Asad-Zoya FF: Sand Clock: Chapter 4 pg 10

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Amin21Khpulwak

@Amin21Khpulwak

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Oh wow

Love it

But what about the sun has set?

Is there any chance to wait

We can wait as long as you are going to continue it

Please we are waiting for that at least you can say to wait.

That is one of my most favourite ffs and would love to read about all those unanswered questions

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Arpita_Mirage

@Arpita_Mirage

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#32

So Zoya saw Asad

loving this

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anopama

@anopama

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Absolutely loving.this
Did recognized the. Kate and Leopold.theme...hugh jackman fangirling
But glad u will make it ur own
So.asad.is.from the old era and rashid has found this hidden treasure
They have the same name maybe tbey are father and.son in the old era
So zoya the fiesty neighbor has met asad the so called son
She is already unable to move at his sight
Always consider.asad.as.royalty he has the cuts for.it
And.zoya the modern dsmsel
Can't wait for them to come face to face consious
It will be shahjahan and mumtaz after all the bickering
Connt soon

Sad tht u left one of ur stories will wait on the other patiently
But if this new one is flowing.lets go.with it

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Absolutely loved it, 😳

So so so happy to see another story from you.

Fantastic idea and premise. Looking forward to next update.

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Morsmorde

@Morsmorde

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Noe123

Chapter 1

Hi there!

Glad to see you glad😃Have you changed your username? I cannot seem to place you.

Yes, Asad is a Nawab. He is such a nawab, naa?

The story set in another time - yes, it is exciting for a writer because it means I can spend hours researching time gone by, a favourite hobby of mine😉

Thanks for reading and commenting.

Yeah I changed my UN it was teju_KaBhi :)

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Morsmorde

@Morsmorde

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Asad to sach me 17th century ke nikle aur zoya 21st century ki. Nice idea Noe 👏
now what will happen when asad gains consciousness and what will b his reaction?
what was Rashid doing in nawabi era?
This is so interesting [:p]
Do write soon and thanks for the pm:)

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#37

It is treat to read something penned down by u noe

I'm so glad u decided to write something new for us.

This will be as wonderful as your other works I'm sure..

Don't have much time to write a long comment

But I read your note of discontinuing my fav story The Sun has set..

Y do u want to do this..

I'm happy to read other stories but I'm sorry I can't accept that my fav story will not be updated again..

Either give a short summary and complete it or get it on your regular updates..

But I want a closure for that one please.

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Prashni Singh

@-SilverSparkle-

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Something new, always a delight.

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Ankahee

@Ankahee

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Musafir: As I started reading, realized that this is different. And as i read, riyasat, chote nawab, nephew, Bhopal, the realization dawned, this is a different era, nawabi wala. The red coats, khandaani jewellery, sherwani, all of it blended so well in mehfil. Begum ka andaaz bhi pasand aaya. Asad nawab aur inke khayalat to wahi hai, 😊, the whole setup is so well done. And then, Tanu 😲, matlab ache se, suna bhi rahe hai, father in law. Asad ki patience ka kya kehna. Sherbat se kuch sukoon milta woh bhi nahi mila 😲

It is so well paced and written, i wanted some of that khus sherbat too. Awesome start, the last part was a bit confusing, till I got to Mulaqat part. 😳

Mulaqaat: As soon as I started reading this part, I knew, this is where Zo is, naya daur, our time and Kate and Leopold flashed in my mind, your note explains at the end, but I already had a smile going, realizing, this premise here is gold. I loved it right away. Had to bring my distracted mind back to bechara lost in the new world Asad. It fits really well, the, concept and how well his reactions are captured, kambhakt sipahi kabhi nahi milte jab zaroorat hoti hai. 😆

The comedy of errors is spot on in the whole chapter, right from Asad getting knocked out to Zo and inspector discussion on beta hai ya nahi? Rashid ne to beta declare kar diya...😆

The banter is so Zoe. Perfect start for Zoe, Her cheesy pizza wali perfect life ko surprise milne wala hai.

Last but not the least, Dr Saagar Kumar, kissi aur ki bhi yaad aayi. 😳

Wonderful start, looking forward so much to this story. I am so glad that you of all the writers, is writing it. Holding my breath for magic to unfold.

Keep writing Noe, Asad and Zoe are pure joy in your stories, always.⭐️

Edited by Ankahee - 8 years ago