoya comes to him with a plate with bread and jam. She makes him sit on the bed and asks him to eat giving the plate. Asad refuse to eat it.


Z: Listen, you can be angry on me but what type of anger with eating food.
A: just get lost of my way, zoya I hate you.
Z: I know, well you please have these bread and Jam. Tomorrow , Mr.Gamster will not allow you to eat.
A: Why? What special is there tomorrow ?
Z: Tomorrow , it's his mother's birthday, and you know he will make us sit for extra hours in college.
A:(stares her for a while.) Okay give it here.
Z: that's right a good classmate! Good night

She goes out of the room. She turns back ,his and her eyes come in contact. He signs hee what happened. She smiled and signed nothing and left the room.

In college ...In morning

A: mom,I am leaving for college
D: Asad please take Zoya with you. You are going in a car and she alone has to ride that cycled...
A: Mom, don't be much caring towards her. She is much good cycle rider. (He leaves)
D:(thought) I want something else from you Asad .

Zoya faces an accident when she was in the traffic. She falls off the cycle and gets injured. Meera enters she watched Zoya fell down and got unconscious. She goes and picks up the cycle which was above her. She asks Zoya to wake. Zoya gets consciousness.

M: Zo, what happened ?
Z: I don't remember anything, well we should leave.
M: okay,

The both friends move to their college. When they arrive the class, Mr.Gamster had already started teaching. He scolded them. He punished Zoya and asked her to go out of the class and stand for the whole day.

After college...In house party.

G: hello Miss.Dilshaad. how are you?
D: I am fine Sir, what about you?
G: Well you should ask this question to Zoya.
D: sorry I wouldn't understand.
G: What to understand? She always arrives late. She is a disobedient student
D: so is there any suggestions for her improvements?
G: off course, Hostel is the best solution.
Z: Auntie, I don't want to go and stay in hostel.
D: I can understand, But there is no more solution left.

Zoya goes near Asad holds his hands and watches him sadly, heartbroken . Asad takes out her hands , and asks her to leave at once. Mr.Gamster takes her with him and drops her in hostel.


In hostel

M: Zoya, you here?
Z: yes my destiny brought me here.
T: hahaha, well someone has said true, speaking historical things is great. But you know Zoya, I am very happy you joined here.
M: Tanveer shut up. We have stayed here 4 years. But she... not even 1 day.
T: that's the suspense...Zoya you thought you will go near Asad ...hug him and say I love you...and he will say I love you to you? Never.
Z: that's my destination, to hear the three most beautiful words from him.
M: Zoya, forget him. You will get only pain no love.

Precap: To Be Continued

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Posted: 7 years ago
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If you liked my FF idea then do leave a like and a comment, and for updates do buddy me...
Index:

Part 1: Page 1
Part 2: Page 2
Part 3 : page 4
Edited by .ROSY. - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Title confused me i thought u posted on wrong forum .
Yudkbh 😳
Finally after long reading asya ff ..
Like the first part ..if possible do contiune it
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: shweta_yadav

Title confused me i thought u posted on wrong forum .

Yudkbh 😳
Finally after long reading asya ff ..
Like the first part ..if possible do contiune it


Ahaha same here... I checked the forum too..

Well thanks rosy for this story..
Looking forward.
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Awesome story
Thanks for the pm dear
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Niceee!!
Well written!

So its AsYa nd Tanveer are college mates!!
Asad doesn't know about his feeling!! He is rude towards Zo!!
And Zo is heartbroken!! Zo expressed but Asad didn't react! :(
What will happen next?? When will Asad realize his love for Zo?? And bullshit!! Tanveer that bitch is so evil here also! What will she plot??😡

Looking forward for the next part...!!😊
Update soon!😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yeh un dino ki baat hai
Banner Credits to me
Chapter 2:
M: Zo, I hope you will settle down here.
Z: I have to...
T: right said zoya, you know, I like your this free sprit.
Z: thank you.
M: Zoya,what happened to you?why are you answering boldly?
Z: Because I have nothing more left.
T: Right said ...
Z: where is my room?
M: but...room...With me...This way.

Meera takes her to their room.
Z: I heard that in each room 5 members...where are other
M: they are have went for extra classes
T: except me and meera
Z: nice to see you as my roommate .
M: okay,Zoya you change and rest.

Zoya goes changes her dresses and sleeps on the bed.

M: isn't it too soon with Zoya?
T: right , in one moment from big mansion to hostel
M: let's sleep.
T: good night.

In Morning...college

G: Zoya how was your 1st night in hostel?
Z: okay sir...
G: good,zoya I want you to be free from accidents. You always face accidents, I want you all children's safety.
Z: Yes Sir.

Mr.Gamster starts teaching the students.

G: Children what are your thoughts on heart?
A: something which beats and makes us live for a long time.
Z: something that is boring,but important. Some things that beats for others , but just gives pain.

Asad watches zoya with teary eyes. The Bell of the college rings. All students rush . Asad goes and waits near the tree were zoya used to wait for him. He watches zoya getting inside the hostel bus. The bus departs.
He feels lonely.

A:(whispered) this is the best day at least this chipku magnet is not with me. But why am I feeling sad...leave it.

In house...

D: Asad ,would you like to drink some strong coffee ? How was your day?
A: mom, if you will ask soo many questions at one time. How will I answer? My day was good. I don't want coffee,thanks for asking.
D: nice to hear. How was Zoya 's day?
A: how can I know that? What's the need of knowing that?
D: it's needed dear, Zeenat has to know,after all she is her sister.
A: hmm..

In hostel...
Meera was walking through the staircase towards the library. She did not noticed that somebody has threw a banana peel there. She slipped on that but for god blessing vivaan was standing there she pushed him and they both fell on ground. Her dupatta rolled and tied them both

V: get out.
M: yes, yes, I have no interest in you.
V: whatever, just get out from me.
M: excuse me, we both have been tied. Third person can only unroll us.
V: then call somebody.
M: Zoya...
V: you don't have little brain.

He shouts for the headmaster. They both get unrolled.

Coming to Zoya...

Z : I still wish you to love me.
T: zoya, understanding is needed ,which you don't have.
Z: but why?
T: ask yourself, you will get the answer.
M: that vivaan what he thinks about himself?he is a king or what and that everyone has to obey him?
Z: what happened?
M: that vivaan...
Z: hahaha, meera I think God has taken the decision for you both 's love.
T: hahaha, that's for true.
M:uuhhh, that thing will never occur. I hate him.
Z: don't worry you will get hold of him soon, hahaha
HM: girls,tonight we are going to dargarh ,so I want you all to wear red coloured lehengas...before that a small party in college for Asad 's birthday.

Zoya gets go remembered his birthday. She goes and selects a green lehenga and decides to wear that for his birthday party.

In party...

P: happy birthday my dear son.
All students : happy birthday.
A: thank you all.

Tanveer goes near him and gives him a gift
A: I don't want this .
T: but this is only a part of birthday.
A: thank you.
T: well do you love Zoya?
A: sorry...
T: be sincere, do you love her.
A: No I just hate her. She is not sincere with any of her relations

Unfortunately, Zoya was listening this. This time she had no more option but from leaving Asad near Tanveer.

She wouldn't beer. She straightly walked towards him

Z:Asad, I think I am disturbing you a lot which I shouldn't.
A: what you want to say?
Z: I have made this decision that I will leave you...means I will stop every relation goes near u.


Precap : Zoya to leave Asad for ever...

Hope u enjoyed it...



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it
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Nice update..
Thanks for the pm :D
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Well written update
Zoya leave asad
Hope asad do something
Thanks for pm
Waiting for update
Continue soon

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