Hello Hellooo Ankiee...😊
Seriously today I am not going to DISSECT here anything...and I read all of yours and every other updates...very patiently.. , it is just my way to show that I have read the whole thing and then point out few things which confuses me...😆
But I would like to tell you I really really loved the last two Updates...for reasons i don't know but meko bahut aache lagey...
Baki coming to this part...this part i don't know how to use correct words or form a perfect sentence...but yeh iss update mein na starting se ek undertone jaisa kuch tha ki haan ab yeh last part hai FAKE MARRIAGE ka and it felt like Asad was more aloof and silent because this was coming to an end and somewhere he was used to it and is going to miss it...yeh mera POV hai..
Baki I like the way how Genuine Zoya is...matlab i guess that Asad do like Zoya somewhere but Zoya really take Asad as her Best friend and do really care about him...and as i have mentioned this in the last comment they do notice each other actions...which gives us couple wali vibe but aisa hain nahi na...😳😆
One scene where U were talking about Asad's problem with HUGS and PDA meko yeh yaad aaya..
Aacha maine toh na pehle jab yeh padha tha toh seedhe 2nd part se start kiya tha...aaj jab laptop se dekha toh pata chala ki iska first part bhi tha...
The scene at the bar...when Asad left was really well written...totally real like in a filmy way but acceptable tha..
After that baki ka sab jaldi jaldi hua...lekin yess I really don't believe in this concept of CASUAL DATING😒..
Uske baad after was kind of like with Asad and Zoya you were also winding up this whole thing fastly...but Asad's gift to Zoya was really sweet...he is rude and in a way arrogant but to people who he cares about he is sweet to them...in a way iss story ke starting mein humey yeh pata chal gaya tha...
Ohkayy sooo this was the end...i don't know aagey kya hua unki life mein as now cut too we will be in present from next update i guess...
But yes i would like to tell you a little point over the whole message or CONCLUSION ASYA gave at the end about marriage ...which was true in every sense...and for a strange reason Asad's conclusion i liked that...and kudos to you for coming up with this concept...👏
Soo i think thoda zyada hoogaya...😳
I really liked this part...sorry if i Dissect your updates...but muaf karo par accept it I am like this only...
You are really doing great with this story...ab expectation aur increase hoogayi hai...lets see aagey kya hota hai...👍🏼
Continue soonish...😊
Take Care...😃
Chalo Hum aate haii...
Tum Se Tum Tak
Ganesh Kartikeya
