AsYa SS: Crossed Paths- Important Notice | Pg 79| 28-11-2018 - Page 13

Originally posted by: -loving_life-

Originally posted by: MH2002

IT was nice.

So asad and zoya met.

Shireen is Asad's Chachi.

Well Zoya have a sad past in it.

Waiting for the next update.

Update soon.

PM me plz.

Thanks for the previous PM

😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good..

Originally posted by: Jasleenkaur01

Nice update

The starting of the chapter was beautifully written

And asad really shares a close bond with his family members

It will be interesting to see asad and zoya having their journey together

Soo Will zoya meet the famous business man AAK on flight or during the meeting

Continue soon and plzzz nxt time i want a long update

Thanks for the pm

~JAZ~

Originally posted by: CuteMonsta

Hello sista.. Sorry for late unres. No need for the sorry..😳

Read it last night around 3am and then fell asleep lol.. A good way or because it was boring..?

Hmm about the story.. It has progressed. Smoothly. And beautifully.

I loved it all.. Thanks a lot..your words means a lot..😳

Shireen as chachi made me surprised lol. And her taunt was sweet and Mr. AAK getting annoyed was cute. Lol. I want AAK to be little relaxed here..

On the other side, Zoya's scene was great. So she knows something about asad. That's great. But I want to know if they be in peaceful relationship or cat fights. She knew him on a proffesional basis nothing more..and about the dynamics of their relation..that u have to wait and watch...anyway the story is not typical AsYa..I guess u got what I mean..

Hmm so sitting beside each other on a flight. Seems and smells interesting lol.Hope I wont disappoint u..😳

I just grabbed a big popcorn bag and 3d goggles but then the story ended. I wanted. To read. Till the end. Of the flight scene haha. Next one will be their whole journey..

Chalo koi. Baat nai.

It was once again beautifully penned and plotted story. A. Little slow moving of course but I like the momentum. I know but I want to take it a bit slow..and they have to go a long way before love knocks their lives..

Overall 10/10.. Really..?😲(I am flattered☺️)(To be honest I am not much satisfied with this one but ths is what I could come up with all the editing..)

Continue as and when you get time. Don't neglect exams and studies. Will surely do my best..😳

Until next time, Tata lalala,

Urs cute lil (thoda big) bro,

-Cute Monsta

Originally posted by: anopama

Nice update

At least the story is unfolding the way I expected

So asya met they r seat buddies

So both r from Bhopal both have to stop in Mumbai for work and it is their companies working together

Yay

So zoya has great respect for the AAK just hasnt had the privilege to meet him

Asad family looking for a bride for him he is running but how long can he run

So he is the pillar for his family a huge one he has

But what is this pained past he has that he pretends to be happy for his family

Plz dont let it be no lost love especially a tanveer one

Let zoya comes into his life and be tht love his soulmate

Zoya also has a sad past she is alone and now she runs her abu company

So will zoya turns to be AAK dulhan arranged

Or will my asya find love and comfort in each other b4 marriage

Cont soon

Originally posted by: Always_asya

Beautiful update
Asad has his past but he has his family with him
so shireen is his chachi
Asya in same plane
so they are going to deal with each other
excited for next update
update soon
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: sasir

Loved it...