#2 AsYaFF ~ The 1st of April [Ch14-36 UndrCons] *Updt 10/1/21FFSection

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anopama

@anopama

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Posted: 8 years ago

#201

Love the update

So there was a second pretend marriage and living together

To save cost but asad did it to stop her from working at nights

He was infatuated but I believe it was love and after she reject he said infatuation

He didnt like the boyfriends or casual realtionship so he had to have had real feelings

Love having ladoo back and love his talks

Zoya should have given the pecky to pookie

Love asya talk

Love asad and sanjay talk and their loving,supportive and understanding relationship

Glad zoya is staying bcuz she realizes asad will worry more

And asad will do everything to protect her

Cont soon

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@ridhi95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#202

awesome part 😊

loved everything

loved asad zoya's convo

thanks buddy for pm

update soon😊

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ayat

@ayat20

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Posted: 8 years ago

#203

Awesome update

Hope Sanjay comes back fine

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Jasmeet(Jass)

@-jass-

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Posted: 8 years ago

#204

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Twinkle

@twinkie__

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#205

I loved this update
The biggining part was really amazing and you are so much of a good writer 🤗
Amazing!
Waiting for the next update eagerly. Khion kharaba padhna bhi alag hi hai
So drop me a pm please!

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#206

Finally finally finally I manage to read this at 2.32 A.M. To be precise.

I always had this at the back of my mind that I still have to read I still have to read.

How much I missed reading this.

Now to the update..

It was nice.

Azu is back.

Sanjay is back.

His laugh was contagious made me laugh too.

Asad is cutie when he is embarrassed lol.

Well azu can talk normal also u know.

He is quite big enough to form proper sentences.

But maybe I was too much engrossed in the past wale Asya that the present seemed a little dull.

So next time I want more more and more.

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#207

And I realize I am only 4 posts away from 15000 what better than here to finish it.

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sweet_tehs

@sweet_tehs

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: sweet_tehs
Finally finally I finished reading all the parts and yay it was a long update...BUT BUT it could have been more longer😉😆
I'm sorry many pending reviews for previous parts..
So I thought today I will post here directly rather than in p t coz then I don't end up posting here.

And yes u r and over mature child..
And look who talks about not liking over mature children🤣

Ok coming to the update I looovvveeeddd looovvved absolutely loved the update and this entire flashback sequence..
I don't know who felt this was dragging but I wanted it to go on and on.
I liked the change in Asad.
And yes he has fallen for her it quite evident..

I want to give you a big applause for attempting such a concept and doing it so brilliantly 👏

I understand it must have been difficult to write on this..

I really liked how Zoya stood for Asad against her friends even.
That was really nice how she looked out for him the entire evening.
Thank you once again for giving us the beautiful experience,

And I'm looking forward to some teasing from Sanjay 😆
With this I also know the serious part of the story is back.

So let's get back into action.

One more thing.
What happened about the contest u had for finding the mistakes?

I did not get any reply for this

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959760

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#209

Hayee!!❤️❤️
p.s. i maybe latecomer from now on BUT I LOVE ZOYA N AZZAM 🤗

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Yash

@_yash_

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#210

Thanks a lot for all those pm you sent eventhough I was quite inactive
I have come to love this story so much
I had a good time reading all those last updates I havent read.
I love the way how you are writing and where this is heading.
Keep pming me
I shall be more responsive hereafter 😊

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