#2 ASYA ff WHEN LOVE COMES WITH FEAR ch20=pg 66 updated 5/03/19 - Page 21

Originally posted by: Ajuzangel

Awesome update

Update soon

Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01

Finally i get to read the update

Really really loved it

I was eagerly waiting for the next part to see what happens in the party

thanks alot dear

it really means alot to me even i wait for your reviews eagerly

Tanveer always think that she can insult zoya but everytime the opposite happens.

she will never change always gonna be a cunning cat

Ayaan n Najma were nt happy to see her n she tried insulting zoya by speaking abt delhi project but in return zoya was loved n praised by all

its always a treat to write her plan getting back fired😆

Loved the meeting of zoya with her role model(rashid)

really? I tried to keep it sweet and simple😃

Zoya has really made new relationship in khan villa

Being a sis to Najma, friend to ayaan , daughter to dilshad n dost to rashid .. as ayaan said only wife relationship is left with asad..hahhaha.

hahaha yeah only one relationship is left for asad but only if our emotionally challenged hero agrees to it and here even heroine is also kind off emtionally challenged 😉

Ohh so imraan is proposing to Najma.Wowww.

yeah najma is the first one to come in relation here lets see who is the next😉

It was really funny the way zoya stopped asad from going to terrace. She broke the first two buttons of his shirt.. n Now she is gonna sew them.. i think the scene will be romantic n will bring them close.

yeah already wrote that scene now you all tell me its romantic or not 😉 when i will update it

Overall the update was beautifully written.

thanks alot it really means alot dear

I would say worth waiting.. u really have described how zoya is bonding with asad family and she is making her place in everyones heart

yes she had already made her place in everyone's heart after all she is zoya😉

Thanks a lot for the pm

And plzzz don't be soo late to update for the next part.

Can't wait to read more.

i apologize as i already made you all wait for months but exams and other mess kept me busy but will update next chapter very soon😃

P.S. I want one Romantic asya dance number in the party.. if possible

actually i tried fitting that but you know it will look odd since its an bday party so romantic dance is out of theme and also elders are there and asad is her boss it will be out of his character if it was some marriage or engegement party then i would have showed but I'm planning their dance number it will come soon in further updates sorry for now

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Nice update dear
Cake fight was good
Tanveer thought abt future but didn't know it will backfire
Zoya rashid scene was nice
Tanveer tried to degrade zoya but results was totally opposite.
Asad zoya scene was cute
Update soon plz
Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: friendsall

Now, you were not supposed to stop there but give us a double update😭

Originally posted by: anopama

Omg omg omg
very happy to read your enthusiasm dear😃
When will the next update be I cant wait for the sewing scene
even i cant wait to update it especially after i wrote it! hope u all like it
Want asya to be lost in each other and dilshad.to come and observe them and ...
okay okay okay lets see if our imagination matches in it 😉will wait for your feedback
Aww love the entire update
thnks alot it means alot
Ayaan love u the diabetes
that name is perfect for that cunning cat and yes ayaan is the best😉
Phupi dost rashid is happy he has a fan
yeah that too jabra fan according to asad😛
Ayaan is too much taunting asad did he ask.for ur review
hehehe zoya got that privilege just in 1st encounter which he doesnt doesnt got in years😆
But love asad complain she is reserved but she fitted so.well witn his family all love her but only with him she is a stammering mess
yeah poor guy 😆was getting jealous of his family members
Aww asad like the roll.zoya will play in his life WIFE
yes!!!only if he was not that emotionally challenged😛
Love the siblings moment at cake cutting
sibling bond are best always adds beauty to the scene 😆
Haha tanveer dreams keep dreaming billi
she always dreams the impossible which is never going to turn into reality😃
Love how she keep trying to put zoya down but everyone just loves her more dilshad already had a soft corner for her and then she learn it is her who saved asad
that actually added an impression of zoya for khan family unfortunately for billi
Haha najma proposal cute but zoya getting AAK from.there funny
hahahaha I'm so glad you enjoyed it dear😃

He looks dashing
hehehe shirt looks dashing😉😛
Mitwa
Cant wait for.asya together
i hope it happens soon here😊
Cont soon
will try to update asap and soo sorry to keep you all waiting dear as usual exam mess😭

Originally posted by: ksen

very nice update

loved it

looking forward for the next part

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: .ROSY.

Very well written

Hope u write like this...

God bless u my dear with more ideas!!!!😃

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs

Wow just awesome..

Really enjoyed reading every part.

N I think again u will take months to update the next part so no use telling of continue soon.

Originally posted by: enthusiastic

Superb update dear
thanks for pm...