Asad-Zoya FF: Sand Clock: Chapter 4 pg 10

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

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Posted: 7 years ago

#51

Omg noe I'm first to reply...

This was a fantabuluous chapter..

Loved reading every part of it.

U got me scared for a second when Rashid's machines started beeping..

I thought he is gone forever leaving Zoya to solve the. Mystery.

And time travel wow..

Rashid a scientist now..

But what about in 1876?

He was there as well?

Loved the update very much..

Wish u CPU,d update more sooner..

Edited by sweet_tehs - 7 years ago

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

WOW

now this is just noe-wala update yaar👏

sounds really intersting and unique concept.

Asad as great-great grand father of Rashid?!

and its my first time reading about time traveling.

its really going to be intersting.

eagerly waiting for next update, hope you will continue and end it😊

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Asif

@asifiqbalsh

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Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Wonderful update
Loved it
Time travel idea was nice
Zoya was totally shocked to read in third drawer
Waiting for rashid to recover soon to tell her full details
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

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Mayur Chan

@MayurChan

Sparkler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#54

The concept here is very unique and interesting... 👏

I don't remember reading about Ayaan here...

Continue soonish...

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Very interesting concept.

Awesome story.

Loved it.

Very well written.

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Loved the update

It's very interesting and unique in its own way.

Thank u for the pm

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

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Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Nice chapter
So the nawab wakes up and thinks.the english has him
So je sees zoya she looks like a princess he knows of
Aww he reprimand her dressing and then he regretS u dont talk to a lady like tht
So rashid wakes up amd share his secret with zoya
She can't believe but curiosity gets.the better of her
She finds the proof of asad being related to rashid
His great great grand uncle nice
Oh god plz let tanveer only be his wife in 1876
Or are u gonna change history and put zoya back in time from the future
To be asad wife
Lol
Cont soon and get a.name

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Morsmorde

@Morsmorde

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Posted: 7 years ago

#58

Zoya ko ab lagta h finally yakin hone laga hai. Hopefully Rashid recovers soon so that bechare Asad ko bhi bata sake. Ye to Acha hua ki time travel kar ke 2017 me a gya nhi to Tanveer se shadi Ho hi jani thi. Amazingly written Noe :)
Thanks for the pm.

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kiki

@-waitingforyou-

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Chapter 2!!

Story of two people from different eras!! It is an awesome concept. I have always wanted to read one story with asad as part of Royal family.

Now it will be really fun to read what happens as the story progresses. Really looking forward to it.

I am glad you are still continuing 'It happened one night' .

But to know that you are discontinuing 'The sun has set', it's kind of sad. It was really such a gripping story and the suspense was always making me look forward to the next chapters. But i guess i understand that such a good story needs great effort. But if you ever get time or energy for it in the future,then please do think about continuing it.

Best wishes. :)

-kiki