#2 AsYaFF ~ The 1st of April [Ch14-36 UndrCons] *Updt 10/1/21FFSection - Page 23

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A/N if anyone really cares 😆


The fiction in no way encourages stunts that are not to be tried or pulled at home.


Back to update


ASAD YES IS AN ARTIST. And why he is an artist you'll come to know slowly.. though I have given a hint before Clue is in the mansion's name where Asad resides. 😉



The next updates are a bit graphic. Some might find it nauseous and unsettling. Apologies from beforehand because that is what the story demands. Trust me I myself felt pukish all the time. 🤢



A significant note on this update, I wrote this update when I was extremely depressed with a certain matter in life. Let me know if that depression is reflected here or not so that I can improve. 😊




One more thing.. My updates will be a bit slow because my sweetheart A.Hajnal is taking her finals... And even I am having a CUKING FRAZY schedule that tires me upto no hell. 😆 But I can post updates that are not proofread as per you liking. I'll update the proofread versions later when they are ready. So let me know if you want the proofread ones or the raw document. Majority wins. Happy voting.

For this update I would like to thank Sona Dee (sona_naksh) for helping me in getting the Punjabi lines correct. I love you Dee 🤗


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Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Unres
I'm unresing my post after so long... Prefer doing it on the laptop but since I barely use it thought will do it from phone only...

You have always had my first reactions directly but I still read your update here like it's a first and enjoy it every bit. Sometimes it's like seeing your kid grow 😆
Infact I couldn't sleep and woke at 3 30 am to read this again 😆 and went back to sleep after..

I have been loving each update more and more sometimes I actually go back to read it and even read our discussions about the update 😆
I can't wait for the remaining updates ⭐️

Love
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Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 8 years ago
WaqtZaya thumbnail
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Accha halti hoon Chugliyo mein yaad rakhna! 🤣



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Posted: 8 years ago
Me
I'm here finally after so long I res my place on the first page of the update.


La la la I'm so happy
Oh so happy

Sing with me...
Edited by sweet_tehs - 8 years ago
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I
I loved this,part.

I'm liking each update more and more,
Really it's just awesome,

Liked bits of flash back scenes too.
Edited by sweet_tehs - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice Update.
Zoya is in danger!!!!
Asad saves her.
Gun fight!!!
Whole update was lovely.
Update soon.
Thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 8 years ago
that was a thrilling update..absolutely brilliant...

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